Chapter 16

What Happens in Seoul
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~Third Person POV~

 

Hongki heard a knock at the door and answered it, letting Natalie inside.

 

"Hongki! Is something wrong?" she asked, looking at him worriedly, "On the phone, you sounded like it was very urgent. Are you okay?"

 

"Oh yeah, yeah, I'm fine," he replied. "Would you like something to drink?"

 

"...What?" she said, confused. "I thought you needed my help with something."

 

"That's right! I do," he replied, his face brightening. Natalie blushed as Hongki grabbed her hand and pulled her upstairs to his room. Her eyes widened as he sat her down on his bed, then went to go look for something. She looked around, marveling at Hongki's room. Beside the bed was a small nightstand with a lamp on it. There was also a desk on the other side of the room with a laptop placed on top, as well as a wide bookshelf filled with books, pictures, and awards, among other things. There was another wooden desk against the adjacent wall with different papers scattered across the surface, and a walk-in closet beside that. The room was neater than she had expected it to be.

 

"I need your opinion," Hongki said, pulling out a guitar, "...On a song I've been working on."

 

Hongki sat down on the bed beside Natalie, looking at her innocently.

 

"Oh, um...okay. Is that really all you called me here for?" she asked apprehensively.

 

He pouted at her. "Okay, okay...continue," she gave in.

 

He picked up his guitar and began to play a melody. It was gentle and calm, and Natalie listened intently as he began to sing,

 

(here's the song)

 

As Hongki sang softly, Natalie felt as if there was something more behind his voice with every note that he sang. The words made her heart beat unevenly as it fluttered in her chest. H

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sillyhappyperson
#1
this was a really cute story, i was sad reading seunghyun cutting himself,(seunghyun biased) and for the entire time through natalie's relationship with hongki was just going poor seunghyun (i'm a dreadful person to hongki, i don't give him enough love, it's all gone to seunghyun) and i really liked it and now i'll go wander and look at the rest of your stories ^.^ hehe (and if there's a sequel i'm interested in reading, hint hint, wink wink)
lildragonkpopislife #2
Please do a sequel!!! Love your stories.
Silentgirl34
#3
Wow! This story is amazing. I've read some stories about F.T Island and for me this story is ranked 2nd best! Good Luck!in writing more stories. I'll be very excited if there's a sequel.
Hwaiting!
jaceBlue #4
OMG I really really love your story! I hope I also have the same courage as yours to write my story.. Good job there ^^
Anonymous_15 #5
Such a cool and fun story.
NeonDreams
#6
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate all the love and support ♥~ ^^<br />
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-kohaku
#7
Sequel it's such a cool story :-) ^^
Jang_Deny_Chan #8
DONE!!!! Really nice ending!!!!! ^_^...but now....i want the sequellllll!!!! XDDD You know i'm not a Seung Hyun biased but i loved your story anyway!!! And now i want more..keke...take your time...you did really good with this fic...i'm sure that you'll do great with the next one!!!! ^_^ And btw...my website is finally online when you want to check it!!! http://ftislandworld.com ^_^....i'll be waiting for your new fic!!! fighting!!
SUJU4LIFE
#9
SEQUEL???!!!! YAY!!!! Have I ever mentioned how much I love you and your story? Yes? No? Maybe so? Well, I'll just tell you just in case: I FREAKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY! YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I'VE READ FROM! I LOVE YOU!! Ah-hem, I've finished fangirling.<br />
Can't wait for the sequel! And we get stories for the other members! Yay! You do not know just how happy that makes me! I need to go subscribe to you before I forget!<br />
Sadly, I go back to school on Tuesday and I will no longer have the time to read and enjoy fanfics, or life! T^T I will however somehow, someway, make time to read your fic when it's out! You can count on that! And I can't wait to read the other fic too!<br />
So, I guess I'll see you at the sequel chingu! Annyeong! *sniffle* I told myself I wasn't gonna cry! I'll miss you!! T^T, lolz :)<br />
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PS.: You don't lack in 'technique', whatever that is :P
ssweetdreamer101 #10
congradulations <3 well don't can't wait for more stories :)