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"HYUNG!!!Yongguk hyung....there's someone outside who asked me to pass this to you.."Jongup hands a postcard to him,but Himchan snatches it before it reaches him.

"That rascal..."

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Himchan sees the person outside the school gates."yah...."

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KIM MINA!!!"he grabs her for a hug."aigoo~my baby ah....what took you so long?"

"and you didn't come to greet your brother?how long were you here??"

She explains that she's in the middle of semester's break,so she flew back to visit.

"can I walk around the school?"

"oh well..just hope that no one remembers you except for me and my friends.."

She appologized for what she did in the past,and she came back to make up for it,that's the reason why she have the guts to face Yongguk today.

"does he have a girlfriend?"She asks suddenly,while walking along the hallways together.

Himchan tells her that he seems pretty interested in this particular person,whom he's still trying to go after.

"really....how does she looks like?"

"you ask too much...silly..."he ruffles her hair.

He goes to his group,along with Mina.Yongguk doesn't seem to recognise her anymore...or is he pretending not to?

"I need to go elsewhere,catch up later..."He speaks in the middle of a conversation among themselves.

"hyung!wait!!"Zelo runs after his hyung.

"why are you following me,baby?"

"noona is back today,give her some time?"

"she has you guys to entertain with,it's doesn't matter with the number of people.."he continues walking,while Zelo just stood there with a stoned expression.you're mean..hyung....

"is he mad Himchan?"

Himchan rolls his eyes."please address me in public."

"right.op-pa."

"good girl"he pats her head."no his not,I think...and he's going to see that person again.."

"Mina?"Mina vanishes from their sight in a glimpse.

oh ..drama.......

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?