two...or three?

Complexity

"this is Kim Jongin.isn't he handsome?"Mina introduced her to Boa."He's a friend from my school in Japan."

Earlier on Mina saw Yongguk talking to Boa,and she felt jealousy again.Lucky for her,she had Jongin,to save her from causing trouble again.She purposely asked Jongin to pretend to date Boa,and after the plan suceed,she promise to leave to Japan with him.

Jongin was Mina's neighbour from her class next door,who had a slight crush on her.. he even took the next flight after her to Seoul when he overheard her conversation with her brother.

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"so Boa..I wanna date you."

"...do I even know you?"she stood there staring at the guy in front of her.

"heck you're just another popular girl in here and almost everyone knows you but you don't."Jongin spats.

"uh...I'm sorry?"

"for what?"suddenly he grabs her arm.

"what are you doing?"

"trying to date you?"

"no"

"what..why?"

"no.let go.."she yanks off his grip.

"just one time...may I have the chance?"he suceed in grabbing both her arms.

"ridiculous...."she drops her book onto his face.

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Boa walks to the class by herself,but the class was already empty when she came,since it was the beginning of practical classes and so that the students have to move to the lab.

Someone was sitting at her table,leaning against her bag on it,and toying with her book.

"you're here baby~"

"why did you ignore me earlier?"He stood up and walks close to her.

"I like you."

"....what?aren't you saying anything??.."

bull...what on earth is happening with these people??!

"actually......I don't like you."

"but why?I'm handsome,I'm smart,I'm rich,I'm nice and most importantly,everyone likes me."

oh god...

"But I don't."

just happen..heh~

"Bang Yongguk..stay away from her."

"Excuse you but I'm not going to"

Suddenly Yongguk tries to backhug her.She froze on the spot,and Baekhyun's fast reflex caused a sudden jolt on Yongguk,Boa tries to balance herself,when Baekhyun caught hold of her and at the same time Yongguk caught cuffs her wrist,and both of them stumbled backwards.

 

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?