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Gambling With Death
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And  with this, the edited version of GWD is done. The first time I wrote this, I spent exactly 6 months working on this story, which blows my mind because I wrote a 80k(ish) fic within 6 months, and I've written 110k words for Distant Torment in like a year, so clearly, my writing speed has decreased LOL (I blame school). Writing a murder mystery isn't easy when you have to make sure that you're not leaving any evidence out and the motives make sense haha. I remember that it was really dificult writing the last few chapters because it was a strange feeling wrapping this up and just...ending it. Now, after editing it, I feel like my writing has improved quite a bit, and I wish I had planned more with this story because it really was a good murder mystery at it's core, but it was also super inspired by Castle and Psych, which is pretty obvious.

The original version was 74,069 words (with the two bonus chapters:78,932), and after editing, it is over 81,000 words (I...did not calculate the new total lol)

Okay so, the titles of each chapters. That was also a struggle because there's only so many things that flowers can represent. I'm pretty sure at one point like 5 or 6 chapter titles were flowers representing danger because the entire time Hanxing and the gang were in danger tbh xD At least I only killed off  only one character that was relevant to the plot :D

A Single Daffodil - New beginnings; misfortune

King Protea - Transformation, signifies daring and resourcefulness

A Bed of Tulips - Fame

Delphinium - Ardent attachment

An Orange Rose - Passion, energy

Rosebay - Danger

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hamsterboo
[GWD] Withering Petals is officially completed, and with that, I'm saying goodbye to Hana, Yixing, and Baekhyun <3 I'll probably come back to edit this mess of a fic tho lmfao

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miladee__
#1
Chapter 38: I really love the dynamic of the first interaction between Yixing and Hana here. I totally can imagine the situation of how strong Hana's character is and how Yixing is feeling intimidated by her.

the sentences of who are speaking get me confused here and there but they don't change the fact that it's exceptional writing. I enjoy the story a lot and it's just the beginning <3
Hasnaa2
#2
back again to re-read this master piece !!
I am glad u fineshed editing it Ms Hamsterboo !!
chonanay
#3
Chapter 40: sebin could've been prepared to kill kris too, right? a close call
mi_nam92
#4
Chapter 66: Thank you for sharing this awesome story!
Serserexo
#5
Chapter 65: Omg if anything this is an absolute great awesome story and tar from trashy T_T it's worth the wait and read. Good on ya!
anitaklr24
#6
Chapter 64: It is so cute!
I had a great time reading it again.
davian
#7
Chapter 65: Oh my this is from Lay's point of view. I love it. Thanks