Title: [4.5/5]

Your title was very eye catching and I loved it. It made sense with the last chapter. Your title was very creative. I mean if I was writing a story about being perfect and using drugs to ease the pressure, I would never have named it ‘The Dark Chocolate Escape’. You are a really creative writer and when I was checking the comments, I found many stories that wanted to be reviewed and I was just looking at the titles. But when I noticed your title, I really thought it was good and I wanted to review your story.

Description/ Foreword: {10/10]

Your foreword was exactly as it was supposed to be. It was flawless and fluent and I cannot stress how much I love your foreword. So you did a very, very good job on this foreword. I like how some of your words was in Italic and I love your foreword again.

Originality: [10/10]

Your story was the most original story I have ever read in my life. What I mean by that is that I have read a lot of stories and actual books, but all of them have been repeated or has a similar storyline (even the Hunger Games). You get full points for originality. And just like the storyline, I love the idea of this story.

Plot/ Writing: [30/30]

Your plot/writing was again amazing. I am not just being too partial. The last review I did was [70/100] but I can already sense that this one is going to be 95 or above. Honestly. I read your story two times just to see if there was anything that I could correct and fix. But, I got nothing. Again, I LOVE YOUR STORY. J

Characters: [10/10]                               

You have very good characters and normally I get very mixed up with all the Asian names and when I realize that I don’t know what’s happening, I just stop reading. I have done this for about 70% of AFF stories. But your story was easy to remember and I loved it.

Grammar/ Vocabulary: [25/25]

I have no idea how you write so flawlessly, I write 2 stories on Wattpad (another story writing website) and no matter how many times I read it over, I never get all of the mistakes. You are obviously a very talented writer and I will be waiting for more stories from you.

Overall Excitement: [5/5]

I was really excited to read this story. Actually, I kind of procrastinated like I did with my previous review, but I decided to start anyway. So when I started I didn’t stop reading until I was done. Good job.

Extra (Poster/Background/Chapter Titles/Chapters Length): [5/5]

Your poster was very good and it explained why you named your story ‘The Dark Chocolate Escape’. I now get why you did that, and I think that you are very creative. I never would have thought of that until you wrote it down.

Your chapter titles are very good and really, really match the chapters. The chapters (just like the story title) were very eye catching, like ‘Early Morning Disappointment’ or ‘Knight In Not-So-Shining Armour’. So, you again did a very, very good job.

Your chapter lengths were appropriate and not too long. You did a very good job and I love this story (I had to say that).

Total Points: [99.5/100]

I love your story. (Sorry, I cannot stress that enough) You are one of the best writers I have read stories from and I think that you’re even better than authors like Suzanne Collins (no offence to her). Believe me when I say this, I am not a person who can give away anything close to 95, but your story was so good. My last review was [70/100]. I love how you make the readers feel everything that we are supposed to be feeling. You made us feel Choi Sooyun’s emotions. You are an amazing author. Again, I LOVE YOUR STORY. 

Good job, keep writing and never stop. 

Reviewed by: ForeverLT11

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