Deceitful Love

Description

A teenage girl with six brothers who are not at all what they seem. Half of them anyways. Three turned and three more to go. On the side of good or bad is yet to be known. One thing is for sure, competition is in the air for the throne. Who will win? And who will die? Another question arises, who will win her heart? A Bride is rare to find. What is more rare is having two mens' heart beat for one girl. Who will she choose? Worse yet, which was bred from true love? And which was bred from a love of lies? Last to change, but not the least. The most frightening of all, the two boys better run. She knows not but she knows she will find out. Following her footsteps are her equally as frightening brothers. Together, they fight for the throne and the key to their father and mother. Will they succeed? Or fail in their mission?

Foreword

Characters:

Park SunHwa: She's your average everyday girl. Somewhat shy but not to the point where she rarely talks. She let's no one insult her, or her family and friends, and get away with it. Justice will be served whether it's coming from her fist or words. She adores and looks up to her brothers because they were her role models through out life. She's also the youngest out of the seven kids. She can be an airhead at times but when she wants to be, she's sharp and very intelligent. She'll leave you speechless.

Park Kris: The eldest of the kids. He's the most caring but can be brutally cold. He's protective of his younger siblings so he won't hesistate to throw punches when someone insults his family. He's spent his whole life looking after the others so he sometimes act like a second umma.

Park LuHan: He has the face of an angel but he can turn into the devil when intimidated. Despite that, he's the most  considerate of all the kids but is a womanizer at times. He, Chen, and Lay, likes to go "Girl Hunting". SunHwa calls them three the "Three Womanizer Musketeers." But he's the one who finds a way to get SunHwa alone with her dates because Chen is a creeper and an over protective oppa when it comes to SunHwa.

Park XuiMin: XuiMin is the smarty pants and the serious one. He's usually always reading books and studying who knows what besides school. He's always seems calm and cool so little things bother him, but when they're directed to his family, like Kris, he won't hesistate to throw punches.

Park Lay: Mr. Womanizer. He's the sweetest of them all and attracts girls to him like he were honey and they were bees. He's like Romeo and knows what words makes a girl melt. He has a soft heart but it froze over when a girl stole his heart and crushed it into tiny pieces. He still acts the same but is a little bit colder than before. The only girl he's sweet with is his dongsaeng SunHwa.

Park Chen: The youngest of the Three Womanizer Musketeers, (Their nickname given to them by SunHwa.) but not the youngest of the boys. Chen is carefree, sarcastic, the joker, and the gutsy one of the family. He's willing to try crazy things even though it could kill him. He has a mild temper. He acts sweet and sarcastic to his oppenent to annoy them then beats the crap out of them. He's also the most protective of SunHwa out of his hyungs. He has his reason for being SunHwa's creeper on her dates.

Park Tao: The maknae of the boys. He has a short temper but doesn't feel insulted when someone insults him. In fact, he only smirks and walks off but when it's about his family, he let's all hell loose. He's the most aggressive but is also the most kindest when he wants to show it. He doesn't smile or talk much but when he's with family, he's all smiles.

A/N: Hey! Yeah I know, I at describing my characters ._.; Dun kill me! T^T But hey, I tried right? xD Better description in the story >.> But just a heads up, I might delete this story if I see that it's not going anywhere with subbies and comments or I might leave it on here anyways but eh, I'm still debating ._.; I'll have an update each week :P Hoping that I will be able too! >.< So please read and give me info on how I'm doing! ^-^ Subbies and Comments are welcomed! :D Whether they're criticism or not, I'll take them! ^-^ But bash about my writing style and I'll bash you out and report you =-= You've been warned. +_+ 

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peonelopie4 #1
Chapter 10: Nice so far but the font is kind of distracting when reading the story.