Chapter One

The Weapon Master's Son
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King Hangoong met with his high officials in his private chambers, telling them he had a very important matter to discuss. Once they were all inside his chambers, the king cleared his throat. 

“An issue has arisen regarding the Crimson Sword,” he noticed that one of his generals cringed at the mention of the powerful weapon. “It is time to recharge it, after only two years. I am not certain about how the sword managed to lose all of its power, but it needs to be taken to the Crystal Waters to be recharged. I am wondering if any of you know who would be fit for the job of taking it.” He looked at the Weapon Master. “Your son, Byungjoo, will certainly be one to go. He has the clearance to handle the special sword, and it will be in his possession. However, I want to send some guards to protect him.” 

The Weapon Master smiled at him. “I am privileged that you would send my son. He has not proven himself in anything yet. I think it would be a good idea to send his guard with him. They know what they are doing, and can protect him.”

 The king sighed. “That would be a good idea. He is the best person to go, and sending guards with him would ensure his safety. I think it would also be a good idea to send my youngest son, Hansol. He has not done anything with his life, and he is not the Crown Prince, so it is safe to send him. Besides the two of them, I am not terribly concerned about who is sent, as long as they are trustworthy enough.”

The Weapon Master nodded, retrieving a paper from his satchel. “Your Majesty, this is a release form for the Crimson Sword. If anything happens to it, I will be held responsible personally. This is why the release form needs to go with either my son or Prince Hansol.”

The King shook his head. “It will go into the possession of your son, since he is more responsible. That way, it will not be lost. If it IS, you will be held responsible, as you stated.” He turned to the rest of the council. “This is now set. Prince Hansol and the Weapon Master’s son, Byungjoo, will be two of the people to go, and they will be set with a traveling party. They need to leave with the sword by tomorrow. Is this clear to everyone?” 

There was a unanimous ‘yes’ and the meeting ended. 

 

 

That evening, Prince Hansol was called into the council room. He paused when he saw that Byungjoo was in the room also. He would rather not be around the ‘perfect Weapon Master’s son.’ The other young man was well loved, while Hansol himself was not. he was the prince, yet even his own father valued and loved perfect Byungjoo, and not his ‘failure of a son.’

Sighing, Hansol noticed that Atom, his scribe and best friend, was also in the room, which made him smile. Walking over to the younger man, he began to take a seat next to him. However, his father sent him a sent him a stern look and m

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^