Chapter 16: hi! i would like to note that hermaphrodite is actually the very wrong word to considering your description of it being "someone who has both es." its considered a slur (, , n***a etc) because of the fact that most people assume that it is someone who has both es, but i digress. Just pointing it out.
Heya , can you please do me a review ^^ would you mind doing a review for my foreword too. Btw it contain rated m . This fanfic is currently in complete. I accept harsh criticism so don't worry . I won't be offended ^^
Chapter 19: Thanks for spending so much time on the my review. ^^ hehe I know its bad, just wanted to see where i can improve. I'm terrible at writing god I dont know how to let the story flow, I really tried but guss it didnt work out *sigh* oh well thx anyways. I wasnt really think much when I wrote it, something out of bordern. haiz terrible terrible terrible><
Chapter 14: I've read my review! Thank you once again for taking the trouble to read and review it! Yes, and thirteen is an awesome number, lol.
oh, but one more thing. I never explained this or pointed it out in the author's notes, but did you realize something about the time space continum thing and Tao being the one who did it? I'm not really sure if anyone actually understood that reference, now that i think of it.
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