Chapter Nineteen

The Weapon Master's Son
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The guards released all of Hansol’s friends, including Byungjoo’s father. They weren’t sure why they were obeying Hansol over his father, but didn’t question it. Hansol instructed the guards to take his father to a cell, and he would explain to the people what had really happened and they were to obey him as their future king, instead of his father. He also locked up his mother and his father’s advisor. They had all been in on the conspiracy to put his bastard brother on the throne instead of him. It would have played out exactly as he had suspected, if he hadn’t taken matters into his own hands.

 

After his father had been taken away and his friends released, Hansol stared at the Crimson Sword. It had caused so much pain and was a dishonest tool to use for control, but he didn’t regret using it. His father had tried to do the same thing, but in the end, the SWORD was the one that would make the final decision about who to obey. It clearly would not obey his father now, since he had bad intentions for the kingdom. The Crimson Sword knew this, being the sentient weapon that it was.

 

When his friends were brought in, Hansol greeted them warmly. “Thank you for helping me with the Crimson Sword. I’m sorry that my father betrayed us with it, trying to keep it for himself. That was his intention the entire time, and he was using us to re-activate it. Obviously he wouldn’t have spared any of our lives, since he would rather keep all of the power for himself. Now he will pay for it, and I will rule the kingdom. You will all be my advisors and close hands, since you have all shown yourselves worthy.”

 

Sehyuk stared at him, fidgeting. “So you trust me now, Prince?” His tone was somewhat condescending, and he looked nervous about the entire situation.

 

Hansol’s eyes softened when Sehyuk asked this question, and he offered an apologetic look. “Yes, Sehyuk-ah. I trust you with my life. I was wrong to not do so, in the past. I’m sorry for being so blind to what was really going on with the sword. It wasn’t you, and I should have trusted you.”

 

Sehyuk sighed, smiling gently. “We were all under stress, so I understand. I was just checking if I was going to be thrown in prison, too,” he bowed to Hansol. “Thank you, Prince Hansol.”

 

Hansol shook his head, waving his hand at him for bowing. “Sehyuk, as far as I’m concerned, you are my equal. Status only matters when I’m dealing with people who need to be under my control. That doesn’t include any of you. You are my friends, and not my subjects, just some you know. It would feel too weird to call you my subjects, when you all helped me to get where I am right now.”

 

Byungjoo considered his words for a moment, then nodded. “Yes, I can understand how it would be too weird for you, and for all of us. What’s your next move?”

 

Hansol sighed, shaking his head. “Well, I’ll have to prove to the people that I didn’t take

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^