ANGEL EYES

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This was my second fic on AFF

I’m sorry for my English back then. I did try my best >~<

 

Characters:

Fire demons:

Kris – most powerful of the fire clan, rules fire, can fly, dragon              Chanyeol – Kris’s younger brother, rules fire, can fly, phoenix

                                

 

Minzy – Kris’ and Chanyeol’s younger sister, has ability to grow beautiful, black wings 

 

Tao – power  - can travel through time but has no impact on past or future, Sehun’s older brother, currently fire clan’s slave

 

 

Water demons:

Suho – heir of the clan, rules water, rain, white-blue dragon without wings  and only front claws, semi dragon and eel

 

Xiumin – Suho’s cousin, rules ice, frost and snow, white tiger

 

 

Wind demons:

Sehun – heir of the clan, rules wind, white fox, seeks revenge for his brother’s death (thinks Tao’s dead)

CL - Sehun's and Tao's older sister, rules wind, but not as powerful as Sehun, can't accept Tao's death and how Sehun changed since that

 

Sehun’s & CL's cousins:

D.O. – power – outrageous strength, Kai’s brother, black wolf               Kai – power – teleportation, D.O.’s younger brother, black wolf

   

 

Sky gods (4 brothers):

  Baekhyun – power – light, black puma                 Chen – power – lightning, likes to play and make mere people fear him, black puma

                          

Baek and Chen has the same mother, their father found himself another wife after Luhan’s and Lay’s mother died, however her tribe wasn’t so prestigious.

 

Lay – power – healing, unicorn, weekness – helping people, has a good heart just like his mother

 

Luhan – white hair, power – telekinesis, the oldest one of the four sons, heir of the sky gods clan, most powerful, the only one who saw his mother’s death but has problems with remembering exactly what happened, white dragon – his wings has long white feathers, fears to use all his power, afraid of losing control

 

Heroine:

Park Bom – 17 years old, high school girl, her mother died when she was 6, living only with her father, feels a special bound with nature

 

Foreword

Bom POV

The same dream again???

I’m 6 years old and am standing in front of my house… it’s spring… just like my name… My mom named me like that coz I was born on 24th March. She always said I was hers most precious gift from mother nature.

I can’t help but smile to myself remembering her warm, motherly smile. Cherry blossoms falling… it’s snowing with  beautiful white and pink petals. I hope mommy will be home soon.

I took my ball and tried to bounce it on the fence… “Be careful Bom’ah!” I heard my dad who was gardening at the moment. “Neh daddy!” I answered.

… but then my ball rolled on the street… Omo! I turned back but my father was in the garage right now. ‘I’ll bring it back in a blink of an eye ‘ I thought and walked through the gate.

Here it is! I run quickly and grabbed my blue ball… but when I turned back I heard someone crying…

After looking around I couldn’t see anyone… I hope daddy won’t be mad at me…

It was quiet for a moment but suddenly I heard that whine that could tear my heart apart again.

Here I saw a kid sitting on the ground covering his face with hands… he was blonde but his hair was almost white…

I wasn’t the only one who were interested in him. My neighbor’s sons- the bullies, were standing next to him and making fun of his looks. One of them grabbed and pulled that boy’s hair… those jerks!

“Jiyoung-ah! Seunghun-ah! Leave him! I’ll tell everything to your mother!” I yelled with  high pitched voice and thrown my ball at them. Thank God they were younger than me and run away.

I took my ball and put my hand on that boy’s back. Even his clothes were outrageous…white shirt, pants, boots but all covered in dirt…and some deeply red stains…

“Where’s your mom???” I asked but he only looked at me with pitch black eyes. His empty stare startled me for a moment but then he started crying even louder.

“What should I do??” I asked myself out loud. I remembered words that my mom was always telling me… Since I was born she assuaged me with those words:

“No matter what happens

Even when the sky is falling down

I’ll promise you

That I’ll never let you go”

I said and grasped his hands. He looked at me “Really??” he asked, stood up suddenly and hugged me. Since he was shorter than me I placed my hand on his head and mussed those white hair. Is he an angel???

“You and I together… “ I said. His smile was breathtaking…

“You’re mine… forever…” he said, grabbed my right hand and kissed my wrist…. I flinched when I felt stings there. “Auch!!”

“I’m sorry! See!?! I have the same! We’re bound together forever” he said all excited. I looked at mine and his wrists and saw this weird symbol flashing with blue light.

“What’s this??? So pretty…” I asked

“This… it’ll help me to find you… just stay the way you are right now… Don’t ever change inside…” he said, pointed at my heart and smiled.

“How did you do this???” I asked but he started staring into the sky.

“What is your name?” he asked while not looking at me.

“Bom…” I answered.

“Spring?” he said and looked in my eyes. “I’ll remember…” he added and pushed my ball. I had to run quickly and catch it. “What is your name??” I asked but he wasn’t here anymore… I noticed something shiny on the ground… What’s this??... a necklace??

“Bom-ah?!?!” I heard daddy… but tone of his voice seemed different…

 

*alarm clock*

“Aish!!!” I turned it off… new semester is starting today… new school… I hope no one will talk or look at me…

Remembering my dream I glanced at my wrist… but found nothing…

It was just a dream!

 

Angels don’t exist…

 

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BoomBaya #1
Chapter 25: *could contain spoiler*
....what can I say? I am in love!
I am in love with Bom. With LuHan. With every other character . And with your Stories.
That ending was really unexpected but I loved it so much and it's a perfect ending! I felt so down when I was reading the part where everyone was dying and am sure I would have cried if wasn't so into it that literally blanked out after their death. I am not lying I was reading your story with my mouth open and I was like "No! Wait what??? They...no!!!!!!" And than you have us such an awesome and cute ending
A second part would be awesome
I would love to see if they are going to meet each other again and if they are going to remember their past
Well I am pretty sure I will dream about your story (IF I am going to sleep xD it's 3:25 here and I am going to start another ff of yours )
I swear the way you describe Bommie in your stories is just....perfect ! I love that you make her a strong woman who doesn't has to be saved by an Prince Charming but is the one who saves him. Before I found you I was all about that 0815 schoolboy fanfiction and I did not like GXB fantasy FF's
Thanks to you my way of thinking turned 180(idk what that word is in English but we say "180 Grad" I hope you know what I mean haha)
To be honest I never thought of LuBom ever before but they are an awesome match (or just your stories makes me think that)
I wonder if you still want to write a part 2 if yes I would love it sooooooo soooooo much
(And I just noticed my English grammar is so bad xD)
Thank you really so much for this awesome Story
Angel Eyes was like a trip to another world
Thank you that you gave me/us the opurturnity to travel there !
And now I'm debating over if I should go to sleep or if I should start a new story of yours (I guess I won't regret it right? xD)
BoomBaya #2
Chapter 18: I wanted to write another comment another comment after I'm done reading this ff but...damn that got me off guard xD...idk I'm feeling shy hahahaha
Till now I have only read and like 2 boyxgirl (and guess what those two are your one shots from your 2nexo stories) and ...well yeah xD
Anyways besides that I wanted to tell you how awesome your stile of writing is.
I am able to imagine everything (....yep everything) that you are writing about. I loved the scene in the Hotthub with the waterfall. I could imagine how fascinated Luhan was. I mean even I would fall in love seeing Bom like that (okay I just scrolled up and realized that those scenes happend in the chaper befor xD... But well...idk)
And also although I'm 1000% here for Bom (and prbly LuHan xD) I am really carving for CLxSuho and I can't wait to see how TaoXMinzyXLay's relationship is going to develop ...I feel so bad for my Panda already but ....I hope he will find someone else xD
Oh and I hope I don't bother you with my Comments xD I know I'm currently spamming all your stories xD
Once again Hwaiting~
BoomBaya #3
Once again
I'm in awe ;-;
Since this story is completed I'll comment again after I'm done reading I hope you don't mind xD
Luv ya <3
xxxfrseyo
#4
Chapter 26: thank u so much authornim cus ive been missing lubom like crazy T_T <3
jiebom
#5
Chapter 25: Omg..they born again.. please continue..
Missyouwannabe #6
Chapter 25: YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YAAAAAASSSSSSSSS
bomira
#7
Chapter 25: Oh my! Hello! Long time no see ya! What a perfect gift in December:) I miss Lubom so much too♡♡♡
xxxfrseyo
#8
Chapter 25: OMGOMGOMG IS THIS REAL? WHOAAA THANK U SO MUCH AUTHORNIM!!! FINALLY AFTER A LONG TIME T_T ah anyway such a nice trailer u have! Totally love it! And of course im going to support this one omg u didnt even have to ask! Fighting authornim❤❤❤
rerechanyeolexoL #9
Hello , how are you ?

Ammm Actually I read your fanfic ' angel eyes ' and I love it so much !
It has a perfect plot and it is very well written !

And also I show my readers your fanfic and they was so excited to read it in Arabic so .. I want to ask if I can translate it to Arabic with full credits ! Because some readers can't read it in English ...

Sorry for annoying and waiting for your kind reply ^.^