Chapter 33

I'm In Love With... My Brother??
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At the amusement park

 

All of us are really having fun... well... at least after their hectic and boring days... they are now having fun.... DBSK oppa's went at the food store because Changmin oppa keeps on whinning that he's hungry... while SHINee members are missing... well not really... some SuJu oppa's and SNSD members are busy with other rides... while us... I mean... me, Kyunnie, Sungmin oppa, Leeteuk oppa, Wookie oppa, Yesung oppa, and Hyukie oppa would be riding at the roller coaster with some other SNSD members

(the scene sounds familiar?? remember their one VCR in super show?? hehe just imagine that you're with them..)

 

On our way to the roller coaster... I can sense that some of my oppa's are nervous...

 

"c-can w-we just s-skip t-this r-ride??"

 

I looked at Yesung oppa... and he looks REALLY pale... I can't help but laugh at his looks... 

 

"Y-yah!! W-what are y-you l-laughing a-at??"

"OMO!!! even you Wookie unnie?? you're stuttering too!!"

"Y-yah!! i-it's s-scaaarrryyy!!"

"OMO!!! hahahahahahaha.... Oh my!! my oppa's are afraid!!! look even Teukie omma and Hyukie oppa..."

 

I laughed at their behavior... I never thought that they would be this afraid... I looked at Sungmin unnie... Oooppss... by the way... I called Leeteuk oppa, Sungmin oppa, Ryeowook oppa, and Kangin oppa as Teukie omma, Minnie unnie, Wookie unnie, and Kangin appa... anyway... back to what I am saying... when I look at Sungmin unnie... he just look so calm... and he and Kyunnie are even smirking at the others...

 

After a lot of persuasion... we are now in the roller coaster...

 

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpJbujlUsXo)

 

After spending the whole day at the amusement park... we all decided to eat at the near by restaurant... Kyunnie sit at my left and Jaejoong oppa sit at my right... I wonder who would sit at the other side of Kyunnie...

 

"Oppa~"

"Excuse me... Move on the other side... I'll be the one who will sit beside our beloved maknae!"

"Yah! Sungmin oppa! I come here first!"

"So? does it matter if you come here first? you're forgetting something Seohyun-ah!"

"w-what?"

"always... I repeat... ALWAYS remember that where is Kyuhyun... I'm also there! KyuMin remember?"<

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anj_yesung
#1
ending :'( happy for them <3
martian09 #2
i'll n0w read d sequel! :D

it's still a nice story after all. ^^
martian09 #3
there was a part dat i got shocked at d revelations! && how Seohyun acted like a crazy or shud i say an idiot! Hahaha.. dat's how i imagine her in d story..
KangHaeBin #4
I dont know what to say,, it's just perfectly AMAZING story :'D
YunYing
#5
Its an awesome story..... I can never write like you.....
hanneloirie #6
beloved_yulvhie: Komawo! Arigato! Thank you! Salamat! Gracias! I really appreciate your comment... :)
beloved_yulvhie #7
Oh My God. This is the second FF that can make me feel like this.
I felt the upside down in my heart. I admit it, Ur story is amaizing and it touches me deeply. Thanks for making me feel wonderful.

The story is ferfectly fit. It's not too much or less.
It's just in several part (I forgot where is it), U didn't put a "POV" of the person's next turn. So, it's a bit confusing me. I mean, I thought it's still the other's pov. when I realized it was not, then I scroll up to read it again and to understand the plot.
Well, I think that's all my comment.

For sure, u are an amaizing writer. *Good Job* ^.^
ily895
#8
i love this so mch ;]
acer-nuts99 #9
its so heartwhelming!!u really know how to make someone evil.btw new reader+subscriber