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Chapter 4

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"italics bold" - a conversation is being held.

'italics' - thoughts are being convey and/or there is a conversation via mind link. 

“NO, wait Suho don’t do it!!!”

            ‘Brace yourself guys, I think this idiot is going to do ‘submission’, don’t worry I’ll try to stop the command from effecting you guys.’ The girl’s companions nod in understanding discreetly to their leader, they stood their ground behind her, bracing themselves to feel some underling pain from the command.

            Opening his eyes which were once brown turned in to bloodshot-red color, indicating that he has started the command; making everyone in lower ranking those that included his pack and the other 2 packs of well kneel in pain. Yet when he direct his gaze towards the strangers his victorious smile fell off his face, his face turned into a mixture of emotions; shock, confusion, be wilderness, and lastly anger. Seeing her and her companions looking at him blankly as if he was not even doing the command called ‘submission’ at all.

            He looked around the arena to see, to confirm is he was indeed doing the command, seeing the rest of the spectators and his clan in pain. He saw everyone in the lower ranks holding themselves, except for the ones that were in the same ranking or as powerful as Suho, they weren’t in pain they were becoming frustrated that some other someone is commanding and bringing pain to their pack that is not from their pack. Yet he turned back and looked at the trio just standing there not moving just watching as if they are waiting for him to do something.

            Confusion entered him. Why was his command not affecting the intruders? Well for once the alpha call does not affect our strangers, for her it’s just annoying like a little mosquito buzzing near her ears over and over again, and her companions? Well, they are supposed to be affected like every other wolf out there but thanks to their leader’s strength and her abilities she was quickly able to make a mind connection with both of them and her mind acted as a barrier towards Suho's command making it useless and also making them sigh in relief and stand proudly next to their leader.

            Feeling a hand on his shoulder Suho turned around to see Kris shaking his head in signaling to stop the command. Closing his eyes and taking a deep breath, he open his eyes a

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10/13/2015 have edited and posted CH 9,10,11 .. thanks for reading :)

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parkminjeen
#1
Chapter 20: Hiii avid reader of yours here! aff led me back here and I still remember loving this story since it was published and up until now~ I hope you'll come back soon though and hoping you're fine and safe!
Lolypop123 #2
Chapter 20: Ok,update if u can ^3^
NSBL_97 #3
Chapter 20: Romance for this time hehehe
aninha
#4
Chapter 18: Romance please
bookworm1 #5
Author-nim!!!!! Don't worry, it's worth the wait ;) And good luck for your tests!!
Ah, Jiyoung <3 Missed her so much!! Whatever happens, I'm on her side as always!!!! And who is that wolf that appeared in the end? Is he related to that dark character of the D-clan that appeared in chapter 14????
Thanks for another chapter and fighting :) !!!
sher1994 #6
Chapter 17: Enjoying the story, appreciate the update.

Education comes first so concentrate on your studies and play later. All the best on your tests.
sher1994 #7
Chapter 16: Enjoying the story tremendously. Eagerly awaiting your update.........UPDATE SOON!
bookworm1 #8
Chapter 16: Wow, you made my day today author-nim!!! Two chapters in a row!!! :D
I know I initially voted for Kirs's POV but I really enjoyed reading Kwon's POV (Ahh, Jiyoung <3, whatever may happen, I'm helplessly on team Cobalt after all!!!)
By the way, what happened to her??? Is she discovering another ability or just unleashing her mighty wolf powers? I have to admit I kind of got a bit intimidated by this side of her yet I find it charming at the same time. She's so powerful!!! But hey, that's why we like her, don't we? ;)
And poor Suho, he still isn't realizing there's nothing he can do against our heroine...*sighs* :D
Ah, Jaebummie, don't give up buddy!!! You don't know who she's going to pick if she does!

Well, author-nim, as always, thank you soooo much for writing such great chapters!!!!
Fighting ;)
justakissme3010 #9
Chapter 15: Chapt 15: Jiyoung POV!!!!!!!!
daweaselishere #10
Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Jiyoung's POV would be great thank you!!!