Chapter Nine

The Weapon Master's Son
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Hansol was unable to sleep that night, feeling Byungjoo shift around about every thirty minutes. He seemed to be in a lot of pain, whimpering and holding his stomach. Hansol grimaced every time the younger man whimpered. Byungjoo was sweating heavily, and Hansol took care of him, wiping his face with a cloth. 

Around midnight, Nakta walked over to Hansol. The young prince looked very tired, with dark circles under his eyes. “Prince, you should go get some sleep. I’ll keep an eye on him. Go…” Nakta looked down at Byungjoo. 

Hansol smiled at him, yawning. He eased Byungjoo’s head out of his lap and into Nakta’s, then stood to his feet. “Thank you, Nakta.” 

Nakta nodded, placing a hand on Byungjoo’s stomach gently. “Get some sleep. We have a long day tomorrow. The Crystal Waters are only a day’s ride away, so we all need to get some rest to be alert.”  

Hansol glanced at Byungjoo’s sleeping face before stumbling over and relaxing against a tree. He fell asleep within the next ten minutes. 

 

 

The next morning, Byungjoo woke up to find Hansol wiping his face. He had a terrible headache, as if someone was hitting him with a hammer. Hansol smiled at him, his brow furrowed in worry. The prince looked very tired, and Byungjoo smiled back at him. 

“Hey,” he looked confused. “What happened? I feel terrible. Was the cut really that bad? The last thing I remember was crossing the river.”

Hansol laughed. “You were doing okay, but got bit by a bug. That, combined with your injury, weakened you. Everyone’s safe, though. Don’t worry.” 

Byungjoo’s face went blank as he thought about it. His eyes suddenly grew wide. “Where’s the sword? I didn’t lose it, did I?” 

Hansol took advantage of his worried expression, his own face grim. “About that…” He hissed though his teeth. “You made a mistake.” The prince didn’t smile, but kept the same grim expression. “You’re mistake was trusting me,” he laughed out loud. “It’s fine…but you should have seen your face!” He burst out laughing, doubling over. Shaking his head, Hansol trying to regain his composure. “I’m sorry.”

Byungjoo glared at him. “Bratty prince. You scared me. My father would be so mad, and I don’t even want to think about what your father would do. That was not funny.” He grinned at Hansol, surprised that he would joke with him. 

Hansol chuckled, his laugh lines very evident and making him look very bratty. “Well, I don’t think my father would kill you. I would be the one to get in trouble. My father loves you too much,” his smiled faded with the realization. 

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^