Chapter Fifteen

The Weapon Master's Son
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They reached the nearest town and stopped for lunch. Hansol still hadn’t spoken to anyone and no one questioned him. He was the prince, and it wasn’t their place to say anything. Sehyuk still hadn’t woken up and Nakta was keeping a close eye on him. Hansol felt sorry for him, but he also wasn’t sure if he could trust his friend. What if he had wanted the sword and that was the reason he insisted on carrying it? Hansol had been weighing the situation over several times in his mind and there was something about Sehyuk that just didn’t add up. He didn’t feel like the culprit. Hansol felt as if it was something else, but he wasn’t sure who he could talk to about it. What if there was a spy?

 

While they were eating lunch in the woods, Byungjoo smiled at Hansol. “Hey, can we talk?” He asked the question very cautiously, remembering the young prince’s last words to him.

 

Hansol frowned, tying his horse to a log, where she started eating the grass around her. “Sure.” His answer was brisk and harsh. “Eat. We don’t have a lot of time to sit here, so get to the point.”

 

Byungjoo winced, knowing that he deserved the harsh words. “I’m sorry for getting angry earlier. I thought you were accusing my father, and I was wrong.”

 

“Yup,” Hansol answered stubbornly, looking at him expectantly. “I know that your father is a hell of a lot more trustworthy than my own, but what if he had done something on MY father’s orders? He wouldn’t have a choice. However, I don’t think he had anything to do with this. There may not even be anything to worry about. Sehyuk might just be acting weird because of the sword and its power. I have no idea and I don’t know what we’ll have to deal with when he wakes up, you know? As I said before, it’s not your father that I don’t trust, Byungjoo.”

 

They ate in silence for a moment, then Byungjoo nodded slowly, feeling stupid for jumping to the conclusion he had previously assumed. “Okay. Well, I will try to think things through more before accusing you, next time. I’m sorry.”

 

Hansol sighed deeply, smiling at him. “It’s okay. Thank you for seeing my side of it. I’m sorry for accusing and getting jumpy with you. You didn’t deserve that.”

 

Byungjoo finished his sandwich and rolled up the rapper into a tight ball. He began tossing in between his hands while he thought. “You’re welcome. I’ll try to understand you more, in the future.”

 

Hansol cocked his head to the side, studying the younger man. “When did you start noticing me? Don’t pretend that you haven’t. I know better than that.”

 

Byungjoo was caught off guard by the question, and found it hard to respond to. “Hansol, I noticed you a long time ago, when we were children. You were always above my status, so I never tried to approach anything. However, now that I am getting to know you on a differ

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^