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December 24

1:00 P.M.


 

 I ate my late lunch and headed to a store with a ginormous sign, 'Christmas Sale 20% discount'. The faux scent of snow and pinecones welcomed me inside. Christmas trees, Christmas lights, Santa Claus dolls, toy reindeers, a banner with a 'Merry Christmas' sign, a rack of Christmas wrappers and ribbons making a single file of line. I went directly to buy a tree, not too high and not too short. Buying one of everything they sold lessened the green papers inside my billfold, but it will soon be worth it. A guy should do everything to impress his lady, am I right?

 


 

 It's a good thing that I bought the perfect dress for the perfect occasion after filling up my hungry stomach. A white top sprinkled with gold and silver dust on the upper half and an above-the-knee red skirt to join the Christmas spirit. As I exited the shop, I noticed a couple that were supposed to be in London for a holiday vacation. 

"Aunt Mary! Uncle John!" I called. They noticed me and gave me a shocked expression. I went to them and asked them why in the world were they here. The questions that followed soon got me stuck in a conversation with them.

 


 

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sarang_kpop1015 #1
Chapter 13: I read this whole fic today ><
I found out from your friend Jann Persigas!
I've also promoted your story on a page I admin at, CHENfirmed :)
I really liked this story :)
It was short, sweet, and cute!
Please don't take my comments as hate comments ><
Since this is your first story I want to give you some tips ^^
(I'm not a pro just ignore this if you want)
-- Build up the story a little more. Because the story was so concise, the plot line got me confused
-- At Chapter 12 I got confused >< The other couple gets introduced abruptly. I didn't see the connection :/

But other than that, it was great :D
I love how you incorporated their new album into this!!
Great job for your first fic~