Chapter Two

The Weapon Master's Son
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Hansol found it very difficult to sleep that night, falling into dreams of Byungjoo and his ‘greatness,’ with all of the kingdom bowing to him, instead of the royal family. He also had dreams of terrible things happening on the journey, such as bandits and monsters. Finally, he gave up and got up. He wasn’t getting any rest, anyway. Walking into the sitting room, he noticed the leader of their operation, Sehyuk, sitting on one of the couches. He was looking over papers, and they looked to be important. 

Sehyuk smiled at him, motioning to the seat next to him. “Have a seat, Prince. I was just going over our traveling plans. What are you doing up so early? I would be sleeping, if I didn’t need to take care of all of this before we go.”

Hansol smiled back at him. “That doesn’t look like fun. I’m sorry.” Sehyuk was the viscount, and Hansol had known him for a long time. He was a good friend to Hansol, and he was glad he was most likely going. He just had to check for certain. “Sehyuk, will you be going with us on this…conquest?” 

Sehyuk nodded, engrossed in his paperwork again. “Yes, I will. You’ll need someone to keep everyone in line, right?” 

Hansol frowned, knowing that Sehyuk was targeting him specifically. “Yeah. You’re good at that. Don’t worry about me. I’ll ignore the precious Byungjoo. Since he’s going, I’ll work with him. That doesn’t mean I’ll get along with him, though. Please don’t force me to.”

Sehyuk sighed, tired of the drama already. “You know, he’s really not too bad. Maybe you should give him a chance.”

Hansol gave him an exasperated look. “I said don’t push it. I’ll work with him, okay?” He didn’t  usually snap at Sehyuk, but this was an exception. 

Sehyuk didn’t even look up at him, that time. Hansol wasn’t going to listen to reason, so he would simply leave the situation alone for now. “We leave in three hours. You should go get some more sleep. I’ll wake you when it’s time to go.”

Hansol chuckled at Sehyuk. The viscount had just told him off, and there was nothing he could do about it. Smiling, he turned and walked back into his bedroom and began packing his things. He was too wound up to go to sleep. 

 

 

Hansol had just finished packing and was carrying his bag out to th

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^