you bad.very bad....

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"He's playing with her..feelings.."

"GET OFF HER."

Yongguk tighten his arms around her,and he flashes his gummy smile."No I'm not."

"What did I tell you what did I tell you huh?keep him away from her.."

"They ain't doing anything to me."Yongguk speaks again.When he saw that Baekhyun was held back against him.

"HYUNG!!!what are you doing here?"Zelo,too afraid to talk in that situation,tugs on Baekhyun's sleeve.

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"This is our hideout..and I know you guys don't come here.."Himchan joins in.

"Guys..you gotta stop kidding me,that guy broke my ex's heart..and I WOULDN'T let him break any girl's heart again.especially MY FRIEND."

"We won't do anything to her."

"Like I will trust you."

"Trust us."

He sighs."Just beware of something that might happen in the future.will ya?"

"Nothing will happen hyung.."

"..Just promise that."

"Sure..we'll treat her as our own.."

"Don't do anything funny..don't even try..."

Just then Chanyeol popped out from nowhere.

"HI!!!WHAT ARE YOU PEOPLE DOING?!"

"Geez Chanyeol..stop freaking me out dude...mother of god where did YOU come from?"Himchan smacked him in the head.

"OWW!!!.. what was that for?"

"For scaring us to hell.haha..."Zelo laughs at his hyung.

"Let's go Chan.."

"I'm watching you.."Baekhyun says whilst Chanyeol drags him.

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"..Hyung..Yongguk hyung's bad isn't he??"Zelo asked Himchan on the way back.

"Yea..very bad" ...*SMACK*...

"YAH!!don't say that."

"But hyung...."

"He doesn't even like her,or liked her.I knew it."

"And he's not playing her..but she thought he was.So she told everyone bad about him.She's a "

"How did you know that hyung?"

"Because..."

 

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?