Chapter Thirteen

The Weapon Master's Son
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When they left the hotel, Sehyuk made sure that everyone stayed quiet about what had happened with the Crimson Sword. Their cover had almost been blown the night before and Byungjoo had been lucky that he had killed the man. They all gathered their weapons confidently, leaving as soon as possible. 

As soon as they were outside, Sehyuk turned to Byungjoo and Hansol. “Are you guys okay? I saw that someone tried to take the sword. I didn’t see what happened to him, though.” 

Hansol glanced at Byungjoo, shaking his head. Not even Sehyuk needed to know what had happened to the man who had attacked them. It was too complicated. The young prince sighed, smiling. “We beat him and the Sword is safe. That’s all that matters.” 

Sehyuk glanced at Jenissi, who shrugged. “Okay. Well, good job to you both. Let’s get on the road.” He turned to concentrate on his horse, leaving them alone. He knew that they weren’t telling him everything, and that fact bothered him. Hansol had always been open and up front with the viscount, but how he felt the need to hide something. Sehyuk couldn’t imagine why the younger man would do that, but he wouldn’t argue with him. He was the prince, even if he didn’t feel like one or receive the right treatment for his title. 

While they were on their way, Hansol stopped Byungjoo as he was walking to his horse. He smiled at the younger man, surprising him with a hug. “Thank you,” he whispered, pulling away. As he did so, he felt someone staring at him. When he turned, he saw that it was Xero. He made eye contact with the archer, wondering why the tall young man had a problem with him. He almost felt like jealousy to Hansol. He seemed to like Byungjoo as more than just a friend, but there wasn’t anything Hansol could do about that. Xero had been the one to tell him to become friendlier with him and make an effort. That was all he was doing. Xero would just have do deal with his jealousy and get over it. Hansol ignored Xero and mounted his horse. 

Riding to Sanggyun, he stayed next to his friend as they left the town. “Hey, ATom, what’s Xero’s problem?” 

Sanggyun looked confused for a moment, then nodded, frowning. “Hansol, you’re unbelievable,” the taller man smirked at him. “You seriously don’t see it? Are you blind?” 

Hansol turned away from him, hiding his emotions from the younger man. “I do see it,” he lied. “I was just checking to make certain that I was seeing the right thing.” 

Sanggyun touched Hansol on the arm lightly, pushing his long hair out of his face. “Why does it matter? You know…Xero’s not the one that Byungjoo likes, Hansol. I thought you would have seen that by now.” He grinned, pulling the reins up tighter on his horse as they turned a bend in the road. 

Hansol watched the younger man ride ahead for a few strides, contemplating what he had just said. He blushed, knowing that Sanggyun was calling him naïve. He didn’t like that, but there could be some truth to it. He simply didn’t want to admit that he might have feelings for Byungjoo. He also wouldn’t admit to being afraid to admit it. 

Hansol became lost in his thoughts for a while, but was ripped back to reality by a yell from ahead. Xero, Kidoh and Sangdo came rushing back from where they had been scouting. When they got back to the rest of the group, Xero was having a hard time controlling his panicked horse. The tall bay gelding was crow-hopping and chomping at the bit nervously. “There’s something coming this way, and we barely

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^