Lost

That Man That Woman
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It’s been a week since Himchan moved from Busan to Seoul. And every day he questions his decision to move here moreover after realizing that he is in the same company as Bora. Himchan was surely surprised but then a complicated feeling quickly wrapped up his mind. There’s a happy one cause she’s still healthy and fine even after these years. There’s a guilty too. The guilty that at first he believed that that was the best for her, that he’s not the right person for her. It’s not like he wanted to but he should.

Himchan takes a new wine bottle, opens then pours it to his glass. He gulps it in one shot then takes another… again and again till he feels quite dizzy then walks to his bedroom tipsily. He’s not a drinking type but this time is worth it. It’s very worth it. He falls on the bed, doesn’t bother to change his clothes. He grunts as he slowly crawls to find a right place and in a moment sleep takes him to a dream world.

There’s a ringing from Himchan’s phone. It stops but then rings again for a few times then stops. A message appear;

From: Cha Imo - Busan

Chan-ah, why don’t you pick up my call? Are you busy? Don’t forget to come here tomorrow eoh and don’t worry about your mother, she’s fine. Call me before you go here

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“What style do you want Miss?”

“Just cut it but not too short please.”

The hairdresser smiles as she takes some equipments to start the work. Bora takes a deep breathe as she sees her reflection on the mirror, bye bye long hair!

After she walks out from the salon with a new hairstyle, she can’t help but to remind herself that this will be a new image for her right now! Today is a new start for a new Bora!

Bora is coming in to a coffee shop and sitting in an empty seat that she can find. She checks the time, it’s 1.09 pm. After ordering her menu she sees her phone again but there’s no call or message from Mihee. Mihee is forever a late person!

She groans then texts Mihee that she’s already in the shop waiting for her. She puts her phone back in to her purse and wanders her eyes to look around. The place is quite full since it’s weekend. Suddenly, her eyes widens as she gasps after realizing who she is seeing over there. A middle aged woman who is sitting with a young man who looks like some lawyer the way he dresses himself. Bora watches as the young man says something inaudible for her to hear then soon he leaves her alone. Bora spun around and still can’t believ

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Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
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DalHeera
#1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter
#2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim
#4
Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.