ottoke..

goodbye my love..

here's another update..I'm sorry for not updating..I been so busy these days..

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(next day began when you woke up and you didn't feel good at all because you were sick from the rain..)

you: I rather be in prison than seeing him with another girl..

eomma: how are you feeling? and who are you talking about?

you: nothing eomma..

eomma: tell me..I'm your eomma..it's best to let it out..

you: (sighs) eomma, I been in love with Jaejoong..for 5 years..

eomma: I KNEW IT!! I have a sense that something is going on..does he like you?

you: ani eomma..he has a girlfriend..he likes my best friend..

eomma: mwoh?! andwae!! mian-hae..for not being there..is that why you came home late last night?

you: nae..I saw him making out with her and I was very heartbroken..but I must be happy for him..

eomma: ahh..don't worry..he's not worth it..

you: eomma! how can I get over him? when I love him so much..

eomma: my daughter..please do not cry..

you: eomma...it hurts..it hurts..so much..

eomma: let's move away..nae?..let's forget about him and move on..

you: but eomma..

eomma: do you want to?

you: I do..but at the same time, I don't..

eomma: I'll give you some time to think...

you: nae eomma..

(your eomma went out to make soup for you as you were laying on the bed with tears)

You POV:

"mian-hae oppa..I rather leave and take the pain..

I need to spend one last moment with you.."

(at school. Jaejoong was looking for you because he felt bad of what he said)

Jaejoong: aishh..Suzy, have you seen ----ah?

Suzy: ani..wae?

Jaejoong: she's not here today..

Suzy: oh! she's really sick..she has a high fever..

Jaejoong: dae?!

(Jaejoong knew it was his fault for not taking care of her as he ran to her house)

Jaejoong: ----ah!! ----AH!!

(your eomma open the door and were shocked to see you)

eomma: Jaejoong?

Jaejoong: nae auntie..is ----ah here?

eomma: nae..she's in her room..resting..

Jaejoong: can I meet her?

eomma: (sighs) araso..

Jaejoong: kamsamida..

(Jaejoong enter in and went to your room and saw you laying like a dead person)

Jaejoong: ---ah..

(you were asleep but you can hear Jaejoong's voice whispering to you)

Jaejoong: mian-hae..I broke my promise..ottoke?..

(you couldn't hold in your tears so you got up and touch his hand)

you: Jaejoong oppa..

Jaejoong: ---ah?! mian-hae!! mian-hae!!

you: it's okay..

Jaejoong: andwae!! I must make it up to you!!

you: it's okay..

Jaejoong: ----AH!!

you: let's hang out tomorrow..since it's Saturday..

Jaejoong: nae..

you: oppa, please go back to school..I don't want you to get in trouble..

Jaejoong: andwae!!

you: araso..can you bring me my soup from downstairs?

Jaejoong: nae..

(Jaejoong stood up to get your soup and he left, you were crying wholeheartly)

You POV:

"oppa..,mian-hae..I'm going to leave you..it's for the best..

please forget me..and move on..be happy.."

(Jaejoong came in and feed you the soup)

Jaejoong: so..why the frown face?

you: nothing..I just miss my best friend..

Jaejoong: who?

you: hmm..someone else than you..

Jaejoong: mwoh?!

you: haha just kidding..

Jaejoong: good..promise me..you will never replace me..

(you were shocked because you know you have to leave him, but you faked with a smile)

you: nae oppa..I promise..

Jaejoong: good..

(You both were spending time together as Jaejoong left your house, you wrote a note to him with tears)

you: oppa..mian-hae..sarang hae..but I must move on with this pain..please..forget me..

(you were crying as you look at the pictures you took with Jaejoong and you started even more, your eomma came in)

eomma: don't worry..let's just forget him..araso?

you: nae eomma..let's leave to Busan on Sunday..I'm spending my time with him tomorrow..

eomma: araso..anything else?

you: nothing..nothing at all..

eomma: araso..

(your eomma left the room as you lay down on the bed and fell asleep, next day, you woke up and you remember the date that you are going to have..with Jaejoong)

you: I must get ready..

(you were getting ready and by the time you're finish..the bell rang as your eomma open it)

eomma: coming!

(she open the door and saw Jaejoong smiling at her)

Jaejoong: annyeong haseyo! is ---ah ready?

eomma: ah nae..----ah!!

you: coming..

(you came downstairs as Jaejoong was surprised to see you)

your ouftit:

http://img.en.china.cn/0/0,0,412,63744,500,742,028c9a5e.jpg

Jaejoong: you look..beautiful..

you: ah..gomawo..

Jaejoong: anyways..should we go?

you: nae..

(you both left the house and went to Lotte World and went on many rides and you forgot the moment that you're leaving tomorrow..the day went by fast when you and Jaejoong went to a private dinner)

Jaejoong: do you like today?

you: nae!! I do!! gomawo..

Jaejoong: that's good..

(suddenly, you heard your favorite song as Jaejoong stood up and give you a hand)

Jaejoong: do you want to dance with me?

you: nae..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kkSTAm3QZUU (listen to this song for the scene)

(you were blushing because you were dancing with someone you love..but the farewell was too much for you..)

You POV:

"oppa..this is our last dance..my love tonight will disappear..

before we say goodbye, I want to be in your arms one last time.."

(Jaejoong saw you with tears and he was worried and knew something is up)

Jaejoong: why are you crying?

you: it just feels good to be with my bestie..

Jaejoong: aww..jinja?

you: nae..

(you both were dancing smoothly and you were thinking about the lyrics and how hard it is for you to say goodbye)

Jaejoong POV:

"what is this feeling? I feel so loved and my heart kept on beating

am I falling for her? ani..I'm in love with Shin Hye..

yeah, it's just a dance..nothing special"

(the song finally end as Jaejoong took you home and you got out of the car with him)

You: gomawo..for today...

Jaejoong: no problem..

(you left but you felt sad that you're leaving tomorrow..so you ran to him and hug him)

you: oppa..gomawo..for everything..you're the best..

Jaejoong: araso..no problem..go in..it's getting late..

you: let's stay like this..for a minute..please..

Jaejoong: araso..

You POV:

"I'm going to miss your presence..I'm going to forget you..

everything that we share..the memories..will be a dream.."

(you broke the hug as you said goodbye and went inside and lay down and cried)

you: oppa!! I...I..love..you..please..forget..me..

 

 

so what do you guys think? it's very sad and I almost cried..

gosh!! this brings back so much painful memories..

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claribelmiranda #1
Chapter 20: awwwww what a sad story :( i am super affected :(
DREAMLUST_
#2
Chapter 20: So nice. Damn it, I can't stop crying. You made me cry so many times, you're great.
ukissXbelieve
#3
amazing . . .
mayseeyang52
#4
Omg, the ending is so tragic, but I love it!!! :'D
mayseeyang52
#5
Oh no!!! I don't want anything bad to happen!!!
chan92
#6
i'm cryyyyyyyyy
BananasForJae
#7
Awwww. TT.TT
PrinceJJTvxq
#8
I Like It ;DD
mayseeyang52
#9
Haha awww..so cute :D update, yeah? KAMSAMIDA!!!
mayseeyang52
#10
And yes, I'll be waiting patiently for your next update (^___^)