Title: [1.5/5] I’m going to be completely honest with you. ‘Where did the LOVE had gone’ makes no sense. Instead it could be, ‘Where did the Love go’ or something like that. It sort of made sense with the story but you only gave me one chapter and a little foreword, so I couldn’t really tell.  

Description/ Foreword: [2/10] It’s ok. But there was a lot of grammar mistakes and stuff. It was also just a couple of pictures, so I had nothing to review in the foreword. Try to make it a little bigger. Also I got really irritated at a particular mistake, ‘He’s the one who asked she to marry him.’ Please. Please correct it.  

Originality: [2.5/10] Um, again, I had nothing to judge you on. But from what I read, it wasn’t the most original, or the most used one. It was somewhere in between.  

Plot/ Writing: [5/30] Your plot was set well and you described the feelings well but your writing was not so impressive. It had a lot of mistakes, the tense was wrong, and the grammar was wrong. I hope you don’t take this the wrong way but, it’s not that good. But when I scrolled down to your comments, it was pretty positive.  

Characters: [7/10] The characters are fine. You only had two and they were easy to remember. I was pretty glad you put pictures of them in the foreword because it gave me a much better perspective of how the characters looked.  

Grammar/ Vocabulary: [3/25] This would be your worst area and you really, really need to improve here. There was many, many mistakes and it bugged me a lot. Some of them were: He was nice at first but why did he changed his attitude to her? Where did all the kindness had gone ? Cares Eunji a lot. Please, please correct your mistakes.  

Overall Excitement: [2/5] I was pretty excited to read this story. I’m not saying it was bad, but it was just not that good. I seriously hope you do not hate me for this, but I didn’t really like this story much.  

Extra (Poster/Background/Chapter Titles/Chapters Length): [3/5] Your chapter length was good. You poster was amazing and your background was missing. That’s all I have to say about it.  

Total Points: [26/100] OK, so yeah, that was your review and I hope you come back to chocolate cupcakes review shop. I hope you like your cupcake.   

Reviewed by: ForeverLT11

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