FIRST DATE WITH “STALKERS” part 2

A deal for Love

hi guys ^^

whaaa! I"m so sorry for the late update.

My schedule is jammed-packed and I think school want's to blow our brains out. XD

 

I change the TITLE, by the way. From I'M A GENIE AND A SLAVE?!? to A DEAL FOR LOVE. It just came to my mind while

staring at the screen and I like the second title more than the first. 

I hope you like it more too ^^

 

I also made changes in Foreward, if you haven't notice yet, here's it:

FROM

 

Can a genie keep all her master wish?

 

Can a master fall for his slave?

 

Can a sister break her twin’s heart?

 

Can a best friend betray his promise?

 

Can Wefall inlove?

 

TO

 

Can a deal save my sister love?

 

When Choi Hawon messes up her twin's much awaited meet-up with her ultimate crush she ends up on a deal she

can never escape. Can she save her sister love when a whole bunch of unexpected things and emotion keeps on

rising?

 

Dont worry, the story still the same. ^^

 

Okay, this a/n is going longer and longer. :P 

should we do some recap?

oh yeah!

 

   Hawon and hyowon are twins, Minhwan is their cousin

 

·         HOngki, Jaejin are Hyowon’s schoolmate

 

·         Seunghyun, JOnghun are Hawon’s schoolmate

 

·         Hawon messes up her sister first date with Hongki making her his slave and genie at the same time so Hyo can date Hongki again

 

Hongki and Hyowon have their "first date" finally, Mihwan, Hawon and Jaejin decided to stalk them but ended up getting caught..

 

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NORMAL

 

“How many times do I have to tell you it’s not MY idea!” Hawon whined.

 

“yah! Unnie you’re so loud. Haven’t you learned your lesson?”  Hyo teases her sister kneeling, hands up on the air, on the corner of

the movie house together with Minhwan and Jaejin.

 

“Blame this ing chicken next to me!”

 

“Yah! Why me?!? You’re the excited one. You even drag me like a dog just to follow them..

 

And I’m pretty sure you’re the one who hit hyung a while ago!” Minhwan screech out.

 

Hongki hold his upon remembering the pain he receives a while ago then give a deathly glare to Hawon who

is pouncing Minhwan’s head

 

I swear if glare could kill I’m a dead meat by now! And I never thought that Chickens are talkative!” Hawon thought.

 

“Hyowonaaa~ Hyung~” Minhwan pouts.

 

“What?” Hyowon still try’s to show her irritation to the three. Hongki seems like uninterested on what’s going on and keep on

looking to his watch.

 

 

“Can we stand up now? It’s really quite embarrassing now, people are staring” He pleaded with his aegyo.

 

“Before anything else…” Hawon interrupted.“

 

 

Who is this RETARD?” Hawon hands went busy shoving Jaejin face every second as he keeps on staring to her really close.

 

“Yah! Jaejin what are you doing?” Hongki speak up.

 

“She looks exactly the same as her” he keeps on staring to Hawon, his index finger pointing to Hyo.

 

“It’s because there twins, pabo.. Now, get your goaty face out of her face” Hongki commanded. Immediately Jaejin stops his

weird doings then sits normally as if he done nothing.

 

“Tha-henk Yo-uh!” Hawon said thanks with full of air in it. Come on, I know you got something evil for me, Hawon thought.

 

 

HYowon POV

 

I can’t believe they stalk us!  What a first-date crashers!

 

 “Am I some kind of girls who would HOngki on our first date? Hmm.  Maybe. Heeh,

 

Okay, seriously those three are really something. I understand that they only want to assure something and by something I don’t

even have the slightest idea on that something. Hmm. How do I put this? Ahm. It’s just something.

 

 

Is it confusing? Aarrr. Just don’t mind whatever illogical words that is leaking out from my mouth.

 

 

Oppa and I are now in some Italian restaurant, flipping menu pages to buy something delicious. Oppa seems like bored as he

scans through the menu, maybe he doesn’t want Italian foods. The so-called three stalkers went home an hour ago for their

presence is not needed here. 

 

Well, I hope they really do go home cause if I ever see  just a little existence even just a silhouette of those three scumbags

I’m gonna  pull their souls and tie it up.

 

 

“Can I take you order mam?” the tall somewhat masculine waiter, which I believe have a lot of charisma in him, asked out.

 

“ One  Aglio e olio please” I let out a smile upon giving the menu to him.

 

“What about you oppa? “  His still flipping the menu pages, his back leaning on the chair, his face seems bored.

 

‘Am I that boring for him?

 

Did I just did something wrong?

 

“oppa. Are you okay? “Worried, I’m asked him out, maybe his not feeling that well.

 

“Should we go home?” all of a sudden he stop scanning the menus and look at me with a straight-faced.

 

“One Spaghetti alla puttanesca please” ignoring my question he handed the menu to the waiter.

 

“Will that be all sir?” the charismatic waiter asked out.

 

“yes” oppa answered.

 

“oppa are you really all right? Are you hurt somewhere? Tired? Is there something bothering you? ” I asked out again to be sure.

 

“I’m all right”  he plainly answered.

 

“One  Aglio e olio  for the beautiful miss and one Spaghetti alla puttanesca for the young man” the waiter put down the plates.

Wow, that was fast.

 

We are about to start eating and finally have some good, memorable getting-to-know-me more part (basically, I know anything

about him so no need for his getting-to-know-him part. aheeh,) when his phone suddenly rings.

 

Arrr. Wrong timing!

Don’t worry Hyowon it will just take some several minutes.

 

 

“yeoboseyo?” Oppa’s face tense up after some seconds.

 

“ne, I’ll be there within 10minutes” Wait, did he just say I’ll be there?!?  He put his phone down and then looks at me.

 

 

“I need to go, something unexpected happens” without even waiting for my reply he stands up and leave immeadiately.

 

 

“b-b-but!...” I stand up, stretch my right hand but stop halfway.

 

 

Disappointed I sit down. “You haven’t eaten dinner yet. “ I sighed while staring at the food in front of me.

 

 

10pm @ Hyowon’s house

 

NOBODY POV [NORMAL]

 

The main door of Choi’s house open widely, revealing the tired looking Hyowon.

 

“So hows the date? Was it fun?” Hawon asks upon knowing her sister arrived.  She’s lying at the sofa reading some random

books of her again.

 

“It’s was great! I really have fun after you guys stop stalking us. I never want this day to end.”  Hyowon tried to say with

all excitement.

 

“Really? Then why is your seems like you lost to a lottery?” Hawon trying to caught whatever her sister is hiding. In terms of lying

Hyo is one of the worst.

 

“me? I just suddenly felt tired cause his not with me, his source of my energy now, you know. Without him I feel like a

drainedvegetable”

Hyo still tries to lie. But she knows that Hawon would never buy on what she’s saying.

 She wants to prove that she is right and her sister is wrong. She wants to prove that HOngki is not a Jerk like her sister is trying to point out.

 

 

“Oh, I see” Hawon replied out, she doesn’t want to upset her sister more so she just pretends to believe what her sister just said.

She doesn’t know what really happen and what makes her sister tell a lie, whatever it is she assures that she will get back to that jerk. 

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Very Short and Lame Chapter :|

I, the author, promise to improved the writings on the next chapter.  bow! XD

Sincerely,

the author.

 

I hope you still enjoy this chapter though. And hey, anyone knows the charismatic waiter? ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

 

THE DORKIES SAY HI!

 

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TripleS_VIP
#1
Chapter 17: Hello there,I just found this fic and I'll ask you to please keep going with this story,it's really good and I hope you'll keep writing~ FIGHTING!
FtCnFan6226
#2
Chapter 16: Don't close this story!! It's fantastic, one of the first stories I read on AFF. I just hope you'll update more.. ^^
akared #3
Chapter 16: no!!!!!!
don't close your story!
I really love your story!!!
never mind, just take your time to write and upload..
please....^___^
Blackrose8 #4
Chapter 16: New reader here :)
I really like your story, it would be such a waste to close it.
Please don't do it and keep on writing? :)
jaceBlue #5
Oh yes! you updated!! Jonghoon being so sweet is such a good sight~
akared #6
this chapter is soooo sweet!!!!!!!
FtCnFan6226
#7
Aren't you gonna update soon? Please do so! Nice fanfic, btw.
zackkira
#8
i love this!!
akared #9
update soon!!!!!!!! this story is so addicting!!!!!!!
musicstar_22525 #10
@JAceblue i updated too long right? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

dont worry I;m saving something for Jonghoon XD