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December 24

 

12:00 P.M.

 

I breathed a sigh of contentment as I looked at the newly wrapped present I have for her. Inside it contains the only thing she likes in the entire world. Another present I have for her comes from the bottom of my heart, or hypothalamus, whatever comes first.

 

 

I went straight to the closest jewelry store I found. I eyed every set of collection and the infinite pile of precious gems. I searched for the best gem that suits his personality, his style, his passion, his dreams. After a tedious conversation with the lady in charge, I bought the appropriate gem for him, sealed in a box and a card.

 

 

 

blue for Chen's POV

gray for Song Hara's POV

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sarang_kpop1015 #1
Chapter 13: I read this whole fic today ><
I found out from your friend Jann Persigas!
I've also promoted your story on a page I admin at, CHENfirmed :)
I really liked this story :)
It was short, sweet, and cute!
Please don't take my comments as hate comments ><
Since this is your first story I want to give you some tips ^^
(I'm not a pro just ignore this if you want)
-- Build up the story a little more. Because the story was so concise, the plot line got me confused
-- At Chapter 12 I got confused >< The other couple gets introduced abruptly. I didn't see the connection :/

But other than that, it was great :D
I love how you incorporated their new album into this!!
Great job for your first fic~
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