reviews
character name
Username :
Love interest :
Status
Review :
accepted means nothing is wrong with your app.
pending means you have corrections to make or i'm currently reviewing your app.
App Count : 18
accepted means nothing is wrong with your app.
pending means you have corrections to make or i'm currently reviewing your app.
App Count : 18
NOVA CHAN
spontaneity :
oh sehun :
chosen
Review : reviews will dwell more on the adjustments and elaborations I may need from your application. my app is very underco so if y'all have any questions about her, sehun, or her relationship with sehun, just lemme know.
choi rinah
sugalgi :
min yoongi :
accepted
Review : hello gabby, thank you so much for your interest in the story and for applying so quickly ^^! it's fine that you made yoongi three years older since it's not a big jump. these two are so ing cute ajksdaksjdnasd, i really dig their couple trivia section haha! the quoutes you sprinkled throughout your app was fun to read, esp the ones that showcases the couples' interactions lol. i also find it cute that rinah has a gap between her teeth, it's just not an appearance quirk i ever saw in apps before. a few questions though, how far along are they in their marriage? and you mentioned yoongi actually had thoughts about being a dad, did they ever talk about it as a couple? do they do anything besides going to work or chillin as a couple? since rinah seems like a social butterfly, i find it weird you don't mention that she hangs out with her friends. also, can you expand on her interactions with junki bc what you wrote was mostly just how they felt about each other rather than actual interactions. same with yoongi and woojin's interactions, since woojin seems to be a big part of yoongi's life, i'll need a bit more details about him. and this is completely my fault, but i forgot to add a section for the friends' personality section so can u give 3 personality traits for everyone in the relationships section? is everything peachy for the couple for the duration of the story? bc at this point, their relationship is kind of stagnant; as in their marriage doesn't seem like there is room for growth. i'm completely okay if you want them cruising through their marriage in the story if chosen, just something i wanted to ask about anyways. because i have a few questions i would like to be answered, your app will be on pending for now. once again, thank you for applying and best of luck!
may 22 update : thank you for fixing up your app, the interactions between the the couple and their best friends were v cute hehe. i don't see anymore problems with your, so you're accepted!
may 22 update : thank you for fixing up your app, the interactions between the the couple and their best friends were v cute hehe. i don't see anymore problems with your, so you're accepted!
JANG INNA
iheartswag :
kang daniel :
accepted
Review : hello britz, thank you v much for your interest and application for the story ^^. i went soft as soon as i saw raba and ma tianyu in your app, i don't think i've ever seen em being used in app lol. inna and daniel's interactions are pretty cute too hehe. i do have a couple things about your app i would like to address though. first, i liked inna's personality but she still sounds kind of flat as a character. she gives me typical girl next door vibes since throughout your application, her flaws aren't really mentioned. also foodie is not a character trait. although talkative can be a flaw, the way you portrayed it in the personality makes it seem like a minor trait than a defining side of inna, i can't really see her talkative nature through the quotes you've put. and for enthusiastic, you mention that she's easily hyped for the things she likes, so i don't think enthusiastic would be a character trait of hers unless she's enthusiastic even for things she doesn't love. people being enthusiastic when it comes to things they like is intrinisic human nature. and you listed forgetful as a trait but didn't elaborate on it. i think her personality would be better if maybe you added flaws that aren't very typical for 'girl next door' vibe characters. some ideas can be materialistic, jealous, finicky, frugal; again those are just some suggestions, but you're feel free to do what you want with your personality. and moving onto daniel, again playful and talkative are moreof neutral traits than flaws, so i'd appreciate it if you can either change it to two flaws or describe to me how they are flaws for daniel. i do like the idea of their marriage though and enjoyed reading about their interactions! all of the trivias were fun to read! i also appreciate you listening out her in-laws even if it seems they don't really interact. real quick though, why is she so special at first glance to daniel? like she didn't do anything besides say hi. and it's understandable that she didn't try to seduce him right then and there y'know, they're in the middle of a family dinner lol. i have some concerns about your app that i would like to see adjusted so you'll be pending for now. again, thank you for applying and best of luck :)
Updated May 25 : sorry for taking so long to update your review! everything seems fine now so you're accepted!
Updated May 25 : sorry for taking so long to update your review! everything seems fine now so you're accepted!
lyra hwang
ichoca :
kim junmyun :
accepted
Review : hello ocha, thank you for your interest and app :) i honestly didn't expect someone to make their character a cheater, so lyra definitely makes an impression; i also really like the small detail about her getting a matching tat with jinki. it got me ed up when i read it tbh lol. poor junmyun tho kjanksjdnaskjdn. a few things i wanna address with your app though. first, you lised chummy as one of her traits but don't go into detail about it, besides saying she's friendly, which you've already listed as one of her positive traits. same with demanding, you didn't elaborate on it. although i can see how she's demanding in the rest of the app, can you explain where she draws her limits? like does she know when she's going too far or won't give a even when someone explodes in her face bc she's being ridiculous? for her best friends dasom and jourdan, can you go into more detail for their interactions if they're really important to the story? you only gave me quotes of what they said before her marriage with junmyun but if lyra was chsen, her and junmyun would have already been married. i can see they're like "angel and devils" sitting on her shoulders though. also, do they have any interactions with junmyun? can you also add minhee into the relationships section? it seems she'll be around often so i'm def interested in how the couple interacts with her. btw you didn't finish explaining junmyun's "angel" nickname from jourdan. and stating he's a in the trivia is kinda unncessary lol, esp when it seems he's no longer a when the story starts, considering his interactions with lyra. although i would've preferred if you ran the idea about her being an heiress and a model by me beforehand, it's fine that her occupation is within the showbiz life. i just wanna minimize the amount of people who wanted to make their character or l/i rich af. there's some things iw ould like you to address so your app will be pending for now. once again, thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
UPDATE MAY 31 : Thanks for making the neccessary adjustments and putting it in red! your app is accepted.
UPDATE MAY 31 : Thanks for making the neccessary adjustments and putting it in red! your app is accepted.
choi yeoreum
Finally_Home : shin hyesung :
accepted
Review : hello maggie! thank you for applying, i will be getting to your review shortly ^^ solji as fc :'), i'm soft af rn. she's also an older character which i really dig and her husband is hyesung; double soft serve af. it seems like you had a lot of fun writing the app lol, even tho as you say, rushed. i really enjoyed reading about their relationship and you constantly labeling hyesung as an old man has me dying lol. also sparrow would be a very fun addition to write about. just some things i'd like you to expand on though. you didn't elaborate on yeoreum's impulsive side and i didn't really get that feel from her in your app. you also didn't elaborate on hyesung's domineering trait; i can kind of imagine how but at the same time not really in relation with his other traits. can you also add more details for yeoreum's interactions with danson (bc that man will be a focus lol). does yeoreum have interactions with any members of shinhwa? like idk maybe jindy phoning her, begging her to bring hyesung back home or andy calling yeoreum on the low to tell her the talk hyesung did lol. i know writing about all the members can be too much, but i'd like if u can at least add minwoo into the interactions part since she you mentioned she spends a lot of time with him, moreso than the others. i had a lot of fun reading your app but there's somethings i would like to be elaborated on so you're pending for now. again, thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
Updated June 02 : Thanks for making the neccessary adjustments, your app is accepted!
Updated June 02 : Thanks for making the neccessary adjustments, your app is accepted!
JIA KIM
HealForTheHoney :
kwon jiyoung :
accepted
Review : hello honey, thank you v much for your interest and app for the story! i enjoyed the fact that jiyoung and jia met when he was in the middle of getting over his divorce, it's great that he found someone who appreciates him for who he is, after the 7 yrs of with his ex. and i like how he went from wanting to steer clear of jia to being so soft for her lol. honestly, their whole relationship has me soft af, the part where he's by her side the whole wedding, letting her sleep later than she wants just to be able to cook for her, etc. with the baby right around the corner, can i assume there will be problems arising in their relationship and how they want to parent their child? or are they both on the same page every step of the way when it comes to their child? it'd be great if you can add that part into your app for clarification purposes. i also imagined jiyoung dressing up a 3 month old in ridiculously quirky/flasmboyant clothing haha. their love story sounds realistic and chill, not something i was expectin for this story tbh haha; a pleasant surprise nonetheless. for jia's anxiety, bc i'm not familiar with anxiety attacks, just wanna double check - does jia have a trigger? or the most random things can cause her to have an anxiety attack? what happens when she's having a panic attack? i know you mention how she personally feels but can ppl see when she's in a panic attack? i can see jia being composed enough to escape to the bathroom to calm down during events but again, as i'm not too familiar with anxiety attacks, i wanted to double check. it'd be greatly appreciated if you can add more details into this part of the application bc i don't want to portray jia wrong if she's chosen. afterall, people with axniety handle them differently from each other. for her interactions with rachel, can you expand more on how rachel reacts to jia's theories and secrets? you don't really say how rachel goes about it. does she offer advice in return, is she a listener until jia got all her feelings out, etc? same with jia's relationship with inna since out of all her friends, inna will probably be the one who shows up the most tbh, i'd like if you can detail further their interactions. btw would jiyoung's ex pose as a threat to the family? considering she's still bitter and seems unwilling to let jiyoung bask in the glory of his life that he acquired for himself. there's some things i would like you to elaborate on so your app is pending for now. again thank you for applying and best of luck ^^
UPDATED JUN 06 : Thanks for making the adjustments, your app is now accepted ^^
UPDATED JUN 06 : Thanks for making the adjustments, your app is now accepted ^^
KIM GYEOUL
marshybleep :
kim namjoon : accepted
Review : hello annie, thank you so much for your interest in the story! ^^ first, i really dig that they have normal everyday jobs and are even somewhat struggling financially but not to the point where it makes their life a sunday soap opera. i can also imagine a sozen scenes where their clumsiness is going to bite them in the and they'll bicker over it until the sun sets or gyeol is drunk crying that she's tired af of the topic and wouldlike to move on from her life. its also cute that taehyung is the one bugging about babies from the couple lol, and he's working with gyeoul rn so i cann only imagine how many times he goes about it. just some things i feel like you can definitely expand on though. first, you don't clarify gyeoul's easy going personality. being easy going isn't being unaware of her surroundings and if she's going to be oblivious of her surroundings, not quite sure how she'll be deemed as a reliable person, when she's also messy and forgetful. Was there a reason that gyeoul wanted to be a teacher? just curious cause it wasn't something i expected from her lol. for her relationship with yeoreum, can you expand on how hyeoul is the support? is she a listener, does she talk and curse jihoon out of this universe until yeoreum is feeling better and laughing at her dramatized remarks? same with her interactions with taehung since he'll most likely be a frequently occuring character. how can ppl tell immeditately that namjoon andhyeoul are inexperienced in life and relationships? what do they do that gives that sort of impression? in what ways is namjoon sensitive? what does he usually get irriated about? because there's some things i would like to expand and clarify on, your app will be pending for now. thank you once again for applying and best of luck! :)
UPDATED JUN 02 : Thanks for making the neccesary changes. Your app is now accepted!
UPDATED JUN 02 : Thanks for making the neccesary changes. Your app is now accepted!
AHN SOOJIN
iismomo :
kim minseok :
accepted
Review : hey momo, thank you v much for applying to this story! ^^ hani is honestly the perfect face claim for your character, i can imagine her personality and interactions with the world really well. i also love the fact that soojin was the go getter haha, its v cute. love how she lives to embarass her daughter lmao. her relationship with minseok is also very cute!! i love the vibe of the family. their relationship and problems were also realistic enough to not be too angsty and out of reach with the story. from what i see, i didn't have any questions or clarifications i needed from your app, so you're accepted! thanks again for applying and best of luck :D
lee eunkyung
Hyo231 :
lee donghae : accepted
Review : hello pam, thank you so much for your interest and app for the story!! donghae as hubby and tiffany as fc askdjansdkjansdkasd. i'm soft omg. i love that they're older characters too!! thanks for including those quotes in the personality sections, it does help to visualize the characters further. it would be so much fun writing about the couple along with eunhyuk and jaein haha. i can imagine all the rowdiness and bada is just like huh, what's going on. i can also imagine just how much love she gets, i'm fuzzy just thinking about all their family moments haha. i didn't see anything i needed clarification for but i have a few quick question. how big of a company is sugaries, and does eunkyung also handle the logistics of the company or is she really just a designer? how long have they been married at the start of the story? i vaguely remember seeing 2 years but just to double check. these are small qs so it's fine if you just answer in the comments section so you're still accepted. again thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
shin yejin
Indubutably :
nam joohyuk :
accepted
Review : hey christine, thank so much for applying for another of my stories even tho i always fail to deliver, i'm truly grateful!! also YITIAN ?!?! KAJSNDKJANSDSD. BRUHHHH. i would give 19283123 bonus pts if i did them lmao. i was so obsessed with a love so beautiful, i rewatched it like 39 times? lmao. also, can i just say i teared while reading yejin's backstory - it was so sad, esp with 12 y.o yejin trying to keep the fam together. huhu. her relationship with joohyuk sounds so loving and sweet - intimitate - if we don't focus on joohyuk's past mistake and the arugments that seem to be a daily occurance. i adored all the characters you put in your app tbh, yewon the baby bear, his gf being eunji, and even jinri. the love story between joohyuk and yejin was honestly, cute af. i adore joohyuk's unwavering feelings for yejin. i can also understand yejin's complicated feelings with joohyuk though and i'd say she is defiitely more kind than me to remain with him, whether it was an accident or not. their relationship was sweet and realistic, i really enjoyed reading about them. although i don't completely see the vibe the couple give off being part of the story, it's also definitely something i would wanna write about. i don't see any problems with your app though, so you're accepted. again, thank you for applying and best of luck! ^^
chae joowon
sirius- :
lee jieun :
accepted
Review : hello silvi, thanks for applying!! and first off, A MALE CHARACTER AKSJDNASD BLESS YOU OMG. i'm currently reading your app so review should be up soon! i'm honored that this is your comeback app after a while! i really enjoyed reading about hwo whipped joowon is for jieun lmao. i know jieun loves joowon with all her being, it's just more obvious in the way joowon showcases it i guess. i also like how his character being cooperative can borderline be a flaw for him, but it also ties in with why he's great on a sports team that focuses on teamwork. i also like how their marriage came about so naturally and that it was influenced from an ep of how i met your mother haha. i actually started the show but it's not really my type of thing so i haven't gotten back to it tbh. anyways, i enjoyed reading your app and don't see anything that needs clarifications so your app is accepted. again, thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
katherine ahn yeseul
CrazyLady22 :
kim junmyun :
accepted
Review : hello sky, thank you so much for your interest and app for the story!! your review should be up shortly ^^ i really enjoyed reading the text messages and quotes of the charcters, they were really amusing haha. definitely sounds like a couple i wanna write about in the story tbh. and they're best friends turned lovers akjsdaskdj. im weak af for those lol. there's some things i would like clarifications for though. Can you expand on yeseul's personality more bc you basically just stated she is so and so, without saying how she is that way, especially for the flaws section. how is she erratic? how is she petty? to whom is she petty around? esp since she's supposedly hella patient so i'm assuming if someone does bring about her pettiness, it's over something big? you also added other traits of yeseul throughout the app like weird and insecure so can you add that to her personality section and expand on that as well? same with junmyun's personality, you just state hes this and this, but don't say how he is that way so i would like you to expand on his personlaity section as well. as for jumyun cheating, was it just a random occurance? did something drive him to eventually sleep with the woman? how did it happen? cause im asssuming it's going to be hapenning later on during the story. and if the woman he cheated with is a frequent part of junmyun's life, can u add her to the relationships section? if not and she's just a random woman, just lemme know how and why everything went down. because there are some things i would like you to address, your app is pending for now. again, thanks for applying and best of luckk! :)
UPDATED JUNE 12 : thanks for making the adjustments, sorry for the late update! your app is accepted.
UPDATED JUNE 12 : thanks for making the adjustments, sorry for the late update! your app is accepted.
ong bohee
monbxbe :
ong seungwoo :
accepted
Review : hello josi! thank you so much for applying :D! i'm actually in tears from bohee and seungwoo's relationship :'))))). i love how responsible seungwoo is, and can definitely sense why bohee trusts him so much despie their lack of interaction prior to the marriage. i also dig that they're newly weds since most of their relationship will progress in the story hehe. i enjoyed reading your app, i think i was fully into their love story! i'm sad af about seungwoo's friends :'(( . the only thing with your app is can you elaborate on her interactions with the ppl in her relationships? they sound kind of general atm, hyerin and inhye are the older sisters she never had, nayoung and kyungwon are there during the pregnancy every step of the way, etc. since they're her best friends, i'd like some more differentiation between their interactions. otherwise, one of the best friend roles can be axed. also, can you expand on their interactions together and individual lifestyles when they're not at work? there's some things i would like you to expand on so you're pending for now. thank you for applying and best of luck ^^.
UPDATED JUN 05 : thanks for making the adjustments so quickly! your app is accpeted :)
UPDATED JUN 05 : thanks for making the adjustments so quickly! your app is accpeted :)
park inhye
kim jin :
park dojoon :
accepted
Review : hey jocelyn! i actually didn't expect you to apply with what's happening in your life rn so i really do appreciate the support :). i'm currently listening to the rose as i read your review before i forget again lol. but boyyyy, their song baby... wow. inhye has the same bday as my friend! i wasn't expenting an app where the characters get remarried to each other so inhye def makes an impression. and it's probs cause i'm also an aquarius lmao but i can understand inhye and see how her somewhat rebellious and willful streak can be a problem. i also find it cute that dojoon despises cursing so much but inhye has no filter. i know it's a somewhat of a big problem for them and one of the main reasons dojoon's parents don't like inhye. the only thing i would like with your app is that you expand a bit more on inhye and dojoon's interactions. with both busy with their own jobs and living apart, they're probs not meeting a lot right? do they text often? if they do get together, what do they do? do they ever go on dates?that's the only thing but bc interactions is an important part, inhye will be pending for now. again, thank you for applying and best of luck ^^
UPDATED JUNE 08 : thanks for making the changes so quickly. inhye is accepted!
UPDATED JUNE 08 : thanks for making the changes so quickly. inhye is accepted!
lee hyemi
hyemicloud :
cha hakyeon :
accepted
Review : hiya mimi! thank you for your interest and app for my story ^^ first off, ayyyyyyyy VIXXX YAASSS. also, i just started are you human too and vixx's ost song got me shook lol. back to hyemi, her relationship with hakyeon is cute and their relationship being boss and secret bride is amusing as well. that coffee nickname omg my heart. i like how hakyeon tries to push her buttons lmao, esp when it comes to pda. neck chop as hakyeon's hobby came outta nowhere lmaooooo. i l ike it tho! i didn't see any errors with hyemi so she is accepted! thanks again for applying and best of luck! ^^
shin jungeun
Lysa3Kyu :
moon taeil :
accepted
Review : hello laisa, thanks for applying! your review should be up soon ^^ bc there's a time constraint, review will be short and for any questions or things i need you to fix. i'm not quite sure i understood what u meant in the 'profanity' part? jungeun is good at cursing her patients out? or she's good at holding it in - u did mention she's always cursing but i don't think that's appropriate for a medical officer to do. i would also like more details on her interactions with her parents. i don't see any other problems with your so jungeun is accepted. try to fix it asap tho. thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
hwang seyoon
guguvixx :
lee juyeon :
accepted
Review : hello sansan! thank you very much for applying, i'll try to get to the review soon ^^ i'm keeping reviews short, so it'll only focus on things that are wrong with the apps. but since i saw no problems with your app, seyoon is accapted! thanks fro applying and best of luck ^^.
han yeonheee
Layni17 :
jang seojun :
accepted
Review : hey tsuki! thanks for your interest and app for the story, your review should be coming out soon. plz note that i'll just be going over errors (if any) in the app to keep the review short. i adore the little details u added esp the std test thing btw. i didn't find anything wrong with your app so yeonhee is accepted! thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
cho edward
Golden-Blood :
park sojin : accepted
Review : hello sun! thanks for your interest and app for the story, your review should be out soon. i'll only go through errors, if any, in the app to keep the review to the point. i didn't see any errors with your app edward is accepted! again thanks for applying and best of luck ^^
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