Watching Over You

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Would Seunghyun make it in time? Would Jiyong's spirit finally cross over? Chapter 16 is up!

Decided to put a warning for extreme sadness upon a readers request. Please comment if you liked it or not. It would mean the world the me! 

My first fanfic. I'm planning to add more chapters. Thank you for your comments!

Present reality will be angsty. But memories and flashbacks should be sweet, fun and romantic. Hot and y should also be there so watch out and please enjoy!

Disclaimer: I do not own the people in the story

Warning: boyxboy

 

Thoughts on Chapter 16 Sometimes sweet, sometimes bitter

Was the ending too predictable?

Too cliche?

Too common?

Need your comments, please let me know!

Thank you!!!!

 

P.S. If anyone who has a kind heart can make me a proper description for this chapter? 

Or someone who has a heart of gold that can donate an image for the story?

THANK YOU!

 

Foreword

 

 

As a spirit, Jiyong watches over Seunghyun as he copes with his death. He is unable to leave the earth unless Seunghyun lets him go.

Seunghyun doesn't let him leave.

 

nightempress
Am finally back after the holidays. Planning to post an update sometime soon. It's a little late so please accept my greetings for now. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

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Danees #1
Chapter 17: Am so glad Jiyong is not dead. So he just hospitalised from the fall right? Thank you!
noahikarie #2
Great pic authornim.. Tbh I know this fic since last year but I avoided to read since I didn't like angst story.. But after almost one year avoiding, today I embraced myself to read this amazing fic and the result was I soaked my pillow.. Such a great fic authornim.. TT.. Thanks for happy ending after extremelly sadness they have through out..
Marvy15 #3
Chapter 17: Omg omg omg this fic made me cry till my pillow was soaked:( it's written so well and the emotions are so raw. I read it all in a day and I really have no words. I really miss BIGBANG now:(
born8887 #4
Chapter 10: This chapter is.... *ugly cry*
Dragon63 #5
Chapter 17: god!!! i cried so many times while reading this..... it's so sadddd :( :(
i loved it so much though...... but i think im gonna jump off a bridge after finishing crying... :P
thank you for this amazing fanfic!! i need to read happier stuff now... excuse me :P :P
Aisyah134 #6
Chapter 17: Great fic..makes me cried not just once but many times..this fic is full of sadness,it's so sad make me want to die reading it..thanks for writing gal..freaking great fic
xxxibgtttop
#7
Chapter 17: And now I can never see Bigbang stage as same again esp GD on stage.. OhMyGoooosh this fic hit me hard.. I need to move on too.. I need to read a loooots of gtop fluff till I'm sick of it to get over this fic..
xxxibgtttop
#8
OhMyGoooosh I've never cried all along I read a fic BUT your fic, give out sooo much emotion that I couldn't take it then I cried.. Such a beautiful story.. Aaaand thank God for the ending, make the worth of tears.. ㅠㅠ
tintatalk #9
Chapter 17: This was really beautiful. I got confused though about the beginning chapters and how they professed their love for each other and stuff but then later on we found out that no one knew besides YB. I'm still a little confused about that all but besides that ughghg, this was really gorgeous. Thank you for such a wonderful story. I think my favourite chapter was definitely the one with Ji trying to find the ring. (the was hella like... *pulls shirt-neck* phhhf) It was really sad but really cute at the same time how dedicated Jiyong was in finding it - also finding out about how precious the ring was just touched me so much. Seung loves Ji so much and ugh, just broke my heart really when he said, 'I wish you would take more care of it...' and then thought he was the cause of Jiyong 'jumping' to his death. ARGH. Killer. (killed me really)

The hurtful comments by all the netizens and irl people and what they did just made me so mad and like. If gtop ever decided to come out or whatever it angers me so much that, that could even be a possible reaction? Like I just. kkk when I read stories like this, angst where it's them against the world, it makes me so angry at people like why. they just love each other. why do you even care. asfdasdfdfswdf ugh

I'm guessing Ji woke up from a coma in the end? Which makes me happy lol bc im bad with angst so this twist just made me smile. I hope they're happy together!! Oh wait, is it.. are those beginning chapters about them coming out and doing interviews and kissing each other - is that after ji wakes up then? i'm confused and i have no idea ok i will stop lol.

anyway thank you for this gorgeous story. I know it's been a few years but. <3 really! <333 I loved it.