That Man

That Man That Woman
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The alarm ringing trough the room loudly. She groans and tries to shut the alarm which is bothering her sleeping. After trying several times, the alarm goes off. She turns her body but doesn’t want to open her eyes yet. The softness and comfort of the bed sheets makes her want to return to the dream.

“Hey, wake up princess”

She quickly opens her eyes after hearing the voice. She sits up and looks around. Nothing. Nothing is here but emptiness. She sighs and immediately gets up and ties her long hair.

“How about short hair?”

The man who was reading a book, quickly drifted his eyes to her. “Short hair? Hmmm, let me see…” He rubbed his chin as if was thinking hard about it. She frowned then threw a cushion to him. He caught it then chuckled. “Is it really difficult? But whatever I’m still beautiful no matter what.” She turned her body to the mirror again, fixing her make up. He chuckled and this time closed the book and approached her.

“I prefer long hair but with you whatever it is I’ll like it…” He trailed his words, “… even if you’re bald”

She glared at him trough his reflection in the mirror. “Not funny, Kim Himchan”

It takes another minutes to find a perfect dress that she wants to wear. There’s a ring from her phone. She quickly picks it up after seeing the caller. “Hello Mihee, yes… okay I’m on my way. Don’t worry, I’ll be there soon.” She quickly hangs up the phone and out of her room. She goes to the kitchen to take some water but when she wants to open the refrigerator, she abruptly stops and looks at the shabby note on it.

“Hey, I know you must be in hurry but don’t forget to eat something before you go.”

She smiles weakly. He knew her the best.

She looks around the area after asking for some people where the room is. There, Mihee, her best friend since high school, is sitting on the stool meanwhile two women helping her to fix the make up and her dress, her wedding dress. Mihee seems unaware of her presence. She pretends to cough then Mihee turns her head. A big smile appears from her face.

“Ya! Took you so long to co

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Ersaisme
Hello readers~
To you who still reads this story i forever thank you you.
Again, I apologize for the error in grammar and i try to fix them.
anyway, happy reading!

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DalHeera
#1
Chapter 8: Wow i just found this now ;; and the story is so good so far!! I hope you'll update this story!!
AphroditeLetter
#2
Chapter 7: The story is good but is a little confusing, even for me and english is not my main language, just try to fix some grammatical mistakes here and there and you'll be fine. The plot is really good tho so, great job.
charlislekim
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, suspenseful. Love this update!!
charlislekim
#4
Chapter 1: Hmm... this sounded like an interesting story when I read your description and I was right! It is a very interesting! I'm very excited to see Bora's relationship with Himchan and why she's crying out of sadness even thought it's her wedding day :(

I would suggest you clarify more on what's happening. Going from chapter to chapter made me really confused.

And did I tell you that Bora's and Himchan's relationship is so INTERESTING TO READ. I'm so EXCITED to read their relationship progress! I mean, they're not on the best terms right now, but, nonetheless, so addicting :') I'm crying! And when Bora slapped him, I didn't know if I wanted to feel bad for Himchan or cheer for Bora. HAHA!

I'm not that great on grammar, but the biggest grammar issue in your story right now is tense agreement! Make sure you stick with either past or present tense. You switch very often in your story, which can be really confusing.