With me (All Day Long)

"Just say what you wanna say, I'm not listening anyway"

 

Story number: 11. 

Title: With me. 

Pairings: Junyoung - Dongjun.

Song:  All Day Long.

 

 

He opened his eyes in pain. Looked around the room, saw some flowers and noticed the air smelled weird. He looked down and saw his body covered in a white sheet.  Tried to move an arm, but stopped when he felt a sharp pain on his shoulder.

-You woke up.

-Ah…yes..what..?

- You had an accident, baby. Some maniac hit you with his car.

-Ah…

-I’m so happy you woke up.

-How long was I…like this?

-2 days.

-Ah… and where is my family?

-They are resting. I’m here to take care of you, baby.

-Don’t call me like that, and you don’t have to be here anyway.

-Yes, I have.

-No. I told you, we’re done.

-You’re done. I’m not.

-Aishh… Dongjun, please. I just got hit by a car, do we really need to talk about this now?

-Yes. I stayed here for two days without sleeping for you. Just for you. I’ll do anything for you, anything.

-Agh – he said feeling a strong headache- please, just leave it.  I don’t love you anymore… I’m sorry.

Dongjun fixed a bitter smile. He heard that before. One month ago when Junyoung told him that they were over. But still, those words hurt like a thousand cuts.  He won’t accept that. No he won’t. Because Junyoung was everything he ever had. His world. If he doesn’t have Junyoung…

-Ok… You don’t love me.. but…what do I do…? I love you…

-Please, don’t…

He made his smile disappear. Walked to the door, he looked back at the body lying on the hospital bed. Junyoung sighed, finally that man started to understand.  He closed his eyes at listening the sound of the door slamming, but when he opened them back, that man was the closest to his face that he could.

-If you’re not with me… -He whispered and press with force a white pillow over Junyoung’s face.

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He walked to the parking lot of the hospital, when he got to his car, he saw Junyoung’s dad just arriving.

-Ah, Dongjun-ah!

-Sir.

-Ah, thank you for coming here…I really appreciate it…even though my son and you are…you know..

-It’s ok, I’m happy to do this for him.

-Thank you so much, please came back whenever you want.

-I will.

-Ok.

-Thank you.

-Ah! –  Junyoung's dad said looking at the car- That’s a really big bent you got on your hood.-

-Ah, yes..I’ll fix that later…

 

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HoshaTree
#1
Chapter 12: This story was really creepy for some reason... but kind of hot? lol
I'm wondering now if there was some kind of symbolism in the hands painting.
Now I want to read more of this pairing ^^
hopelesswriter #2
Chapter 12: gah....this is soo sweet!! i love how the story make me have this bad feeling of what would happen n turn out i'm just being paranoid...i mean, i should've known it'd be a happy ending yet i'm still kinda tricked n i like that. Junyoung's character is awesome here, badass brat. love how he treasures that art so much which is understandable besides his reasoning of the memory, he doesn't know arts either so he has his own standard, which is cool. Thanks for the update~
ilabya19 #3
interesting~
hopelesswriter #4
Chapter 11: i knew it! the moment junyoung said they're over n dongjun said he's not, i knew it ><! omygosh...what a creep...i'm just speechless...
Thanks for the update~
hopelesswriter #5
Chapter 9: For some odd reason, when i read it first...i imagined it was Minwoo...i really could imagine him doing all those....stepping on dog poops n stuffs(sorry...i always remember the most interesting one to use as example haha)...but then i had a feeling it would be Kevin but my mind kept picturing Minwoo...ahh, i'm messed up...but i just have to say i love this character so much...you know...take the longest route back home....n stuffs...the sort of loneliness that can be felt vividly without having to announce they're lonely...i can feel it...and feeling is always better than knowing/being told...so, i really thank you for this beautiful feeling it gave...i feel like i could connect to it...n then...the story...it was really beautiful too...passing hopes through singing...n funny/cute at times...like Minwoo threatening to jump if Kevin don't sing...lol. n Kevin still believing Minwoo a ghost even when he denied it...lol. the mood n language for this one feels very..idk...poetic? romantic?...i love it though because it feels romantic without being cheesy n that's not something i'm able to do so this is really enviable....but was Kevin singing to Only One 4 U...hahah, idk actually...
Story 7 - omo...i love the setting for this one...yknow...people living in the woods...n when Kevin called Minwoo as his Mom...T^T....aww, Minwoo the messenger ghost-boy...
Thanks for the updates n keep it up^^~
HoshaTree
#6
Chapter 9: I like this one... you write Kevin so cutely ^^
azxema
#7
Chapter 7: FEELS <3
Hahaha god the cheesiness, loving it so much.
updateeee <3<3<3
HoshaTree
#8
Chapter 7: I like this sentimental Kevin lol
pikarina
#9
Chapter 5: Snshxhhxhdhd this was sooo heartbreaking. Stay stong Kebin ! Damn i notice that all of us joining this challenge have different ways of writing. Keep it up ! ^^
hopelesswriter #10
Chapter 3: This is just so cute n funny. Minwoo is such an adorable protective brother...i'd love to have him as my bro...you need to stop making my heart waver to ship them ><. lol. the ending is just lol..i love how it mirrors the earlier scene. Eunji n Minu....lol. they're just the same. Heechul will have to get used to this. xD. Thanks for sharing the cute story. xD