TROUBLE FOLLOWS

By: Miechan

Title [4/5]
I sense originality in this title. Also, I find it sort of different. Although, I didn’t really got the logic of the reason why it is entitled like that. Since at the very beginning, trouble was already taking place. Still, the title’s pretty good.

Foreword [5/5]
I love the foreword! It made me think of what’s the possible things that could happened.

Grammar & Spelling [20/20]
I didn’t see any grammatical errors at all. Reading your story was easy, I understood everything.

Plot [19/20]
I find the plot unique. I was seriously laughing when I read your story. It speaks in a fresh and sort-of raw voice.

Characterization [15/15]
I felt the characters along with me. They really kept me laughing and thinking. I like Seungri, T.O.P, and Jiyong’s characters the best! I really felt the realness in them!

Flow [14/15]
The flow was a bit abrupt, but I was able to understand it. The one docked point I made is a snap to fix.

Readability [5/5]
Your font name, size and color were perfect!

Overall Enjoyment [15/15]
This is a really great story! It was really funny, and it just felt so real. I would happily recommend this to all of my friends! ^^

Suggestions* [0/0]

 Total Score: [97/100]

- REVIEWED BY: ZUTRAZELLE
- DRUGON MULTI SHOP