Chapter Ten

The Weapon Master's Son
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The group approached the Crystal Waters carefully, weapons drawn and ready for an attack. The water was still and bright, silvery blue, just as they had been told it would appear, and it didn’t look like something that held the powerful depths to restore a sword to its former glory and power.

 Sehyuk smiled, glancing at Jenissi. “I’ve heard that these waters hold healing qualities, also. Who would like to be the guinea pig?” He grinned, pretending to shove the other man in. Jenissi grinned at Sehyuk and the leader earned a slap on his arm from his apparent lover, Kido. 
 
Hansol ignored Jenissi’s jokes and let Byungjoo dismount before climbing down from his horse’s saddle, himself. The young Weapon Master’s son looked nervous as he held the treasured sword tightly in his hands. “I guess this is it, then,” Hansol said, glancing at Byungjoo.  “Now we simply dip it in the water and it should be restored, right?” 

Byungjoo shrugged, his face still pale from sickness. “I guess there’s only one way to find out, right?” 

Hansol frowned, pulling out his own sword. “I guess so,” he replied quietly, trying to hide his concern for the other man. He noticed that some of the others had readied their weapons, also. Xero stood at a distance, his arrow knocked and ready to strike, if needed. 

Sehyuk, Kido and Jenissi walked in front of Byungjoo to protect him from anything that might try to get the sword. They hadn’t seen anything, and Hojoon hadn’t felt any danger yet, so they seemed to be clear. 

Hansol began to walk over to the water, and Jenissi pushed him back, shaking his head. “I’m sorry, prince, but I don’t want anything to happen to you. Your life is more important than this sword.” The mercenary smiled at him gently and Hansol smiled back. 

“I hadn’t really heard that kind of talk when I was growing up, so thank you,” the young prince seemed nervous, and Jenissi smiled, knowing that he was concerned about Byungjoo. 

Sehyuk sighed. “Hansol, you’re easily the most important person here, despite what your parents might say. Screw them, if they’re not going to treat you with the respect that you deserve. Don’t put up with their bull, okay?” He flashed a smile at the prince before walking forward and looking into the water. It looked normal, so they could go ahead and advance. They walked to the edge of the water, Sehyuk taking the lead and dipping his own sword into the water. As soon

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Night-Rose
#1
Chapter 21: This.is.AWESOME!

I wish i found this sooner! I live how it is written along with the plot and the feel that came with it!

Great job authornim!
simpleblueghurl #2
Chapter 2: /crying/ OHHHHHH MY ****ing GOHN~~ why did i have to be so late about this Fic~ !!! /cries in the corner/ ohhhh i hate myself~ TT~TT I'm LOVING THIS FIC~~~ can i get a hug author-nim? /huggles you anyway/runs back to the corner and continues crying for being late on this fic/ <3 <3 <3 <3
Amalya
#3
Chapter 20: Interesting story. It feels like you've crafted an engaging world filled with strange and potentially dangerous creatures (as well as people), with a quest more than dangerous enough to fuel the plot. The characters were mostly believable and some were better fleshed out than others, which is only to be expected with a large cast like this. I think some of them were a bit too altruistic at times and there were definitely some bits of extremisms in their behaviors overall but the story itself was quite enjoyable.

I will agree with some other commenters that it is a bit rushed. You have so much room to develop the world/plot/characters and a lot of it felt glossed over. I'm still left wondering about the origin of the sword, why it lost its power to begin with, how only those of a certain lineage can wield it (*coughroyaltyandotherworthypersonscough*) though that was certainly a creative way of manifesting its power. Fascinating defense mechanism too. haha

I'm not sure what the significance of the ually oriented scenes were, or reverting to y old men in the presence of an entire troupe when commenting on such a thought felt strangely out of place, but okay. And there's no getting around that Hansol's feelings for Byungjoo launched into overdrive in a period of... two weeks. >.> Despite that really whirlwind sort of development, I do feel that they make a good pair, all things considered.

Overall, you've got a good start in world building and plotting out a grand adventure, with plenty of room for growth in the future! Keep up the good work and happy writing in the future!
gohnwiththewind #4
Chapter 20: This did feel kinds rushed but thank you for this fanfic!!! I love it and it's definitely one I'll read again.
WolvesThatGrowl
#5
Chapter 20: //sobs at hanjoo
//huzzahs at the king for now being a lifeless fish
//sobs again at the fact that this fIC IS COMPLETED NOOOO
christineyu527 #6
Chapter 20: Hmm, I'll try not to write an essay, I'm not really commissioned to write another review, but I will say a few things anyways. Its a little rushed, the most important scenes were just slapped there, and emotion wasn't really there. Like I said earlier, you really need to describe the emotion rather than stating it. Here's an example "He felt his emotions rushing to the surface, but pushed them away", don't expect readers to know what emotions he's feeling, pretend we're all clueless people, and describe how he feels. I wouldn't say I didn't see it at all, but more would have been nice. Another thing is you're still missing words here and there, beta reader is still recommend, I think our shop has a affiliate that's a beta reader. Also for someone who just took the kingdom from his father who had nothing but hate for him, he seems rather too affected by the 'king's' opinion. He's a strong independent person, in my point of view, he wouldn't give a crap what his father thought of him. I think an extension of why his father never accepted him is warranted, because all we know is that he hates him…Overall, there is improve and congrats on finishing the fic. If you want more help elsewhere, just drop me a message, I'm happy to help you out :)
Redriddinghood23
#7
Chapter 20: This is so awesome! It's amazing! One of my absolute favorites!! I love it so so much!! :D
hottdoggs
#8
Chapter 20: OMG LIKE THIS IS SO PERF I LOVE U
YOUR FIC WAS SO INCREDIBLE AND THE STORY UGGHH GREAAAT !!!
Ren-fan
#9
Omg he said he loved him!!! <333333 *fangirling* That was a perfect ending!!!! I love this story so much but i'm not sad that this ended because this was perfect!!!! No i can't say anything else just that i'll definitely read this again some day!!!!! <3333333
HansolxBjoo #10
Chapter 20: Kyaaaaa *-* PERFECT!!! It's finally completed. Great work. ^-^