Move

That Man That Woman
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“Don’t move!”

That’s the first sentence which Himchan heard from Bora after these few years. Her voice is sounded weak but there’s a warning in there. He just remain there without moving like she says… like she wants. The gaze is so unreadable but Himchan knows what that means, so he backs away from going into the elevator. What are you expecting, huh? A welcome hug? An endearing smile?

The elevator closes much to her relieved. Bora doesn’t know she’s holding her breathe till then. She blinks her eyes repeatedly as she feels her heart beats fast. She leans on the elevator’s wall feeling devastated. Of course she will meet him, what she is expecting? They will still meet again and again and like it or not, she has to get used to this. Avoiding him will be hard except one of them quit the job but she’s sure as hell it won’t be her. The ding made her aware of her surrounding. She quickly walks out from the elevator and went outside of the building to go home right away.

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Himchan falls on his bed with a huff. He’s staring right to the ceiling blankly. He stays there still wearing his suit for a couple of minutes as a wave of memories come to his mind one by one. He closes his eyes and counts…

1

There’s a smile

2

There’s a laugh

3

There’s him

4

There’s …

His counting interrupts by a ringing phone. He groans as he sits up from the bed. He checks the time from his watch, 09.09 PM. He takes his phone as he sees the caller’s name;

Cha Imo  – Busan

“Hello imo… no, no it’s okay I just came home from working… is there something wrong?” he could feel his heart beats so fast.

He feels a wave of relieve as he hears the answer of her. He chuckles after hearing what she says, “No, Imo… of course not. You know that I love you right?... it’s okay here but I miss Busan, I think I will go back there…” He quickly reaches out his hand as Cha Imo scolds him for saying that.

“Arasseo… I’m just kidding…” then his face gets serious, “…How is she? How is my mother?”

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“Have you seen the new guy?”

“Who?”

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Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
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DalHeera
#1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter
#2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim
#4
Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.