Feelings

ANGEL EYES
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The Dark Palace

 

Bom POV

Where am I? I tried to move and open my eyes but it was too dark in the room. Am I laying in my bed? I couldn’t see anything.

“Who is she?? She doesn’t smell like a human nor like a demon.” I heard someone.

“She woke up!” I heard someone’s high pitched voice and whispers. When I looked around again they lit up the room and I found three girls dressed in red dresses. How could they see me if they eyes were covered? What caught my attention were long earrings with small, red rubies in their ears.

 

 

“She’s ready!” one of them said and harshly helped me to sit on the bed.

I opened my mouth and wanted to say that it hurt but words got stuck in my throat. What the hell?! I grabbed my neck and all three of them laughed at my miserable face. My fingers landed on the necklace with big stones.

“Stand up and let me look at you.” One ordered and pulled my hand. My legs were bare and I was wearing some kind of a swimsuit?

“Those tattoos means something big?” another asked.

“I don’t know but she beautiful… “ the shortest said and lead me to the huge mirror.

 

This is not me, the hair, makeup… I’m almost !

 

“Let’s show her to our master.”

 

Luhan POV

She’s gone… and I can’t even move...

ChonYo stopped right in front of me.

“If I kill you and Lay right now my sons will be the heirs of the sky god clan.” She said and grabbed my chin.

Father will never let that happen! He’ll know about you and the fire clan! I’m not afraid of you… As if she could hear me “You should be.” she said angrily “Your father?” she started laughing.

 

 

“After all the poison I gave him I don’t think he can think straight anymore” she smirked.

What?! I felt my body swelling up and trembling. I’m transforming! The look in her eyes changed instantly into a scared one. I feel on my knees and she started moving back. Silver scales appeared on  my hands and began to spread higher on my arms. Slowly my strength an ability to move freely started coming back.

“Run or I’m going to kill you!” I said as her black magic left my body. She’s so weak... a roar came out of my throat while Lay and others kept standing like statues around us.

In panic she pulled out a dagger and screamed while trying to stab me.

“I wouldn’t do that.” I heard suddenly. I t was Xiumin who with the speed of light poured bucket of water on her and froze it. She wasn’t able to move even an inch. Her dagger feel on the ground.

“Xiumin…. I’m changing!!” I screamed in desperation. He tried running  to me whit his broken leg and grabbed my hands. My nails already changed into long clutches.

“Think about Bom! … and everyone precious to you! There’s no time for you to lose control now! Whenever I’m not around you always get in trouble!” he yelled frustrated at me.

 

I couldn’t help but laugh and it made me calm a little bit. Thinking about Bom did the rest. Even though it took a while I came back to normal.

 

“What about her?” Xiumin asked and pointed at my stepmother.

“Take back your spell!” I shouted, grabbed the dagger and put it next to her neck.

“You wouldn’t dare!” she smirked.

“Oh really?” I pressed the blade harder and first blood drops showed.

“Luhan, she’s not worth it!” Xiumin said and grabbed the black sack she had tied to her wrist. “That’s it!” he smiled and strewn the green sand that was inside of it.

“No!!” she screamed and desperately tried to liberate from the ice.

After a while Lay, Chanyeol, Minzy, Suho, CL and her guardians woke up. CL started crying… She just reunited with her brother and lost him again…

“Lay, put our stepmother to sleep and don’t let her contact anyone!” I said, he did as I said. “Xiumin, please keep your eyes on her…”

“Tsk… What about you?” he asked and frowned.

“No matter what, I’m going to save Bom…” I stated.

“I’ll go with you. You’ll need a guide.” Chanyeol said and Minzy wanted to say something but he only

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BoomBaya #1
Chapter 25: *could contain spoiler*
....what can I say? I am in love!
I am in love with Bom. With LuHan. With every other character . And with your Stories.
That ending was really unexpected but I loved it so much and it's a perfect ending! I felt so down when I was reading the part where everyone was dying and am sure I would have cried if wasn't so into it that literally blanked out after their death. I am not lying I was reading your story with my mouth open and I was like "No! Wait what??? They...no!!!!!!" And than you have us such an awesome and cute ending
A second part would be awesome
I would love to see if they are going to meet each other again and if they are going to remember their past
Well I am pretty sure I will dream about your story (IF I am going to sleep xD it's 3:25 here and I am going to start another ff of yours )
I swear the way you describe Bommie in your stories is just....perfect ! I love that you make her a strong woman who doesn't has to be saved by an Prince Charming but is the one who saves him. Before I found you I was all about that 0815 schoolboy fanfiction and I did not like GXB fantasy FF's
Thanks to you my way of thinking turned 180(idk what that word is in English but we say "180 Grad" I hope you know what I mean haha)
To be honest I never thought of LuBom ever before but they are an awesome match (or just your stories makes me think that)
I wonder if you still want to write a part 2 if yes I would love it sooooooo soooooo much
(And I just noticed my English grammar is so bad xD)
Thank you really so much for this awesome Story
Angel Eyes was like a trip to another world
Thank you that you gave me/us the opurturnity to travel there !
And now I'm debating over if I should go to sleep or if I should start a new story of yours (I guess I won't regret it right? xD)
BoomBaya #2
Chapter 18: I wanted to write another comment another comment after I'm done reading this ff but...damn that got me off guard xD...idk I'm feeling shy hahahaha
Till now I have only read and like 2 boyxgirl (and guess what those two are your one shots from your 2nexo stories) and ...well yeah xD
Anyways besides that I wanted to tell you how awesome your stile of writing is.
I am able to imagine everything (....yep everything) that you are writing about. I loved the scene in the Hotthub with the waterfall. I could imagine how fascinated Luhan was. I mean even I would fall in love seeing Bom like that (okay I just scrolled up and realized that those scenes happend in the chaper befor xD... But well...idk)
And also although I'm 1000% here for Bom (and prbly LuHan xD) I am really carving for CLxSuho and I can't wait to see how TaoXMinzyXLay's relationship is going to develop ...I feel so bad for my Panda already but ....I hope he will find someone else xD
Oh and I hope I don't bother you with my Comments xD I know I'm currently spamming all your stories xD
Once again Hwaiting~
BoomBaya #3
Once again
I'm in awe ;-;
Since this story is completed I'll comment again after I'm done reading I hope you don't mind xD
Luv ya <3
xxxfrseyo
#4
Chapter 26: thank u so much authornim cus ive been missing lubom like crazy T_T <3
jiebom
#5
Chapter 25: Omg..they born again.. please continue..
Missyouwannabe #6
Chapter 25: YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YAAAAAASSSSSSSSS
bomira
#7
Chapter 25: Oh my! Hello! Long time no see ya! What a perfect gift in December:) I miss Lubom so much too♡♡♡
xxxfrseyo
#8
Chapter 25: OMGOMGOMG IS THIS REAL? WHOAAA THANK U SO MUCH AUTHORNIM!!! FINALLY AFTER A LONG TIME T_T ah anyway such a nice trailer u have! Totally love it! And of course im going to support this one omg u didnt even have to ask! Fighting authornim❤❤❤
rerechanyeolexoL #9
Hello , how are you ?

Ammm Actually I read your fanfic ' angel eyes ' and I love it so much !
It has a perfect plot and it is very well written !

And also I show my readers your fanfic and they was so excited to read it in Arabic so .. I want to ask if I can translate it to Arabic with full credits ! Because some readers can't read it in English ...

Sorry for annoying and waiting for your kind reply ^.^