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That Man That Woman
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When the bus arrives, the man and woman quickly get on it. They both sit on the left side in the bus. Bora surely was speechless when Himchan agreed to walk her home by taking a bus, without getting into his car. That’s what Himchan said by ‘hard to get’ tactics. She offered it and he bought it. Now they’re in the bus who starts to go to the next destination. They both are just sitting there, side to side without bothering to talk to each other. They knew each other well yet they are stranger now. How this situation is so totally different from years ago?

Bora is staring out the window, indeed the life of a city is at night. The crowded people here and there at the streets and the colorful lightings along the stores are so mesmerized despite the chilling weather in this middle of autumn. She’s smiling but then soon falters when she realizes that the window is reflecting Himchan’s face. His beautiful face that always came to her dreams. His beautiful face that she always missed yet hated too. Along with those past memories come to her mind like a wave, bombarding her with so many sweet-bitter things with the man beside her. Goddamn!

A tear falls but she quickly wipes it, doesn’t want to let Himchan knows that him, his presence still gets impact to her mind even after these years. She hates to admit it. She just…

Her mind is interrupted by Himchan’s voice, “Halmoni, please sit here.”

She turns her head as Himchan quickly stands up and lets an older woman sits there. “Ah thank you so much, young man. Ouch my back hurts already.”

Himchan smiles then he drifts his eyes outside the window while Bora is giving a smile to the halmoni.

“Ah you’re so pretty. I wish I have a daughter like you.”

Bora smiles at her compliment and says thank you. Without she thinking her eyes turn to Himchan who is exactly looking at her too. There’s something in Himchan’s eyes which make her heart shatter. The way he looks at her right now is the same expression when the last time they met. There’s something hurt and unreadable which make Bora can’t stop staring at his eyes.

“You’re so lucky young man. She’s a great catch for sure.”

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Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
anyway, happy reading!

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DalHeera
#1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter
#2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim
#4
Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.