~Eleven~

My pain, My comfort

"S-Suho-ssi?"

"Yes that's me."

"What are you doing..."

"H-hyung!" Yixing bowed respectfully. "You've come..."

"Indeed I have. I could never miss seeing my younger brother kill for the first time now can I?"

"Suho... Son, what you say... Is it true?"

"Yes. He is in fact attracted to the younger Byun's charms."

"That's a lie!" Baekhyun yelled. "He hates me! He tortured me! He almost killed me."

"Almost, but didn't. Think about it Baekhyun, he never intended to kill you. He could've done it ages ago flawlessly. But his love... No, lust for you prevented him from doing so."

"You're lying..." Baekhyun whispered. "Chanyeol... He's lying right? Please tell me it's a lie,"

"Of course. It's a lie." The taller responded.

"He's not true to his feelings. Oh well, this child here will die anyway. If you don't love him then of course, it shouldn't effect you."

"Yixing." His father called. "Do it."

"This is getting interesting..." Luhan observed while Sehun held onto him.

"Wait. I want to know one thing." Yixing said. "My mother... Why did he murder her?"

"Is that really necessary right now Yixing?"

"Yes. It is."

"He just did. That's the reason."

"Were they acquainted in the past?"

"No."

Suho smirked.

It's all lies. they were acquainted. 

"So he just killed her randomly?"

"Yes."

"I see." Yixing turned back to Baekhyun.

"Lay... Lay please..."

"I'm sorry Beakhyun. Like your father did to my mother... I shall kill you the same way, with no reason."

"It must be a mistake! Lay!"

"Yixing. I won't let you. I'll free him. I'll free everyone." Chanyeol declared 

Two guns.

The one who pulls the trigger first will succeed.

"Yixing. Do it."

His hands were still shaking. The shaking never stopped.

"You're afraid." Chanyeol observed quietly so that only the two would hear.

"I am..." The other whispered back. "Listen Chanyeol... I... I don't want to kill him."

"You think I'll believe you?"

"Is my quivering palm not enough to determine it?"

"No."

"Chanyeol." Yixing took a deep breath in. "There's a lot I have to tell you but now's too late. Shoot me."

"What?"

"Shoot me."

"Why? I thought you wanted to kill him the way his father killed your mother..."

"My father is lying. I can tell. And besides, It's the only way to save Baekhyun. I'm not blind. I know that you've loved him for a while now. Shoot me and save him. And about your mother and sister... They... They are already dead."

There. I did it. I spilled the beans.

"They what!?"

"You're fighting a battle that has already been lost."

"I... I..." Chanyeol's hands began to shake and his breathing became irregular. His legs couldn't support him and he fell to the floor.

"I'm sorry, Park." Yixing said. "I sincerely am. So please..."

He took a moment before dropping the gun and declaring loudly:

"Shoot me."

"Zhang Yixing!" His father bellowed in anger.

"Chanyeol!" Yixing pleaded stretching his arms out. "Please!"

"L-Lay..." Baekhyun said staring at the scene before him. "Ch-Chanyeol! Don't! Don't you dare! I'll never forgive you if you do!"

"Heh. I knew this was going to happen. It seems Yixing has told Chanyeol about his mother and sister's death. Father, what will you do?" Suho said.

"Watch. If Yixing does die, you'll kill both Park Chanyeol and Byun Baekhyun."

"Understood." Suho said smirking.

I have indeed been waiting for this moment, to taint my hands in Park's blood. Too bad I couldn't mess with him longer...

"Lay! Don't you dare!"

"Yi... Yixing..." Luhan started to shiver in fear.

Luhan never feared anything.

Apart from losing Yixing and Sehun.

The only two people who were dear to him.

"Yixing! No! No no no! You can't leave me!" Luhan yelled. "Don't you dare!"

"Chanyeol."

Chanyeol lifted the gun and aimed it at Yixing.

"You killed my mother... My sister. It's only fair that I take your life no?" He said, voice quivering.

"Do it."

"Chanyeol... Don't... Please..." Baekhyun's broken voice called from behind him.

"But he wants it. Why do you care anyway? He cause you to suffer." Chanyeol replied.

"So did you. But still... I don't want either of you to die. No one needs to get hurt..."

"Boy! Silence! It is necessary!" Mr Kim said.

"It isn't... It just causes more suffering. Think about it. If it's true... Then, when my father killed your wife, you're first thought was revenge. Of course, when you kill me... My friends, my Hyung, they would think to get revenge too. It just causes more blood to spill... So please..." Baekhyun broke down into sobs.

"Don't listen to him Chanyeol." Yixing said calmly. "My family used you! I used you even though your mother and sister were long dead before you could save them! We forced you to kill even though we have qualified killers to do it, I knew and I chose you out of everyone to do it... Me and Hyung... Because we wanted you to crumble and suffer just for mere entertainment!"

At this point tears were streaming down Yixing's cheek.

"So please... Just shoot me and end all of this..."

There was a gunshot.

And then all was silent...

 

"Ah... They left..." Luhan observed from the side. "At least Yixing is alive..."

Indeed, the gun Chanyeol had was in fact a smoke bomb.

"That disgusting child... After them!"

Suho sighed. He actually wanted to see if Chanyeol had the balls to shook his younger brother. But then again, he was satisfied.

The smoke started to clear...

Yixing was on his knees breathing heavily while staring down at the ground.

I'm still alive...

...

 

"Hey!" Baekhyun yelled. "You ing put me down!"

"Language Baekhyun!"

"But hyung!"

"No buts... Ah!" Baekbeom cried out in pain.

"..." Chanyeol huffed. They made it outside.

Chanyeol ran towards a car, shoving the two into the back seat.

"Hey! Where are you taking us!"

"It's not safe here. Shut up."

There was a thick silence in which Chanyeol drove them to God-knows-where...

It wasn't until a few hours passed that they found themselves in the middle of know where. They were surrounded with grass and trees and only a small little cottage with a forest behind it.

"Where is this place...?"

"They won't find us here... Hopefully."

"Where are we?" Baekbeom asked looking around.

"A place. It's just a place."

"Oh..." Baekbeom knew he didn't want to talk about it so he killed his curiosity there.

The trio stepped inside. Chanyeol flicked on a few lights.

The place was full of dust and cobwebs. And the faint smell of mould was present.

But either way, the interior was pleasant. The walls were a warm cream colour and the furniture was all sorts of shade of brown and wood colours.

"Wow..."

"We'll stay here for a while. Forget anything else."

Despite all the dust, Baekbeom took a seat on the armchair that was near glass doors which led to the back of the house, the forest.

It was dark outside and the moon was out, bright and shining.
The howls of wolves were heard.

Baekhyun let out a small yawn.

"Hyung... I think you should get some rest, you're still injured." Baekhyun said rubbing his eyes.

"I'm fine. You should sleep, look at how you're yawning." Baekbeom said smiling sincerely. "Chanyeol-ah, can you take Baekhyun please?"

Chanyeol nodded taking the other upstairs.

No words were exchanged as they walked up the flights of stairs.

None.

Chanyeol opened a door into a room that was fairly big. The walls were painted a dark teal colour and a singular wall was covered in a tea green damask wallpaper.

"Wow..." Baekhyun said observing the room.

The furniture was simple, a desk under a window, a bed beside it and a closet.

"It's still dusty... I'll be sure to clean everything up... Later on." Chanyeol said pulling out a spare change of clothes for the other. "Wear this, it's better,"

Chanyeol turned about to walk out of the room but was stopped by a thin hand around his wrist.

"M-my Hyung..." Baekhyun mumbled. "Here... Bring him here... Please..."

Chanyeol nodded leaving the other.

After a while, Baekhyun got out a few pillows from a cupboard and a spare matress and made himself comfortable on the floor as he allowed his elder brother to take the bed.

"You're still hurt, you should take the bed." Was what he said and then fell asleep.

But he never slept that night. He heard faint movement from downstairs and decided to check.

He made his way down the stairs and into the lounge where he saw the other cleaning.

"Do you... Want any help?" He offered startling the other.

"N-no... You should just sl-sleep..." Chanyeols cheeks were tainted with a light pink colour. He observed Baekhyun. How the oversized shirt he gave him slipped off his shoulders a little and how his collars were exposed. How it reached his thighs, how his smooth thin legs were beautifully displayed. How his hair was a little misplaced giving off a y but innocent look.

"I'll help you anyway, it must be hard cleaning this place alone..." Baekhyun yawned. Taking the brush off Chanyeol's hand.

"You really shouldn't Baek-"

"It's to thank you." Baekhyun said. "For saving me and my hyung."

The room was filled with a silence.

And it stayed like that for the rest of the night as the two cleaned the whole house.

Literally the whole house.

Excluding the room that Baekbeom was snoring in.

Baekhyun and Chanyeol packed the things away and finished up.

"That was hard..." Baekhyun said falling to he floor. He watched the ceiling.

They were back in the lounge and Chanyeol sighed staring at him.

It was hard not to do anything to him.

He was laying there right in front of him, his legs bare and his chest rising and falling seductively.

It only took a few seconds and Baekhyun was asleep, exhausted. Chanyeol laughed a little gently lifting up his Angel and placing him on the sofa. He placed a blanket over him and sat on the floor watching his sleeping beauty.

He didn't realise that he fell asleep there, resting his head beside Baekhyuns.

 

The sun shone through the Windows like a sassy waking Baekbeom up.

"Tch... Stupid sun..." He said squinting his eyes as he rose from the bed. He was in a bad mood.

He couldn't sleep in new places and the sun just made it worse.

Either way, Baekbeom stretched his limbs and got out of bed noticing Baekhyun wasn't in the room.

He made his way downstairs into the lounge only to see a scene which lightened his mood completely.

The two youngers were in each other's arms with a blanket lazily thrown onto them.
Strangely, they were both asleep on the hard wooden floor.

Baekbeom smiled deciding not to wake them and look for something to cook for breakfast.

A good ten minutes later , Baekhyun woke up stretching a little. He rubbed his eyes before actually opening them to see that he was sercurely resting in Chanyeol's arms, his head was resting on the other's chest and his arms were loosely wrapped around the taller's neck and their bodies were pressed together.

Beakhyun's eyes grew wide as he stared at the other's parted lips. Indecent thoughts ran through his mind and he instantly pushed the other away not caring that he woke him and ran away. His heart was beating wildly and he ran to the kitchen seeing his Hyung look around.

"H-Hyung!" He yelled, his cheeks were flushed. "You're awake!?"

"Yeah and? I always wake up before you, it's nothing unusual." The other replied casually. Inside he was riding a roller coaster laughing his off.

It was a mystery how he kept a straight face on.

Well, for someone who got full marks when it came to drama...

"Who cares about that! You should've woke me up!" Baekhyun huffed clutching his beating chest.

"But you guys looked so cute I couldn't!" His brother fangir- no, fan-boyed.

"Hyung!" The other whined. "You're so cruel,"

"Chanyeol-ah!"

"Why are you calling him!" Baekhyun hissed.

"Why shouldn't I? It's not like you guys have anything going on, there shouldn't be a problem,"

Baekhyun's jaws dropped.

"And there's literally nothing here. I'm sure you're hungry."

Baekhyun clutched his heart. It was still beating hard but it calmed down a little.

"You were calling me?" Baekhyun jumped as he heard the voice behind him. He turned to see Chanyeol, his hair was all messed up and his eyes were a little dark making Baekhyun's heart beat more wildly. Just when his heart was settling, it became more erratic.

"I... I... I have to go!" Baekhyun said running out of the room.

"What's wrong with him?"

"Oh he's just embarrassed that you guys slept together, don't worry about it." Baekbeom chuckled.

A visible wave of red passed Chanyeol's cheeks.

"Anyway, there's nothing here, we'll have to buy things but like... I left my wallet at home and I doubt the baby that just ran away has anything."

"I-it's fine... Father left us money s-somewhere here-" Chanyeol paused abruptly.

"Father? So this is your house?"

"Um..."

"It's fine if you don't want to talk about it. Let's just get something to eat, I'm hungry. And then... We have to talk."

Chanyeol knew what he meant by 'talk'. He didn't want to but it was inevitable.

Baekhyun and Baekbeom were left in the cottage as Chanyeol set out to buy things.

"You big baby." Baekbeom laughed hugging the other. They decided to sit on the veranda behind the cottage.

"Hyung..." The other whined in reply. "I'm scared..."

"Of what? Chanyeol-ah?"

"Uh... Y-yeah... J-just a week ago he was about to kill me..."

"Oh."

"A-and then suddenly all this happened..."

"It's fine. I'm sorry I never told you about father or anything... And about Chanyeol-ah, he's a good boy. I believe him,"

"I don't."

"Trust me Baek, he didn't want to kill you... He was forced."

"What if all of that was a lie?"

"Baek. I'm your older brother, I know what's best for you. Trust me. And besides, after we eat something, we'll talk about everything that happened."

"... O-okay..." It was small but it was there. A small little flare inside Baekhyun.

 

The three decided to eat out on the veranda.

It was the usual, eggs, beans, bacon, a glass of Orange juice.

Very British indeed.

They finished eating in silence.

Chanyeol took the dishes and dumped them in the sink returning to the veranda.

"So. Care to explain everything?" Baekbeom started.

Chanyeol's head was faced down.

"I'm sorry..."

"It's fine. It doesn't effect us anymore... Just tell us... Your story."

"It started ten years ago." Chanyeol mumbled. "When father left us..."

He started to remember everything that happened and it all started in the very house that he was currently in...

 

"Father where are you going!?" Chanyeol yelled. "Come back!"

His mother was crying and so was his elder sister. Being stupid and young, Chanyeol didn't really understand anything.

His mother just told him that his father went away for a while due to his job and will be back in a few months.

A few weeks went. They turned into months and then into a full year.

His father never returned.

"Eomma... You said he'd return in a few months. Where's father?"

At the mention of his fathers name, Chanyeol's mother broke down.

"Don't worry Chanyeol-ah, he will return." His sister reassured.

Just then, there was a knock on the door. Chanyeol gasped and ran to the door.

"Appa!" He shouted opening the door only to come face to face with people wearing black. "Who... Who are you people!?"

"Chanyeol!" His mother yelled. "How many times did I tell you not to open the door for strangers!"
She froze when she saw who it was at the door.

"Mrs Park no?"

"Who are you people? Are you here for my husband?"

"No, not your husband. We are here for you."

It all happened in a flash. They were at the back of a black van being taken away to somewhere.

"Eomma... I'm scared..."

"Don't be Chanyeol-ah, don't be."

They were taken to Mr Kim.

Chanyeol was taken to a separate room while his mother and sister were taken to a room and conversed with Mr Kim.

"Stay here boy." One of the men in black said. They shut the door and left Chanyeol there for so long.

The door opened and he was taken back to his mother.

"Eomma!" She had a sad smile on her face.

"Chanyeol-ah," she smiled.

They were taken to an apartment where they were going to live.

Chanyeol had to change schools and everything.

But there was something strange.

Chanyeol's mother kept forcing him to attend martial arts clubs, kendo and all sorts of clubs that will help him with self defence and fighting.

She never did allow it before but now she kept encouraging him to go.

A year after all those lessons, Chanyeol was taken to Mr Kim again.

"You'll be taught how to fight here, boy."

And so they trained him. For six years.

And then they gave him the mission.

To kill Byun Baekhyun.

He refused because he had nothing against the petite boy and he secretly loved him too.

But then they told Chanyeol, if he wanted to save my mother and sister he had to kill him.

Chanyeol didn't really understand at first but then they showed him a footage of his mother and sister trapped and beaten.

"No!" He cried out. "Okay! I'll do it! I'll kill Byun Baekhyun! Just stop!"

And that's how it started. And for two years now, he was trying to kill Baekhyun...

 

"...And that's about it..." Chanyeol finished excluding the fact that he was in love with the smaller boy in front of him.

"But now I find that my mother and sister are already dead..." Chanyeol looked up straight into Baekhyun's eyes. "I don't want to kill you Baekhyun..."

"I still don't trust you..."

"Baekhyun!" His elder brother sighed. "You really have trust issues."

"Blame it on him." Baekhyun said a little coldly. He got up and went back inside the cottage.

"I'm sorry about his behaviour. I think we should leave him for a while, after what happened yesterday."

Chanyeol nodded.

"But I still don't understand why you both are targetted." Chanyeol said.

"Oh, it was my father. He apparently killed Mr Kim's wife. And he borrowed things but has yet to pay the price. But now he's dead... We'll have to do it."

"Oh... Was... Is that it?"

"Yeah. People these days... Will never help unconditionally."

"Yeah..."

Baekhyun ran into Chanyeol's room, the one he was staying in. He ran into the corner and curled up into a small ball crying.

I don't know anymore... Chanyeol... Stop making me feel like this...

A few hours passed and Baekhyun decided to go outside, wonder the forest a little.

So he did. He didn't tell anyone that he was going.

The air was cool on his skin making goosebumbs appear. His mind was preoccupied with Chanyeol.

He doesn't really know whether he hates him or not anymore. He felt pity for him but then again he despised him. And then his heart would start pounding wildly when he saw him.

Baekhyun's thoughts clouded his mind. He didn't even know where he was going, he just let his bare, bleeding feet take him wherever.

He kept on walking deeper and deeper unaware that he lost his path. Only until he stepped into water did he snap out of his day dream. He looked around only finding trees and Autumn leaves scattering the floor. He was currently standing in the middle of a small shallow stream. The water was clear and cold. It somehow attracted Baekhyun's attention. He bent low scooping the water with his hands and splashing it onto his face.

At that point he didn't care whether he'd get a cold or not, he just wanted his mind to be clear.

Baekhyun laid down letting the cold water swim giving his skin ice cold kisses as it passed.

He loved the feeling. It wads serene and beautiful.

Baekhyun didn't realise he was like that for so long until he felt his head begin to ache.

Slowly, he lifted himself, teeth starting to chatter. Baekhyun looked around.

Great. I'm lost. And cold.

He was still clothed in Chanyeol's shirt. And his legs were still bare. But the bad thing was that he was now wet making him even more cold.

Baekhyun walked around for hours and hours trying to make his way back.

The sky was darkening quickly and the wind wasn't really helping.

Baekhyun yelled out, "Chanyeol! Hyung!"

Only the sound of the rustling trees answered him.

"Chanyeol!" He cried.

A low growl was heard behind him, followed by others.

Baekhyun gulped.

Don't turn around, don't turn around...

But in the end he turned to face a pack of wolves glaring at him.

"Um... H-hello?'

The wolf that was closest to him howled.

Alpha...

Baekhyun thought as he eyed it.

With every step he took back, the wolves would advance.

Baekhyun's back hit a tree.

.

The Alpha wolf was just about to pounce on him.

Baekhyun closed his eyes.

"Oreo! Stop!"

Baekhyun opened his eyes.

The wolves were still circled around him but we're staring at something behind him.

A brown coloured wolf was about to pounce on him again.

"Ayden! No!"

The wolf retreated a little.

Baekhyun heard footsteps getting closer.

"So here's where you are,"

Baekhyun turned to face Chanyeol. He was still in shock to even speak.

Chanyeol began to pet the black Alpha who went by the name Oreo.

"Wh-what..." Baekhyun wheezed out pointing at the wolf.

"Oh, these were my mother's," he said petting them all.

"Your... Your not normal..."

"Of course I am."

"Wolves a-aren't that submissive... It takes more than a lifetime to ta-tame one... and who the hell named that vicious one Oreo...?"

"My mom did. She named them all."

"That's freaky..."

"They're like guard dogs really. They run around the house at night keeping an eye out."

"What the..."

"Baek... Let's go back. Your lips have literally turned blue..." Chanyeol held onto the other. "And your freezing and wet! Exactly where did you go?"

"S-stream..." Baekhyun managed to say.

"You're really cold and your feet are covered in blood..." Chanyeol said Letting the other hop onto his back. He got up and took Baekhyun back.

The walk was silent. Bealhyun wrapped his arms around Chanyeol tightly. He pressed himself onto Chanyeols back feeling the heat from his body warm him up...

He blushed a little facing away.

So warm...

They came back into the house where his Hyung was sitting on veranda waiting. When he saw the two he got up.

"Baekhyun! Where did you run off to? Oh my gosh you're so cold where did you go!?"

"Hyung..." Baekhyun whispered.

"Let's get him warmed up first." Chanyeol said taking them into his sister's room. "This bedroom is the warmest. Sleep here tonight."

Baekhyun nodded as Chanyeol put him down.

"Take a shower first and then get to sleep."

Baekhyun nodded feeling Chanyeols heat leave his body.

He went to have a shower and then returned with a new change of clothes that were woolly and warm.

"Baekyun!" His brother called him from downstairs. "Come down here!"

Baekhyun didn't reply. He laid down on the bed staring up at the ceiling.

The door opened.

"Baekhyun?" Chanyeol called sitting beside him with a cup of warm lemon and honey tea. "Drink this."

Baekhyun sighed getting up and taking the cup. His hands trembled so much the tea spilt a little.

"I'll hold it," Chanyeol offered taking the cup away from him and feeding him.

"Th-thank you..." Baekhyun mumbled.

Once the cup was empty Chanyeol put it on the desk and watch Baekhyun.

"I'm so cold..." Baehyun breathed out.

"You'll probably get a fever after this. Seriously Baek, you should have told me at least so I can show you around."

"But I couldn't..."

Cause you're the thing I'm trying to get away from.

 "Why not?"

"B-because... I... I still don't trust you..."

"Baekhyun..." Chanyeol sighed. "I... What do I have to do to make you trust me?"

You have to stop making me feel this way when I'm with you...

"Uumm... Y-you have to..." Baekhyun pinched his lips together.

There was a long silence where the two were just staring at each other.

"... W-why are you looking at me like that?" Baekhyun said unable to break eye contact.

"Like what? How am I looking at you?" Chanyeol said jumping onto the bed.

"Like you want to e-eat me or something..."

"Eat you?" Chanyeol echoed, his face up close to Baekhyuns.

He wasn't planning on doing anything to the other, just scaring him a little. But what Baekhyun did shocked him.

He reached out and placed his lips fully onto Chanyeols cupping his cheeks.

It was short but to Chanyeol, it felt like a lifetime had passed.

"I... I'm... S-sorry..." Baekhyun mumbled shying away. "Y-You c-can leave I... If you want..."

Chanyeol just stayed there still in shock.

My Angel just kissed me.

He kissed me.

Oh my .

"Ch-Chanyeol..." Baekhyun mumbled staring down at the duvets. "I'm sorry , you can... L-leave- mph!"

Another kiss. Deeper more slow and long. Chanyeol poured out all the frustration and love he held for Baekhyun.

Baekhyun back fell onto the bed while Chanyeol pinned him down, kissing him deeply.

And for some reason the thing that was going through Baekhyun's head that moment was that finally he wasn't being pinned to the wall but instead to a comfy bed.

He moaned as Chanyeol began to on his bottom lip and bite.

"Guys what are you doing up here-" Baekbeom watched the two wide eyed. "I should leave shouldn't I?"

"H-Hyung..." Baekhyuns eyes widen and he pushed Chanyeol away from him. "I-it's not what you think I-"

Baekbeom smirked. "Carry on... Pretend I never came in... I'll get lost oh but don't make too much noise and wear protection or I swear Park Chanyeol I will MURDER you if you get him pregnant."

"Hyung! I'm a guy! I don't have a womb in me! And I told you, it's nothing like that!"

"... Oh yeah gosh Baek, your so girly... But still! And don't give me that 'it's nothing like that' I just saw you two kiss and- I should really leave..." The elder left the room snickering.

"Chanyeol..." Baekhyun called. "I'm sorry... I... I didn't mean to... It just happened... I-I'll make sure it never happens again. I- y-you hate me a-and I hate you and a-and I'm sorry..."

"Baek... Shut up,"

"Sh-shut up? O-okay... I... I'll shut up..."

"No, not like that as in... Just... Shut up and kiss me,"

"Eh? What?"

One kiss turned into another, and into another until they lost count and ended up laying down beside each other.

"I thought you hated me..." Baekhyun breath in between a kiss.

"It's the opposite." The other said against his lips.

"O-oh..." Baekhyun sneeze. He sneezed again and again.

"I think I'm getting a cold..."

"Of course. You were doing God knows what out in the cold," Chanyeol said hugging him. "Feeling any warmer?"

Baekhyun nodded his head snuggling closer. "Don't leave me..."

"I won't,"

"You're so warm..." Baekhyun said burying his head into Chanyeols chest...

They stayed like that... In a comforting silence just feeling each others heartbeats.

The two silently fell asleep in each other's arms...

 

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karish
#1
Chapter 36: aww thats really a beautiful story.but i cried a lot when the chapter came that baekhyun was dead nd chanyeol will go to his grave nd talk to him after reading that i cried the whole night then as the story processed im really happy they r together nd all lovely dovey .thank u sooo much for this beautiful story.i really loved it.a beautiful story bring tears streaming down thats wt happened to me.its a mix od both sad nd happy tears thank u soo sooo much.
LisaSKimberly #2
Chapter 36: Ahahahhaha cute lmao
Ski is understanding about whatever happening love that waifu :D Nice journey as expected (just the yandere Luhan/Sehun relationship is kinda disturbing) don't get me wrong Sehun is my first bias and hunhan is my EXO first ship. See you soon.
LisaSKimberly #3
Chapter 31: Alright. Tbh I was panicked and my heart ached when they both 'died' I thought the nurse was lying so I just lolol and when it's 'real' I feel so attacked.
Lay. That guy. Thank you unicorn :p yet another beautiful ending as a closure. Thank you authornim !!
LisaSKimberly #4
Chapter 20: Whattheactual-
Holysh-?!?
Some1savethebrothers
LisaSKimberly #5
Chapter 17: Someone end Baek's suffer. .too much conflicts. So many y af characters (no offense) Chanyeol >:c do ur best
LisaSKimberly #6
Chapter 6: To be honest, Comfort is literally every listeners on 7Cups lol. They act so kind and caring since the day you met them,..or suddenly turns out to advise you as if you just got out from the asylum and be the CCTV. Yep two mode, lmao. (actually I don't like their services much LIKE DUDE!! stop treating me like I'm some kind of troublesome emo child).//sob I'm Emo-L *Cries over PC because my boys r 2 precious* Anyhow, I liked the chapters so far! Why I haven't made my way to search this fanfics earlier lol.. *and it's 12am wtf am I DOIN* Ayyyyy I'm gonna hit the Next -> button till I'm done. See you!
untitledgiirl
#7
Chapter 36: Ahhhhhhhh! I've read this story twice and I can't get over how much I LOVELOVELOVE it.
Thank you for writing this! <3
ohcheerin01
#8
Chapter 36: why i cant open the link T.T
diana_parya #9
Hey^^ I Want Your permission To Translate Your fiction in Persian
Would You Let Me Please?
If You Do Just Let Me Know As Soon As Possible