That Woman

That Man That Woman
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It’s like a dream for Bora to see Himchan again after three years he’s gone. Yes, gone from her life just like that. Without saying anything at all, leaving her heartbroken and hopeless. She has tried to look for him from his friends and parents, but there’s no avail. They covered their mouths shut. She even begged for them to tell her what happened, why suddenly Himchan left her? Did she do anything wrong? Didn’t he love her anymore? They even prepared everything for their upcoming wedding; the church, the gown, the food. Everything...

Now here she is, crying while driving her car leaving the wedding without a second thought. She never imagines that one day Himchan will appear before her again; with that smile and that smell. She’s just too afraid even for dreaming about it. Then to see him again after the struggling she had been through, it’s just too much for her to accept. She quickly pulls her car aside. She grips the steering wheel tightly. She has so many questions in her head right now. How can? How can he be there? Why does he have to come again?

Suddenly her phone rings, made her mind comes to the reality. She quickly wipes the tears and looks at the caller. Mihee calls her. Bora just stares at her phone for a few seconds. She is hesitant to pick it up but one thing she knows, Mihee must be worried about her. Today is her happiest day and she just realizes that she destroys it. But to come back to the wedding again, she surely can’t do it either. After the second rings, Bora finally answers it. She takes a deep breath.

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“Yes Mihee… I’m in… I’m sorry suddenly I have headache so I’m in my way home. Yes, I’m okay… don’t worry. I’ll call you again after I’ve arrived at home, okay? Yes, I promise. Bye…” with a hoarse and trembling voice she ends the call.

It’s relieved, Mihee doesn’t say anything about him. Then she looks straight and grips the steering wheel again. She can do it. After all, it’s over between both of them. He’s the one who left her. She can do it. She repeats the words again and again. Then slowly drives her car to reach her home.

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Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
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DalHeera
#1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter
#2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim
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Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.