Under The Rain

Identitas
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6. Under The Rain

 

 

We stand there for a couple of minutes. It’s the first time in my life that I’m actually being quite rebel. I mean, I’ve never had experienced something like getting all wet in a rainy day or just counter the basics “Don’t do” of every education.

Lay gets up and looks at me. We’re totally soaked and he doesn’t seem to care about it. I just hope my brothers won’t see me like this, if they do, they’ll tell mother and then … I’ll get scolded for getting wet in the rain. I think they’re just used to the innocent Cho Hee, the girl who just follow orders, is friendly, isn’t a trouble maker, is a role model student …

“Why are you here under the rain?” He asks. I gasp at him. Why in the world is he asking that if he’s under the rain himself?

“Why are you under the rain?” I ask him the same while emphasizing the word “you”. I really don’t understand his reasons.

“I like rain. I like to feel the rain dropping in my skin. The rain is a good memory to me,” he says. Now I know he has a logical reason for being under the rain.

“Oh,” my mind is in a blank state as I don’t remember anything else to say.

“You shouldn’t be here. You’ll catch a cold,” he says with a warm smile.

“So will you!” I protest back and he chuckles.

He throws a caring yet playful glance at me, “I bet your mother won’t be that happy when she’ll see you like this.” I gasp once again. He’s judging me for being all wet, but he’s exactly like me.

“I don’t think you’re in position to say that,” I raise an eye brow in a victory movement and look at his clothes.

“I’m already an adult, which means I can take care of myself,” he strikes back, still with that glance. I feel offended.

“Excuse me, are you saying I’m a kid and I can’t take care of myself?” I don’t understand why he’s saying that. He had just met me.

I turn around and walk towards the stairs. He follows me. Now we’re not under the rain anymore. “I didn’t mean that.” he excuses himself.

Suddenly I sneeze and it makes me a bit dizzy for a few seconds.

“I told you, you would catch a cold!” he remarks in a teasing way. That’s when I realize, it’s the first time we actually tease each other. He’s been teasing me for the past minutes and I don’t find it annoying at all. It’s the opposite, I like it though.

He giggles. Right after he’s finished with teasing me, he sneezes too. Bless you karma! Now it’s my time to tease. I laugh and make fun of him.

“I told you, you would catch a cold!” I repeat what he said to me. He smiles in a defeated way. “Ha Ha! I won!” I throw my fists in the air and celebrate my winning in the argument we were having.

However he doesn’t seem willing to lose the argument yet. “And I thought I was speaking to a teenager.”

I’m fast at answering back “I’m seventeen. I am a teenager, almost adult,” I point out that there’s not much time left for me to be a teenager. In a matter of three years I’ll be officially an adult. By that time, Lay will be twenty-four years old. Now that I see it clearly, we don’t have a big . It’s only four years of difference.

“You better go home. Take a hot shower and wear warm clothes. You’ll catch a b

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11-4-14: I'm sorry to inform you that i'm going on hiatus. I'll try to surpass the writer's block and busy school life. sorry. :c

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lovidovi #1
Chapter 9: Hey! Lay's asking her to meet on rooftop! Hahaa, he's feeling guilty.
Looks like the date will be... I don't know, let's see what will happen :)
lovidovi #2
Chapter 6: From the perspective of an amateur writer like me, I think your grammar is good :) It's easy to read. I'm drowned in the flow of the story. I did think it'll be slightly angsty from the impression of your description and foreword. What I get now is that this is seems kind of slice of life. I enjoyed it so far, by the way :)

After I read it until here, I think I really loves her brothers. Turns out that Chung Hee cares for her, even though he seems cold at first.
Cho Hee's crush for Lay made her waiting in the rain for him, ahh so cute! I wonder what will happen between them next. Also her close friendship with Luhan, they are really close, right? They had just met in the morning, but they meet again in the night :)
Well, I gotta continue later!
lovidovi #3
Chapter 3: So far, we know about Cho Hee's family situation, her friend and the new guy. Hmm, why did Luhan do that to her? Mystery, mystery... I love Cho Hee and Chung Ho interaction, such adorable siblings :)
relau99 #4
Chapter 6: It's interesting! I smell fluff on this chapter hahaha
Great job ^^
relau99 #5
Hey! I can't read much right now so I only read until chapter 2. I can't say anything about the plot just yet because of it but I really like your writing style.
I'll try to read more later ^^
RiRiCassiEXOtic
#6
Chapter 4: Lay with curly hair?? aww i can't wait for their next meeting!!!
off to read the next chapter :D
XingCloud
#7
omg! i need an update!!!!
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#8
Chapter 12: awww The Jinri-Chunghee romance is so cute :3
I finally want to see how the date goes! >.<
personally, I would have made Chohee go barefooted because it's kinda romantic but I don't know if this plays in the summer so I guess it's good she put on a pair of vans anyway ^^

really liking this, update soon ♡