Chapter Eight

The Weapon Master's Son
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After a good discussion and a few arguments about the course of action, they all decided that going through the river. It would be wet and dangerous, but it was better than running into the thieves that lurked on the particular road they had been thinking about taking. No one ever made it off of that road without getting killed or robbed. The river would also shorten their journey by four miles, and that was a very good thing, with their time constraint now. 

They started across the river, which wasn’t very deep, watching out for snakes and other predators. Xero kept his bow ready to strike any creatures that would try to attack them, and Seogoong had strapped the Crimson Sword onto Byungjoo’s back to keep it far away from the water. If it had any power in it, the creatures would feel it and try to take the power for themselves, and the drive to gain the power would cause a battle that the human travelers would likely lose.

While they were crossing the river, Byungjoo smiled back at Hansol. “Are you okay? I know that riding double . I wish there were another way.” 

Hansol shook his head. “It’s fine. If you rode by yourself, there would be the chance of you falling off, with your injury. It’s better if I’m here to catch you, if something happens, don’t you think?”

Byungjoo was quiet for a long moment, thinking about it. “Yeah, that’s true. By cut doesn’t feel the greatest, and if I were riding alone, I could spasm or something, fall into the water and that would be it. Despite the injury not hurting too much, I know that it’s not only a graze…damn it.” Hansol noticed that he didn’t comment on Hansol saying he would catch him. That comment hit too close to home, and he had too much pride to comment on it. 

Hansol tightened his grip on Byungjoo’s slim waist, causing the younger man to shiver. “Yeah, I know what you mean. Injuries can be very dangerous, even if they aren’t deadly, in the first place.” He didn’t receive a reply, so he changed the subject. “So, why does everyone know who Xero is? He sounds like he was quite the coveted…guy.” He narrowly escaped calling Xero a , knowing that Byungjoo and Sanggyun were friends of Xero’s.  

Byungjoo frowned, sighing. “Yeah, he has been. His situation is different from those slaves that we freed yesterday. He was a street rat, orphaned at a young age. I still don’t know what happened to his parents, because he won’t talk about it, but he had to make money to live. He supported himself by selling his body and stealing. I don’t think many of his buyers were very nice to him.” Byungjoo said the word ‘buyer’ as if it had a nasty taste, spitting it out. “He would still be out there, if it wasn’t for Jenissi taking him in.”

Hansol nodded again, knowing that the poor life on the streets was mostly the kingdom’s fault, and he wished that he had the power to change it. “Was Jenissi a…buyer? Did he touch him?”

Byungjoo laughed softly, the sound coming out bitterly. “Yes and no. He was the last buyer. Jenissi was still a mercenary, at the time, and he bought Xero and took care of him. Xero learned to trust him and they have a strong relationship, because of it. To answer your question, he has never touched Xero in that way. He’s a really nice guy, and wouldn’t do that. However, he was easy

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^