That Man That Woman

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Description

The wedding will start soon. Bora is sitting on the one of the seats for the guests, smiling as she remembers something.

“No, I want it to be outside”

“Why?”

He tilted his head to the side, “Hmm, imagine the sunny weather, flowers, white colors and don’t forget the view, maybe beach, it must be beautiful...” He turned his head to her, “… like my bride, beautiful.”

Bora could feel her cheeks blushing of what Himchan said. She looked away but Himchan quickly held her face. “Don’t be shy. It’s not you to get shy.” Bora smacked his chest feeling annoyed, “I’m not.” Himchan chuckled seeing her reaction. He her cheek repeatedly, with a sincere smile he said,“When I say you’re beautiful, I mean it. Thank you for being in my life, Yoon Bora.”

Foreword

Okay, I know my other two stories haven't finished yet but I still make a new story.... *sigh* BUT I have to take this story out to refresh my mind :D LOL

I hope I could finish one of my two stories till the end of the year. AMEEN ><

I hope you find this story interesting and willing to read it.

As usual, Comments and Subscribe are really appreciated to help me improve.

The last but not the least special thanks to mina_lee and eoreum   for the amazing poster <3

Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1259576/eoreum-art-studio-batch-three-open-no-rules-graphics-request-posters-postershop-graphicshop-free-covershop-norules

 

Thank You ~~

Author's Thoughts
Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
anyway, happy reading!
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DalHeera #1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter #2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim #3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim #4
Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.
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