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ANGEL EYES
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Foreword

Origins of humans living on Earth reach thousands years ago…

It all happened thanks to Mother of the Earth – Empress of the whole livings on the planet… plants, trees, forests, mountains, seas, oceans, rivers, lakes, animals of all kind, clouds on the sky and finally ….human beings were created by her.

 

 

The Empress fell in love with the Sun that always accompanied her through the day… but she also truly loved the Moon that never left her site at night. The Sun gave her warm, passionate love and strength to every little flower she cherished so much … The Moon gave her peaceful mind. She felt safe at his presence.

She loved both of them and they were afraid of losing beloved one. They couldn’t made her choose between the two of them. At day with the Sun… At night with the Moon…  For thousand years they lived like this.

 

The Sun                                                                                       The Moon

                      

 

Out of their relationships two daughters were born, both breathtakingly beautiful.

Firstly born daughter of the Moon with long, silky, white hair, pale almost transparent skin and azure blue eyes. Later daughter of the Sun with long, red hair and porcelain skin, semi green and brown eyes.

Few years later Earth got visited by demons of the EXO planet. Their homeland was destroyed because of its inner explosion. They came on their knees begging for permission to stay. The Empress let them to settle up in the sky. She got fond to them as they helped her to watch after Earth, humans and all living things.

Raised up by their mother both daughters loved each other more than their own lives. Always inseparable…

Another demon clans were born and each ruled one of the elements: water, fire, wind… but none had the power to unite them all… the power of giving and taking life away…

 

Back to the story <3

 

Minzy POV

My lungs…. I can’t breathe….. Something is pressing me down…

I opened my eyes and saw white ceiling above me. I was laying on a bed but… where am I?? Kris??? I looked on the right and saw a girl with long black hair and a guy with white hair. It looked as if she cried…

I tried to take a deep breath and then I felt it moving on my chest… more like on my left . It’s a hand!!

I looked down and saw my upper body only a black piece of material covered my s… but in between them was a hand. My blood pressure risen up. I looked left and saw that guy who saved me from the darkness…

“Yah!..” I said but no one heard me. He had his eyes closed and I don’t know but… I saw him shine…

“YAH!!!” I said and grabbed his wrist… this time he heard it. Instead moving his hand away he just smiled at me and it made me agape.

 

(while grabbing kekeke)

 

“Would you mind??” I said and looked at his hand. He looked at me, then at his hand and took it away snappily. I laughed at his embarrassment and felt pain all over my body. My skin felt as if it was stringed way too much.

“Don’t move!” He said. “I tried to touch you in the closest place to your heart to speed up the process. You’re  almost healed…” he smiled and I saw his dimples.

“…healed??” I asked… How?? I was dying??? Was it all a dream?? Was that pain unreal??

“You should sleep.. “ said that girl with a sweet voice and brushed hair of my forehead. I saw her glancing at him. He grabbed my hand and I fell asleep.

 

Bom POV

It’s a miracle… He made her come back to the world of living… In my whole life, in television news or even on my own eyes I haven’t sees these kind of injuries she had.

We had to peel of her clothes coz it was almost fusing with her skin. ‘Amber eyes’ hands were shaking the whole time. All of them looked lost. I decided to take the lead and do it, Luhan and Lay helped me while Suho and Xiumin took care for her brother.

My tears kept falling unwittingly… I tried to dry it with my sleeves…

 “Bom…” Luhan said and looked at me with troubled eyes.

 “I’m ok…” I said and sniffled.

They turned back when she was completely and I was covering her inmost places with some clothes..

“It’s done…” I said and rubbed of the tears.

 

Lay placed his hand on her

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BoomBaya #1
Chapter 25: *could contain spoiler*
....what can I say? I am in love!
I am in love with Bom. With LuHan. With every other character . And with your Stories.
That ending was really unexpected but I loved it so much and it's a perfect ending! I felt so down when I was reading the part where everyone was dying and am sure I would have cried if wasn't so into it that literally blanked out after their death. I am not lying I was reading your story with my mouth open and I was like "No! Wait what??? They...no!!!!!!" And than you have us such an awesome and cute ending
A second part would be awesome
I would love to see if they are going to meet each other again and if they are going to remember their past
Well I am pretty sure I will dream about your story (IF I am going to sleep xD it's 3:25 here and I am going to start another ff of yours )
I swear the way you describe Bommie in your stories is just....perfect ! I love that you make her a strong woman who doesn't has to be saved by an Prince Charming but is the one who saves him. Before I found you I was all about that 0815 schoolboy fanfiction and I did not like GXB fantasy FF's
Thanks to you my way of thinking turned 180(idk what that word is in English but we say "180 Grad" I hope you know what I mean haha)
To be honest I never thought of LuBom ever before but they are an awesome match (or just your stories makes me think that)
I wonder if you still want to write a part 2 if yes I would love it sooooooo soooooo much
(And I just noticed my English grammar is so bad xD)
Thank you really so much for this awesome Story
Angel Eyes was like a trip to another world
Thank you that you gave me/us the opurturnity to travel there !
And now I'm debating over if I should go to sleep or if I should start a new story of yours (I guess I won't regret it right? xD)
BoomBaya #2
Chapter 18: I wanted to write another comment another comment after I'm done reading this ff but...damn that got me off guard xD...idk I'm feeling shy hahahaha
Till now I have only read and like 2 boyxgirl (and guess what those two are your one shots from your 2nexo stories) and ...well yeah xD
Anyways besides that I wanted to tell you how awesome your stile of writing is.
I am able to imagine everything (....yep everything) that you are writing about. I loved the scene in the Hotthub with the waterfall. I could imagine how fascinated Luhan was. I mean even I would fall in love seeing Bom like that (okay I just scrolled up and realized that those scenes happend in the chaper befor xD... But well...idk)
And also although I'm 1000% here for Bom (and prbly LuHan xD) I am really carving for CLxSuho and I can't wait to see how TaoXMinzyXLay's relationship is going to develop ...I feel so bad for my Panda already but ....I hope he will find someone else xD
Oh and I hope I don't bother you with my Comments xD I know I'm currently spamming all your stories xD
Once again Hwaiting~
BoomBaya #3
Once again
I'm in awe ;-;
Since this story is completed I'll comment again after I'm done reading I hope you don't mind xD
Luv ya <3
xxxfrseyo
#4
Chapter 26: thank u so much authornim cus ive been missing lubom like crazy T_T <3
jiebom
#5
Chapter 25: Omg..they born again.. please continue..
Missyouwannabe #6
Chapter 25: YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YAAAAAASSSSSSSSS
bomira
#7
Chapter 25: Oh my! Hello! Long time no see ya! What a perfect gift in December:) I miss Lubom so much too♡♡♡
xxxfrseyo
#8
Chapter 25: OMGOMGOMG IS THIS REAL? WHOAAA THANK U SO MUCH AUTHORNIM!!! FINALLY AFTER A LONG TIME T_T ah anyway such a nice trailer u have! Totally love it! And of course im going to support this one omg u didnt even have to ask! Fighting authornim❤❤❤
rerechanyeolexoL #9
Hello , how are you ?

Ammm Actually I read your fanfic ' angel eyes ' and I love it so much !
It has a perfect plot and it is very well written !

And also I show my readers your fanfic and they was so excited to read it in Arabic so .. I want to ask if I can translate it to Arabic with full credits ! Because some readers can't read it in English ...

Sorry for annoying and waiting for your kind reply ^.^