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E and Ahna's Review Shop [[OPEN]]

We don't exactly have any rules for anyone to follow except that the STORY MUST BE YOURS. And credit for a critique is also something we would want to see on the forward of your story or at least somewhere where it's easy to spot. If you request us to critique a second time, but did not credit us the previous time, we will not critique your story again and you will be put on our blacklist.

We won't be critiquing on the presentation. If you have a poster and a background, your story just appeals to the eye better. (E: and the fact that we actually don't give two rats' on your presentation.)

Also, please subscribe just so you will be alerted if your story has been reviewed or not.

NOTICE; Because of her busy life, Ahna are adding a new rule that says she will review one story at a time. 

Ahna and E will delete the previous reviews on our list, so send in your story!

 

Meet the reviewers: 

E: (HIATUS)

Critiques based mostly on characters. She still pays great attention to everything else, but her greatest concern is character. She tends to think extremely on the symbolism and message in stories. Style is also important to her and she'll critique whether or not in her opinion if it's an effective style or not. Grammar does not bother her much unless she absolutely has a hard time reading it.

E IS ON A ONE WEEK HIATUS DUE TO COLLEGE TESTS COMING UP. SHE WILL RETURN ON TUESDAY OR MONDAY. SO RESERVATIONS CAN BE MADE IF YOU ARE FINE WITH THE DELAYS.
 

Currently Reviewing 

A Repulsive Love by GreenALiveTnS

Almost or Finally by FanyJess

A Father's Touch by valoweec

Fragility by Chenyeol

Re-Remembering by Ajitofu

Insanely Insane by kim_kyuhyunELF13

The Biggest Fool

Dark Ties

 

 

 

Ahna: (CLOSED)

Critiques mostly on plot and storyline. She tends to find grammar and spelling mistakes easily and will point them out to the author. If she has a hard time reading your story, she will ask you for a brief outline to go by while she reads; don't expect her review to be nice. Enjoys stories with messages in it, but if it's not easy to realize, she won't pick it up. She hates cliché type of stories where she is able to guess what happens next (and usually she's right). Also, enjoys very descriptive stories.

Currently Reviewing

A Bond of Blood by eraser

Mixing with Darkness by flamzfox

Curione: (BUSY - can request but reviews will be slow)

Critiques on grammar, flow and style. Since reviews are supposed improve, she will become a picky little miser and attack your grammar mercilessly. However, grammar usage usually does not affect her enjoyment level of the story as long as it serves the purpose of the story and there isn't an entire lack of it. She's also picky about linkages in the story and becomes extremely critical when the plot doesn't add up. On the other hand her suspension of disbelief is very high so she'll take whatever weird plot devices you can throw at her as long as it's written well.

Currently Reviewing

EXO-B.A.P.: Ghost-Busters Edition by iLuvYesung

Songs We Wrote by Icha_Sya

The Charged by deductionmaniac 

↳ ⋮ ▎「幸せ委員会 」` The Happy Committee ♡ by onigirisama

Getting Even by Miawitch_1002

EXO B.A.P.: Ghost Busters Edition (last 2 chapters) by iLuvYesung

Escape Hell by ShineexoWorld

Unravelling Threads by OfficiaLinspirit

ECO-Idols by GwagHyeYu

Origami by dluisnothere

I'm Here for You by kissme_matoki

The Imposter by littlemisshappyify

 

You may choose one of the reviewers to take a look at your story (if they have a closed mark on them, do not request them)

 

How Your Reviews Look:

Title: We review the title briefly before and after the story has been read and it's relation.

Character(s): The characters control the plot; you need a good character to make a good story.

Plot: We judge originality and how well thought out it is; if you can make a complete cliché storyline, but still ‘wow’ us.

Grammar: We will judge on grammar by how you spell words, how clear sentences are, and if anything makes any sense at all.

Style: The reason we judge on style is to see if your style of writing is too exaggerated or too complicated to understand. 

 

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curionenene
Curione has started work which is the reason for the long lull in replies. Stuff will get done soon!

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deductionmaniac
#1
hi would u mind reviewing this one shot for me? here's the link http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/956279/first-love-angst-dara-donghae-oneshot-sad-kimjinwoo-jinwoodara

thanks!
chodoiino #2
Chapter 16: hi! i would like to note that hermaphrodite is actually the very wrong word to considering your description of it being "someone who has both es." its considered a slur (, , n***a etc) because of the fact that most people assume that it is someone who has both es, but i digress. Just pointing it out.
illumina_dain #3
Chapter 1: Hi, would you mind giving review to my story?
Here is the link
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/706970/

It's an on-going story and I accept harsh review. It is rated M because of language, not (not yet)
Thank you
Miawitch_1002 #4
can i submit another fic to be reviewed? i'm pleased with ur reviews because its honest ^^
Boshaft_Crow
#5
Chapter 1: Hello, can you review this oneshot please ? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/644818/happily-ever-after-oneshot-romance-exo-chen
Thank you :)
GybzyXiao
#6
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/670879/crooked-road-2ne1-bigbang-skydragon-exo-luhan-sehun-baekhyun

Heya , can you please do me a review ^^ would you mind doing a review for my foreword too. Btw it contain rated m . This fanfic is currently in complete. I accept harsh criticism so don't worry . I won't be offended ^^
vvipforseungri
#7
Chapter 3: YO. THIS ISH BE SEEMINGLY FANTASTIC. Do you know how hard it is to find quality review shops tho.

What say you about fics not on AFF? If it's a no, I wouldn't mind a review on: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/141622/1.
ShineexoWorld #8
Chapter 19: Thanks for spending so much time on the my review. ^^ hehe I know its bad, just wanted to see where i can improve. I'm terrible at writing god I dont know how to let the story flow, I really tried but guss it didnt work out *sigh* oh well thx anyways. I wasnt really think much when I wrote it, something out of bordern. haiz terrible terrible terrible><
iLuvYesung
#9
Chapter 14: I've read my review! Thank you once again for taking the trouble to read and review it! Yes, and thirteen is an awesome number, lol.

oh, but one more thing. I never explained this or pointed it out in the author's notes, but did you realize something about the time space continum thing and Tao being the one who did it? I'm not really sure if anyone actually understood that reference, now that i think of it.