new friends?

Complexity

"HI!!!!"

"OHHHH LOOK WHAT'VE YOU GOT HERE!!"

"A NEW FREN!!"

"cut it HIMCHAN..you're too loud..go get us our cheeji burger.."<--cheeji burger...himchan loves "CHEEJI BURGER" xDDD

"girl...did we scare you?"Yongguk placed his arm on her shoulder.

"hyung..stop trying to flirt with her.."Daehyun lifted his arm

"am not..*stares*girl..what's your name?"

*cut it out Bang..you're scaring her..."

"she's our friend...don't disturb her..."

*ignores* "am I disturbing you girl?"

*silence*

..."your name?mine's Yongguk..you can call me Jepp...*gummy smile*"

Suddenly she looks up..and the gaze was fixed at Himchan,who was queing in line at the front of the cafe to get them their "cheeji burger"..

"ah~so you like that dude?*pointing to Himchan who is still fidgeting to get his order* the name's Himchan..he's our mascot.."*gummy smiles*

"the loudspeaker just now.."

"didn't he scare you?"

.....

"...interesting....."

"yah Baek..where did you get this chick from??I've never seen her...???"

*it's because we didn't notice her ealier too..and just only I dragged her into our group now*

Boa stand up and is about to leave when.....

"hey girl where are you going without me?"Yongguk grabs onto her arm just right when she stands up...

"stop with your gummy smile..just leave her alone..."

"she's not yours Baek..spare it with us...*looks up at her*right?girl?"

"......you're noisy..."

"woah woahhh hyung..she spoke.."

Yongguk pretends to be speechless...

"let's go Boa.."Baek literally drags her away from Yongguk and his gang..

"She's...special..."

"different from those chicks that you've dated before hyung...."

"should I...become friends with her?"

"I like her,hyung"

"shutup jello.."

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author-wannab
104 streak #1
will you update? the forward looks nice
nasomi2011 #2
Chapter 8: OK, now everything makes a lot more sense. This chapter provided a lot of necessary information. Thank you for the Update!
FarahStewart #3
Chapter 8: update soon!
nasomi2011 #4
Okay, so let me get things straight:

Kim Mina is the girl in question, right? The main OC. So, she just transferred to school from the states and lives alone. Baekhyun is her next-door-neighbor and her first friend. As he brings her to meet his friends, Yongguk and BAP intercept them. He is interested in Mina. However, there is a dark history between Yongguk and Baekhyun. Apparently, they dated the same girl, who we find out is Himchan's sister--

...Oh, wait. Kim Mina is HIMCHAN's sister. So,who is Daehyun's sister? The main OC? Now, I'm a bit confused. Let me just separate the two girls as Girl A (main OC) and Girl B (the ex). So, Yongguk and Baekhyun are currently interested in Girl A, who is Daehyun's sister? And their past together was due to Girl B who is Himchan's sister. She was not a very nice girl because she was obsessed over Yongguk. Therefore, she convinced people that he was mean and turned Baekhyun against him.

Okay, so I have a few questions: Were Yongguk and Baekhyun friends before or were they always rivals? How does Girl A feel about being bounced back and forth between EXO and BAP? Why does Girl A meet Baekhyun first instead of her "brother," Daehyun?

Anyway, I hope that my observations help! Just to let you know, I'm an English major and if you want to discuss anything with me, let me know!

Update whenever you are able! ^^
JiyahJay
#5
when you are going to update this?