Chapter Sixteen

The Weapon Master's Son
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They let Sanggyun rest for a while, and he finally calmed down enough to travel. Xero assured the younger man that he would be protected, and stayed close to him as they traveled. Hansol had been thinking about their decision to stay away from the castle, and even though something was wrong, the longer he stayed away, the more nervous he became. He was convinced that someone was working from inside of the guard to get to the sword, but he had a new idea about how to handle this. He had been stalling on seeing his father again, but now it seemed like it would be too dangerous to stay away from the castle, if someone was after them. If they were attacked again, he wanted either the protection of the guard, or to take the guards in for suspicion, depending on how things happened. Hansol was convinced that the attacker had assumed that Sanggyun was carrying the Crimson Sword and that was the reason he had been attacked. After thinking about it for a while, he figured that it would be safe to return home. 

He approached Sehyuk about it, and noticed that his friend still wasn’t very happy with him. “Hey, I think it would be a good idea to go ahead and go home,” Hansol frowned when he noticed that Sehyuk was staring at him with an untrusting expression. He knew that his friend still didn’t really trust them at all, and he hoped that trying to regain his trust wouldn’t be a mistake. “Atom is still pretty rattled, but he should be okay. We’ll be careful.” 

Sehyuk snorted, glancing at him from cleaning his sword. “I thought you wanted to stall. You should make up your mind, prince.” He spit out the last word as if it had a bad taste. “You change your mind every day…Besides, are you sure you can trust me not to take the sword? Nakta’s not going to knock me out again?” The leader didn’t bother keeping the bitterness out of his tone.

Hansol sighed. “I’m sorry, Sehyuk. We HAD to do that, since you were acting so…strange. I’m sorry that Nakta went a bit overboard on it. And yes, I think it would be better to return home now. If someone wants to attack us, they can go ahead and do it at the castle. That way, my father will see it.”

Sehyuk shook his head, his mind still on the accusations against him. “Hansol, it wasn’t only Nakta. It was you, too,” he slipped his sword back into its sheath, shaking his head again. “We’ll go home and face your ing father. Then maybe you’ll see that I wasn’t working with anyone. I don’t remember attacking you or asking about the sword, at all. I don’t know what was going on.” 

Hansol smiled, nodding. “I believe you. That’s one reason we need to get home now. This isn’t safe for any of us, and safety is the most important thing to me. Let’s just go home, give the sword back to my father and see how things go, okay?” 

Sehyuk sighed. “Okay. Thank you for trusting me.” 

Hansol hugged him briefly. “You’re welcome.”  

 

 

They decided to travel through the city as they drew closer to the castle, since there were too many dangers in the woods. Riding all day, they reached the castle that evening. Hansol glanced at Sehyuk when they got to the gate, nervous. 

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^