BOOK TWO: When each heart was crashed and burned

The Tangled of Lives
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San Francisco,  2014

It is a windy night but she is standing in the railing while watching the colorful lights on the bridge opposite their house. The view reminds her of what had happened six years ago on the nice fancy apartment of Lee Hyukjae.

Another river. Another city. Another acquaintance.

Suddenly a pair of warm arms envelop her from behind and equally familiar lips kiss the side of her head.

“One penny for every thought.”

She smiles and take one of the hands and kisses the back of it softly.  “You never give me one penny, Oppa.”

The man chuckles and puts his head on her left shoulder.  “Because you’re worth more than even a million.”

She giggles and turns her body around so her eyes can catch his.  “You should stop buying me stuffs, Oppa. Really.”

He smiles, then take the loose hair of hers and puts it back behind her left ear. “I can’t help it. I have saving a lot in years we’re separated because I wanted you to have it.”

She scoots closer and peeks on his lips softly. “I only want you, Oppa. I will still be with you even if we have to live on the slums and eat those greasy foods.”

Her eyes glints so he knows she is teasing him but he can not stand to retort. “Yah, maybe we should try that once, since you’ve wanted it so much.”

“Oppa!!!”

He laughs when she playfully punches him.

Then they hear the wailed baby from the room upstairs. She looks at

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missywell
Book Two would start sometimes after Book One with some changes of their relationship. But don't worry, the friendships stay in.

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Va_asianloverz
#1
Chapter 1: update soon please
dinadomino #2
Chapter 3: this chapter is so great!! its heating up the story..
HeRShEly #3
Chapter 17: Pls ont kill him off in the end> < shim changmin deserves another love!!
pollydimples
#4
Chapter 17: T___T
The sad life of Shim Changmin :(

But, wait! Wookie & Youngie already an item? Did I miss something here? *sorry ... I'll read all chaps again then*
raisin
#5
Chapter 17: I don't know if I should make a long and boring comment since this is my very first comment for this story ... or not? LOL, I forgot.

let's just go straight to the point.
I don't ship seokyu here, honestly saying. oh well, of course I ship them, how can I not ship them? but I ship changseo more here and that's not because the changseo feels that has been overwhelming me for the past months.
I feel bad for changmin in this story. he deserves more attention and chance from joohyun. well she did give him a chance and he didn't waste it, unlike his stupid cousin. maybe that's why I don't really ship seokyu here.
jinnie #6
Chapter 17: kyu has come back, so more dramas will com too right? u know i usually don't like so much complication but here it's not just so tangled, but also realy touched my hearrt, so how can i don't luv it ? ^^ hope to see more soon, chingu-ah :x
FolderName
#7
omg how can the update dont appear in my subscription? anyway another couple? i cant guess anymore
xuanmiin #8
Really bringing me on a journey, thank you ^^ Normally i despise these entanglement things, normally i dislike love triangles. And this happens to be an n-gon, I lost track of how many people were caught in all this :x Despite my bias against entanglements though, I'm liking your piece because you have the underlying tension without the typical bimbo drama. Love how the characters all have their own set of dilemmas, their own baggage to deal with, and their undying concern for those around them.
You do handle complications well, much to your credit.
And I have to say that I enjoy the occasional cameos of Hyohyuk <3 And i'm hoping for a straight Soowook ending, and that's not only because Ryeowook is clear about what he wants :x I honestly think that both Kyuhyun and Changmin have about as legitimate claims as the other, to put it bluntly, to Seohyun.
houtafifistories #9
good start ;)
houtafifistories #10
good star ;)