Beautiful

Description

a short story based on the song Beautiful (not the mv) by BEAST!

the story is basically between you and your favourite member in BEAST.

 

you are dating ___, but have been overseas for an exchange program for the last 4months. you returned to korea just in time to watch the 1st live performance of Beautiful.  This is your story between you and your chosen BEAST member.

 

you: ~~~

your chosen BEAST member: ___/him/he (etc in italics)

 

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this is my 1st fic so please comment, esp if have any likes/dislikes so that i can improve. didn't really plan to start with this, but had a sudden inspiration to write this, and wanted to start with a short fic (as i tend to write long stories), so i start getting too long-winded in my story pls tell me. thanks. =)

 

hope you enjoy! =)

Foreword

Ah, it’s been so long since you’ve been here, so long since you’ve tasted this atmosphere. Watching the fans all around you, excitedly waiting for their idols to perform, screaming their names till their voices were hoarse… it’s been too long.

“Miss ~~, this is your seat. Please enjoy yourself.”

“Kamsahamnida.”

With that, your left. Settling yourself in your V.I.P. seat, you checked the time. Oh. I’ve already missed like half of the performance?! Oh well, at least I haven’t missed hisperformance…

As if on cue, you heard the MCs announce the name of his group. Screaming wildly like all the other fans, your longing eyes hungrily searched for that familiar figure. Spotting your target, you shouted with all the breath in your lungs, “OPPA FIGHTING!”

Seeing his smile, you know he heard you. Settling in your seat again, the music started.

 

Beautiful my girl~~

My beautiful  my girl and I

So beautiful my girl

In the cube

 

Ha ha girl

This is my confession

Drop that beat

 

As the music flooded over you, so did the memories…

 

 

this is the concert you're watching: SBS Sharing Love Concert

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daragon24
#1
Update soon ;D
special23
#2
OM G!! this is so good!! such alovely and sweet story... hehee
jellozelo_ #3
don't worry ~ ^^ ;<br />
i read all your author's notes :3<br />
thanks for writing something so sweett ~
dream_keeper88
#4
omo, 2 of the fics i am reading ended today~~ kinda sad, but happy... all stories are meant to end.<br />
good job in writing first person pov... keeper finds difficulty in writing using that style ^^<br />
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what can i say, happy endings are the best!! yay!!
katastrophick
#5
So sweeeeeet! I'll be looking forward to this new story of yours (:
seraphic
#6
sooo sweet! T^T
jellozelo_ #7
THIS IS MY CONFESSION . You took it right out of Junhyung's rap~ ^^ ;
katastrophick
#8
That was really sweet! This was a cute story bb ♥ Are you planning on writing more?
jellozelo_ #9
Heheh I'm glad that I'm a reader of yours ^^ when this story ends, I'll be stalking all your other stories xD