[HIATUS] UnBreakable

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Sisters Shim Jungmi and Youngmi are newly-made Guardian Angels. All they wanted to do was relax in Heaven until they were given their first assignment. They figured that it would take at least another week before their first assignment is given to them. They were WRONG. God immediately calls them up after the Wing Fitting Ceremony and Angelic Gifts Presentation and tells them to go back to Earth. Both girls are shocked by their sudden assignment: find six boys who call themselves B.A.P. and guide them to Heaven before they die in 90 days. With one condition; DON'T FALL IN LOVE. Who would've thought that God had a sense of humor? These boys end up being the WORST type of people for the two angels to deal with: GANG MEMBERS. These boys instantly fall for their grace and beauty. However, what happens when the two angels fall for the boys, as well, within the 90 days? Will God take Jungmi and Youngmi back or grant B.A.P. access into Heaven? Read and subscribe to find out! :)

 

WARNING!!!

There are Christian principles infused into this story.

If you are offended by these principles in any way, PLEASE DO NOT READ.

This story is Christian-based and biased.

If you DO continue reading, thank you so much! I truly appreciate it! :)

nasomi2011

 

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Foreword

         

> Shim Jungmi (Guardian Angel)

Age: 19

Birthday: November 13, 1993 - Deathdate: December 26, 2012

Type of Death: Burned in a housefire

Basic Powers: Flying, Telepathy, Telekinesis

Special Power: Fire

Personality/Background:

- Strong leader. As the elder of the two sisters, it's her natural responsibility to take care of her younger sister.

- Cold and distant. A complete contrast to her special power. She's used to loving people from a distance, especially her parents. She began taking care of Youngmi since the age of 14.

- Intelligent. She earned straight A's while in high school and her first year of college, earning her the title of "The Smart One" from her friends and her sister's friends.

- Protective. Youngmi's many suitors knew Jungmi as a hard, but fair, older sister and often tried to get into her good books, if that was possible. Jungmi's biggest fear is to lose her one and only sister.

- Extremely patient, kind, and giving. Perhaps overly so. While she was human, she was very popular because of her natural ability to be herself around people.

 

         

> Shim Youngmi (Guardian Angel)

Age: 17

Birthday: September 16, 1995 - Deathdate: December 26, 2012

Type of Death: Burned in a housefire

Basic Powers: Flying, Aura-Sense, Aura-Shift

Special Power: Frost

Personality/Background:

- Cute and bubbly. Full of aegyo, Youngmi can sway her sister with just a simple pout. She had the same effect on the boys in her high school.

- Loving and carefree. Her greatest desire is to have a family, to learn, live, and love. In high school, she didn't care about getting good grades. She wanted to live life as a teenager and therefore, did so, under the watchful eye of Jungmi, of course. She is a little child at heart.

- Quick to anger, quick to forgive others. She is very expressive about everything, it could be said that she's outspoken or even bipolar. Youngmi once aspired to be an actress, but threw that dream aside when she discovered her talent in dancing during high school. She can be careless sometimes, and a little too wild, but she has a sweet and innocent flair about her. She is truly naive to the dirt of the world.

- Dependent. Youngmi loves Jungmi dearly and doesn't think she would ever survive, life nor death, without her sister. She wouldn't admit it, but she relies heavily on her sister and her biggest fear is that Jungmi would leave her and never return.

 

    

> Bang Yongguk

Age: 22

Birthday: March 31, 1990 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Rough, yet soft leader. Yongguk can be very demanding and harsh with s because treats the members as if they were is his own children. He had a very troubling childhood, but he's trying to put it behind him by doing the one thing he enjoys: rapping.

- Kind to women. Especially pretty women. He loves women with morals and who are upstanding in their values.

- Has a temper. Especially towards s

- Gifted in composing and producing. Being the sole breadwinner of the members, he runs a night club funded by the company he wants sponsoring him one day, TS Entertainment. Though he was very bright in high school, he felt that he needed to give up college to take care of the members. He hates the thought of death before fulfilling one's dreams.

 

  

> Kim Himchan

Age: 22

Birthday: April 19, 1990 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Byuntae (*ert). But, Himchan's probably the kindest byuntae anyone could meet.

- Has a soft spot for motherly women. He received a lot of love from his mother and grandmother, until his grandmother died in her sleep and his mother committed suicide shortly after.

- Driven and goal-oriented. He's in his senior year in college, majoring in Traditional Korean Music, which he has a secret passion for. He known for being an "Instrumental Ulzzang." He hopes to one day achieve his dream of fusing salmunori and hip hop music to the stage.

- Loves skinship and aegyo. Due to his mother's love, he also gives and receives love in the same way his mother did. He is known as the motherly figure in the B.A.P. household.

 

    

> Jung Daehyun

Age: 19

Birthday: June 28, 1993 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Extremely introverted with a rough exterior. Daehyun wears a mask on the lower half of his face most of the time, making him look menacing and intimidating at first glance. However, out of all the guys in B.A.P., he is the only one who doesn't seem to fit in. He's too quiet and sensitive to be a part of that type of gang. But, having him in the gang "balances things out," as Yongguk would often say.

- Pacifist. He doesn't like violence, but would stoop to that point if someone pissed him off enough. Even then, he would try to resort to a much more peaceful confrontation.

- Loves to sing. If there was one thing he was proud of in his life, it would be his singing voice, a gift from his mother. He doesn't do this in front of the boys, but Youngjae and Himchan often catch him humming to himself when he is alone.

- Indifferent to love. He often has a "no care" attitude in regards to relationships, but if he IS in one, he would cherish it. It's difficult for him to trust people, especially when his father abandoned him right after his mother died when he was ten. His grandparents took care of him, but even they couldn't open up his heart like his mother could. In a way, he's almost like Jungmi, cold and distant with room in his heart for only certain people in his life.

- He dislikes surprises and he doesn't react well to them.

    

> Yoo Youngjae

Age: 18

Birthday: January 24, 1994 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Brain. Youngjae has a big brain. He's very good with numbers and handling out-of-control situations. Besides Daehyun, Youngjae is the most level-headed.

- Hates fighting. While Daehyun is a pacifist, Youngjae would use violence if it was absolutely necessary.

- Image conscious. He hates it when the members about his baby fat, which he vowed to lose before going to college. He is very sensitive when Himchan brings up his elementary school days. 

- He enjoys singing, just like Daehyun.

- Go-getter. He wouldn't hesitate to "go for it." He likes to take initiative in almost everything: from girls, to school, and even performing on stage, which he does at Yongguk's night club whenever he has the chance. Though he is very gentlemanly and mannerful, he can be very rude to people who displease him.

    

> Moon Jongup

Age: 17

Birthday: February 6, 1995 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Bright and innocent. Jongup has a pure heart and a heart-warming smile that always reaches his eyes. He genuinely cares for the people in his life. He has a very optimistic mindset and rarely lets Yongguk's moodiness or Himchan's bipolarity get in the way of his happiness.

- Dark side. When he was a young child, he had a younger brother who drowned at the bottom of a lake. Since then, he's been afraid to go into large bodies of water. And he's often overprotective of Zelo because his brother would've been his age if he was still alive. Also, his usually loving parents abandoned him just weeks before Christmas.

- Workout fanatic. He is called "Moontos" by the other members of B.A.P. because his arms are cut like cheetos. He views working out as the perfect stress reliever.

    

> Zelo (Choi Junhong)

Age: 16

Birthday: October 15, 1996 - Proposed Deathdate: March 29, 2013

Personality/Background:

- Adorable maknae. Zelo has boundless aegyo and his smile alone makes noonas sigh left and right. Despite all of this, Zelo is still a child and still has much to learn. He's only in high school and yet, his popularity with the opposite has risen even higher than his own hyung, Himchan.

- Desire to be like Yongguk. He has a lot of energy, but he spends it going to the night club with Yongguk. Though Yongguk disapproves of this, he noticed that Zelo is more focused in school if he went to the night club with him. Because his own older brother doesn't give a damn about him, he loves being in a gang that cares for his well-being. He has a secret talent for rapping.

 

PLEASE DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!!!

IMMEDIATE ACTION WILL BE TAKEN IF THERE ARE PLAGIARIZERS!!!

EVERYTHING IN THIS STORY IS PURELY CREATIVE.

I WOULD APPRECIATE IT IF MY READERS WOULD JUST READ THIS STORY AND ENJOY ITS CONTENTS.

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COOPERATION!

As always,

nasomi2011

nasomi2011
There has been a triple update! Start reading from Chapter 15! 8.18.15, 1:51 am

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purpleiris
#1
Chapter 17: jungmi aaaaaa.... what happen witchu?
pigzcanfly #2
Chapter 3: whaa jongup is a nice guy... to be honest i think he's my favorite in bap because he seems really nice in an otherworldly way.
daehyun's kind of strange, like he's trying to be a cold guy, but he's nice to jongup, so that's good.
portrayal of characters is excellent, expecting great things!
keep it up!
pinkpanther1017
#3
Chapter 14: Knowing that Hyosung has a gentle and kind aura from Youngmi's gift eases me because I like it when characters who come off as antagonistic have a deeper layer than just being a b.itchy person. Plus I also like the real Hyosung and think she's the sweetest with a beautiful gummy smile. I was hoping we would get more on her in this chapter, but I will look forward to it in your future updates.

What I didn't like was Jungmi and Youngmi's reaction to her staying. I get it, they don't like her. Part of it has to do with the way Hyosung was disrespectful to them on their first meeting and how she was quick to blame Jungmi for Daehyun's injury (which I'm not quite sure how Hyosung is able to fix - is she EMT certified or something?) and part of it is jealousy of her being so familiar with the boys, but it is after all B.A.P's home that they are staying at and it is ultimately them who decides who can and cannot stay in their home. Jungmi came off kind of, I don't know how to describe it, but sort of snooty and ungrateful for barging out of the discussion without hearing the reasoning behind Hyosung's stay.

It's my hope that the three girls eventually become good friends because, well girl power, and I like seeing "enemies" join forces and become friends, but I know that can't always happen and I'm sure you have a plan of action already regarding the relationship between Hyosung and the sisters, so I'll patiently wait to see how the story unfolds :) (Also anticipating the mission progressing ^_^ )
purpleiris
#4
Chapter 14: what???! yongguk jinja..... huaaaa long time no update then... :(
sungkyunnie
#5
Aww I really enjoyed this.
pinkpanther1017
#6
Chapter 13: So I guess they didn't get the hanboks for New Years in the end after all that drama. But what were Jongup and Youngmi doing up so early at 6 AM? And whoa, Jongup has such a scary side to him when it comes to his parents. I guess he's in the anger stage of grief. And then Yongguk giving him that ultimatum...well considering that it is Jongup's house, telling him to get over it or leave doesn't sound right to me, but at least that got him to realize how his behavior was affecting everyone (though I completely understand from Jongup's POV on why he was acting that way).

I'm curious as to who this Noona is and wow what a cliffhanger. Will Jungmi confess to Daehyun that she can read his thoughts? That's really going to make him wary around her.
purpleiris
#7
Chapter 13: Woa... finally its updated... The last part, I wanna read the next chap soon, Wondering what will jungmi say. Kyaaaa
purpleiris
#8
Chapter 13: I'll be waiting for you Authornim... Fighting!!!
Smilone #9
Chapter 13: We will definitely be waiting. Please take all the time you need and good luck in everything you do =)