Are you satisfied with the ending? *bow

I’m sorry for making the story just like a shabby one…

But this story was made up from a true story. I just following the true situation and made the story. (I added some new plot but the story is 85% real story.)

Comment and subscribe!

I need to know whether it is okay or not. I can change my mistake and the shabby-things.

Give some comments okay?

*I do need comments because this is the first time I did a sad passive story…huhu…please forgive me for mistakes.*

> I have review the story and correct some errors...but I cant fix the shabby plot...I'm sorry for that! (-.-) <