Chapter 32 3/3

Danse Macabre

Jongin pored over the papers in the folder, the words blending together until he had no clue what was going on. There were dozens of neatly written notes and details about his schedules and candid photos of him at Hyoyeon's bar, with Jongdae and Sehun, standing around, finishing up a job. Chills coursed through his body as he frantically flipped through the pages, pieces of paper fluttering to the ground like feathers. He had unconsciously stood up and now gripped information on his family with shaking hands, knuckles turning white.

"What is this? What is this what is this," he mumbled, chanting it as if the mantra could change things.

And the folder had been so badly hidden. It wasn't even hidden. Kyungsoo didn't even care to keep it hidden. Did he want Jongin to find out? Did he think Jongin would never be able to hide it? Was he a stalker? Was he a police? Was he the enemy?

Questions whipped through his mind and he didn't even hear the door open over his inner turmoil.

 

"What are you doing."

The voice cut into Jongin's mind and it physically hurt. He turned around, dropping the rest of the papers onto the ground, and faced Kyungsoo. "What is all this?" he asked, voice cracking with hysteria, although he tried to keep calm. There must be a reason, an explanation for all this.

As if reading his mind, Kyungsoo said, "I guess I should explain, huh?"

"You think?" Jongin retorted, shifting from his left foot to the right.

The suddenly ominous man carefully sat the bags of groceries (so mundane, so cheerful, with a box of Pocky sticks poking out of the corner) and approached the other.

Jongin gulped, waiting; his heart seemed to stop beating. He braced himself for whatever words would come next, but what he didn't expect was

a jabbing pain

and darkness.

 

 


there are 3 more chapters + an epilogue.

get ready for the angst!

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Jeondelabois #1
Chapter 16: I freaking new it about tao
Jeondelabois #2
Chapter 13: Please let tao be real inlove with sehun or I freak out. Thwy are so cute djdbdjfv
illjae
#3
Chapter 16: the last bit... excuse me? o.o
illjae
#4
Chapter 8: i love sehun’s character here so much LOL
KaiOlly
#5
Chapter 42: After reading the explanation, i have a few questions, does luhan love minseok like how suho the emperor and ksoo/minseok did to their lover? Will ksoo/minseok meet a reincarnated ji? Or will he jump in the water, meet sehun and was killed by the sirens? I never wouldve thought that jongdae might be the reincarnation of zhongda. Did himchan reincarnate or was a reincarnation of someone? I asked a lot knowing that all of the question doesnt really realte with the current story... Hahahah but ur nice, so i think maybe ull give answers. :)
KaiOlly
#6
Chapter 41: ASGJKL AAARRRGGGHHH!! I finished this!!! Whoaaa for a fic that has this lot of chaps, but short ones, i sure do finish it fast. So, it shows that u, authornim has succeed in making me interested throughout the whole story! U should be proud, because i rarely keep my interest in stories that i read. I usually jump from one to another. Hahahah yeah, not really a good reader eh... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Okayyy first of all.... WHERE THE HELL IS KAISOO???? Is this even kaisoo??? I mean, come on bruh, he killed ji! Then said the he loves him in the end?! How is that even possible? And, oh my poor nini o(╥﹏╥)o such a gruesome way to die. Being torn was one, but being torn by your own lover who faked his identity and killed u just like u did, now thats a whole new diff level. I wanted to say, lets have a diff ending for kaisoo in another lifetime, but then minseok said lets not meet again in another lifetime, that got me like .....oh.... Okay fine. And i guess minseok in this is the reincarnation of minseok who died in vain. So, should i imagine minseok falling in love with ji or ksoo falling in love ji? Their real faces now.
Secondly, what the hell was the bonus supposed to mean????? Hmmmmmm i thought that sehun went to the sirens and met luhan and hunhan happened? Then why did he come across , who, lay? And its kris wasnt it. Yifan.
I seriously think that u have a GREAT GOOD JOB with this! Ur style matches the genre, and the way u not drag things and suddenly abrupt things are also a plus point. Id say that the plot was smooth. But i think u could avoid giving geart attacks to ur readers if after the death of one character u put a pause to it. But then, it wouldnt be the if u did. So..... I dont really know what im sayin. But what i meant was, it was good. It was nice. It was daebak!!! I enjoyed! Really! The bad thing was how u keep on giving puzzles for us to solve, even tho the story is long finished. Yeah, thats bad but good. (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ sorry for the spam. It just so happens when i read this, no one is commenting so yeah....
KaiOlly
#7
Chapter 34: Oh my god KYNGSOO !!! Fck...this is all getting twisted (ノಠ皿ಠ)ノ
KaiOlly
#8
Chapter 27: This chap sits on the #2 place of my fav kaisoo scene. The moment where junmyeon told ksoo the truth, and the moment ksoo called out his name. Thats just sooooo cuteeee and finally, its jongin being jongin
KaiOlly
#9
Chapter 19: SH*T KIM JONGDAE!!!!!
KaiOlly
#10
Chapter 8: Awwwhh the pic of tao kissing candy~ so manly~~ and those glasses, his hair, his coat! (★‿★)