One More Chance

Eternal

 

“You’re dead.”

“I can’t be. You’re joking.”

“No I am not.”

“Haha, not a funny joke. Wake me up from this dream.”

“You’re not dreaming.”

“Yes I am.”

“No you’re not.”

“Prove it to me.”

“You can fly. You have super powers. Is that normal?”

Silence

“I asked you, is that normal?”

“No.”

“There you go.”

“Then what am I? A monster?”

“No, angel. You’re an angel.”

“Why am I an angel if I’m dead?”

“You’re one of the chosen ones.”

“I don’t want to.”

“No choice.”

“Can I get back down to earth?”

“No.”

“Just for once?”

“What for?”

“I screwed up down there. I just want another chance.”

“You know there are no chances in life.”

“Just give me one. I only need one. One chance and that’s all. I’ll stay here after that.”

“What will I do if you decided to break that promise?”

“You can take my wings away. I’ll stop being an angle. I’ll stay dead.”

“You promise?”

“Yes I do.”

“I’ll give you one more chance but you only have 9 days down there.”

“9 days?!”

“That’s all I can help you.”

“Thank you.”

“Just remember, you only have one chance. One chance and that’s all. So make every second worth it.”

The voice vanished.

Luhan opened his eyes to find him looking at a blue sky full with clouds, immediately he knows, his nine days starts today.

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its not rated M, everyone. aff is crapping around. I NEVER EVEN DID TICKED THE RATED M BOX. aff is on crack =_=

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exotickaim
#1
Chapter 11: *cries* oh my god i cant oh god *sniffs*
honestlydeadd
#2
Chapter 11: I held back my tears but only when ny sister was in the room. It was such a lovely story though I thought that you should have shown the part where the get back together
anticlimatic
#3
Chapter 11: Sad!! I was bawling! But that's a really good fix you have there!
JEONJUNGK00K #4
Chapter 4: @ybaozi OH, okay thanks, will try to work hard on my other fics after this :)
soodictator
#5
Chapter 4: It's a nice story and it has a great plot, but when i try to read it everything is all over the place. My suggestion is to follow a "cleaner" writing structure so its easier to read. Great job! =)
Baozihasabubblebutt
#6
Hey, just a heads up, I'm unsubscribing to story's that are completed, and it's nothing personal, I'm just cleaning out my subscriptions. Ohkay~? :3
JEONJUNGK00K #7
@Pikachu_Min AWW THANK YOU <3 /THROWS HEARTS/
Pikachu_Min
#8
CURRENTLY BAWLING MY EYES OUT QAAAAAAAAQ LOVE IT <3