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The One I Love
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“roses are red, violets are blue.
i think i’m in love with you.” / ty love song

 

 

The tattoo shop is surprisingly cozy, with its dimmed lights and brick walls. It’s owned by one of Jaewon’s friends, a tall man with a shaved head. He courteously drags over a stool for Jennie to sit on while she watches.

 

The tattooist flicks on a bright lamp and snaps on a pair of black gloves. She watches as he rubs an alcohol drenched cotton ball over Jaewon’s skin. The scent is wistfully clinical.

 

“So you decided against getting it over your heart after all?”

 

“Jennie didn’t want to be the only one to look at it.”

 

The other man laughs.

 

He lays a paper over the crux of Jaewon’s arm, and when he lifts it an inked imprint is left behind. The corners of Jennie’s mouth lift at the sight of her name within a heart surrounded by flowers.

 

“It’s gonna be in color, right?” Jennie asks, watching as the tattooist mixes inks.

 

“Yes.” He answers, and the gun begins to whirr to life. He makes eye contact with Jaewon, a silent exchange between the two of them. “You ready?”

 

Jennie’s fingers weave into Jaewon’s free hand. She means to give him a comforting squeeze but it more or less functions as a release of her excitement.  

 

“Does it hurt?” She chirps giddily.

 

“No.” Jaewon shakes off her hand. “You don’t need to hold my hand, it’s not like this is my first tattoo.”

 

Jennie frowns, crossing her arms across her chest. Her eyes widen as she realizes the red wiped away with a cloth is more than ink. She hadn’t realized that tattoos actually bled, but it made sense since it was just thousands of micro injuries.

 

She studies Jaewon’s face, his eyebrow knit in concentration.

 

Liar. It did hurt.

 

After an hour, the whirring stops and the tattooist begins to clean his fresh creation. She wants to touch it but knows she’s not allowed.

 

“What do you think, baby?” Jaewon asks, inspecting it in the mirror for himself.

 

“It’s perfect.”

 

The colors pop against Jaewon’s delicate, pale skin. It’s delightfully tacky and Jennie’s completely overjoyed.

 

 

Jennie’s not happy when she realizes the tattoo has to be covered by a bandage as it heals.

 

She slumps against the passenger’s side of Jaewon’s car, staring out the window. He nudges her with his elbow to get her attention.

 

“I discovered something interesting the other day.” He peers at her from the corner of his eye. “Wanna guess?”

 

“Aliens.” Jennie answers curtly, continuing to pout.

 

“No, something more interesting.”

 

“What?”

 

“You know that one club I started going to? That my cousin owns?” She doesn’t know, but nods anyway. Jaewon continues, satisfied. “Well, one of the bartenders is named… drumroll, please… Hayi.”

 

Jennie sits up straight, facing toward him.

 

“Really?”

 

“Of course. But she doesn’t really seem like what you said, and I don’t know her last name. Wanna go with me to check it out anyway?”

 

“I’m not sure.” Jennie allows her body to relax back into the seat. “I don’t really care anymore.”

 

An obvious lie.

 

But if she ever saw Hayi again, she wouldn’t want Jaewon to be there. To Jennie, Jaewon represents everything Hayi hated about her. He’s selfish and reckless and spends his time spending his family’s money.

 

It would be too embarrassing for Hayi to see her with someone like that. She couldn’t handle it.

 

“Is your arm hurting?” Jaewon murmurs as she stays quiet. He tickles at the soft skin at the edge of the cast. “Did Jinwoo give you lots of good pain killers?”

 

“Why, you want some?”

 

He gives her a toothy grin as they’re interrupted by a knocking on the window. Jennie raises her head and makes eye contact with an angry blonde.

 

Jaewon swears under his breath, unbuckling Jennie’s seatbelt and then his own.

 

Lisa waits with her hands on her waist as Jaewon walks around to let

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Gracieihunna #1
Chapter 26: So did jennie end up with mino?
Number2elf #2
Chapter 26: Sometimes I feel like you thought about what's the worst that could happen and chose that, but in a sense I feel like the fact that these negatives were never ending was a light in itself. Hayi eventually came back, jaewon did, and their parents did.
Number2elf #3
Chapter 26: Reading this was almost cathartic, but it is art.
Number2elf #4
Chapter 13: This story hurts so much to read, but I keep reading. There's so much to find out
Kuro_Wol
#5
Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Oh my dear lord I've finally caught up with everything (I've been away from aff for the longest time). Gurllll this was just so beautiful omg I'm sobbing. I tell you think every time but I really loveeee your writing style (writing goals omg Dx) and you just have such a wonderful way of story telling, it wows me every time. I loved this and how you painted each character so well, they all have their distinctive traits and I admire how you wrapped up jen's relationship with every significant character in her life, and how it impacted her and the way she viewed/felt towards things that used to hurt her in the past. As always, a wonderful, wonderful job on this hfjdjsjff pls teach me how you master all these genres senpai xD
horatia
#6
Chapter 26: It’s hard to find a good story on aff nowadays but i’m glad i stumbled on yours. I finished this story in one day, too! The ending is so painfully beautiful. Love all the deep quotes you implimented. Thank you for the meaningful life lessons you poured into a really beautiful story. And your writing style is so unique and fascinating!
alcyonne
#7
Chapter 26: The ending is so beautiful that i'm just going to be optimistic and appreciate it as it is (because beaches as endings...mean a lot of things in my experience as a reader).
i like how you tied up her relationship with hayi, hanbin, jaewon + mino. nothing was left lacking, i think what we got was enough. jennie had many potential love interests here, but in the end, mino was still the focus. i love that it wasn't necessarily love pulling them along either and i'm just happy he wasn't just brushed aside. even if jennie finally found 'the one' in hanbin (that title drop though in 24:00, i may have squealed). speaking of 24:00, 'it's everything. it's everything she has ever wanted' really hit me. god, it's all jennie really wanted that i teared up. i felt that. the closure with hayi was really enlightening. again, we get another perspective and it was interesting to hear hayi's side and the parallels between her and jennie. maybe she has a point. they weren't really that different to one another. the part with hanbin made me so ughhghfjd. hanbin in here was just literally a ray of light. that's why the part about his scarred wrists punched me in the gut , then their confessions happened and i just couldn't. this story didn't let me breathe and i love it.
ah, jaewon the psychopath. he really gone and did it lmfao. it seemed he was the one lingering around. my goodness, did he do something to his tattoo of jennie's name? wouldn't be surprised though i find myself hardly sympathetic the moment he hit her. that line she said way back, rather dying than being with him for the rest of her life got me cheering lol. he's the closest to an antagonist we'll get here (tho jennie begs to differ) and again, i applaud his character implementation. all the characters here really came alive. your writing established that with a few simple sentences and interactions and it's amazing really. this is one of the few stories i've come across that relies heavily on sub-text. that's why your word count is so low in each chapter but never lacking! this is one of my goals as a writer which is why i'm marvelled with your work. this was a pleasant read and i enjoyed re-reading sentences to figure out their true meaning. also you know a story is good when it has you thinking and everything is almost quotable, LOL.
good luck with your future endeavours/writings! thanks for the effort and time taken to write this.
it was a painful but beautiful ride. until next time!
alcyonne
#8
Chapter 20: oh my god. my heart. idk what to feel. . i'm just gonna keep reading bc if i stop now idk what i'll do ajskjsjks.