Chapter 8: If being smitten is something that you are allowed to feel

The Tangled of Lives
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Somewhere in Seoul Streets, 2008

 

“It’s getting chilly here.”

“Don’t keep complaining, Oppa.”

Sooyoung smacked Changmin’s head playfully.

“Ouch! That’s hurt, Youngie.”

“You’re such a Baby, Oppa! Don’t you feel ashamed of yourself? Hyunnie here doesn’t complain on anything and she is actually the Baby of this group!”

Changmin glanced at Joohyun through the front mirror. She was clearly amused with his interaction with Sooyoung. But who did not? He just hoped she did not pulling any wrong assumption of the nature of their relationship.

“Its okay, Unnie.”

“Well, they should be finished soon.”

The three of them looked at the scene on the terrace of Yoona’s house with different feelings.

*****

“I am okay, Oppa. Just get back there. You know Min-Oppa would be freeze to death if you leave him too long in the car.”

Kyuhyun shook his head in exasperation.

“He should be able to handle the claustrophobia soon. It will be a hinder for him when he graduates.”

Yoona smiled while glanced at the car again.

“Sometimes you can’t choose what you’re born with, Oppa.”

Kyuhyun sighed. He took the hair that was out on her eyes and put it back behind her ear.

“I know.” He paused, “I am sorry, Yoong.”

Yoona just kept smiling.

“Don’t be, Oppa. It never has been your fault.”

She sneaked again to the car, focusing her sight to one particular person.

“Go, you still have a long way home. “

Kyuhyun followed her sight and frowned.

“Yoong....”

“I have to go inside, Oppa. It’s getting chilly here.”

He gave up on pursuing his curiosity that Yoona was actually not as hyper as she seemed.

“Goodnight.” He kissed her forehead and walked back to the car.

Yoona nodded and then waved at the other three.  Sooyoung immediately waved back, Changmin nodded and smiled, while Joohyun took some seconds before bowed.

She was sure the younger girl’s eyes were sad. Oh, pumpkin, don’t be. You don’t know how smitten he is with you. I hope you can give him a chance. He deserved to be happy.

*****

Changmin glanced at Joohyun who was obvious that she was clearly sad upon seeing the on-going couple stuffs at the terrace.  Then on the rear of his eye he saw Sooyoung was looking back at him. His eyes caught hers and he smiled softly. I’m okay.

To tell the truth, he was always feeling alright when he looked at Sooyoung’s caring eyes. It was like that when they were 9 and 10 and it was still like that when they were 19 and 20. And secretly he was hoping that it would still be like that when they would be 29 and 30. He just could not picture his life without her.

“Sorry guys”

Kyuhyun slipped back to his driver’s seat.

“Its okay, Oppa.”

Everybody looked at the youngest of them who was smiling in understanding. “Is Yoona-Unnie feeling better?”

Kyuhyun glanced at her from the mirror and smiled back. “She is. Don’t worry. She always likes that when her rebel side appeared. “He the machine and pulled his car out of Yoona’s front yard. “Sadly, I am not as good as Jong to read the signs.”

Changmin patted his back. “No one does, Kyu.”

His breathing was heavy as a painful memory flashed in his mind. “Thanks.”

Joohyun looked at Sooyoung with confused eyes. The older girl pulled a pen and a notebook.  She wrote something and passed it to Joohyun.

‘Jonghyun-Oppa was Yoona’s former fiancée and

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missywell
Book Two would start sometimes after Book One with some changes of their relationship. But don't worry, the friendships stay in.

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Va_asianloverz
#1
Chapter 1: update soon please
dinadomino #2
Chapter 3: this chapter is so great!! its heating up the story..
HeRShEly #3
Chapter 17: Pls ont kill him off in the end> < shim changmin deserves another love!!
pollydimples
#4
Chapter 17: T___T
The sad life of Shim Changmin :(

But, wait! Wookie & Youngie already an item? Did I miss something here? *sorry ... I'll read all chaps again then*
raisin
#5
Chapter 17: I don't know if I should make a long and boring comment since this is my very first comment for this story ... or not? LOL, I forgot.

let's just go straight to the point.
I don't ship seokyu here, honestly saying. oh well, of course I ship them, how can I not ship them? but I ship changseo more here and that's not because the changseo feels that has been overwhelming me for the past months.
I feel bad for changmin in this story. he deserves more attention and chance from joohyun. well she did give him a chance and he didn't waste it, unlike his stupid cousin. maybe that's why I don't really ship seokyu here.
jinnie #6
Chapter 17: kyu has come back, so more dramas will com too right? u know i usually don't like so much complication but here it's not just so tangled, but also realy touched my hearrt, so how can i don't luv it ? ^^ hope to see more soon, chingu-ah :x
FolderName
#7
omg how can the update dont appear in my subscription? anyway another couple? i cant guess anymore
xuanmiin #8
Really bringing me on a journey, thank you ^^ Normally i despise these entanglement things, normally i dislike love triangles. And this happens to be an n-gon, I lost track of how many people were caught in all this :x Despite my bias against entanglements though, I'm liking your piece because you have the underlying tension without the typical bimbo drama. Love how the characters all have their own set of dilemmas, their own baggage to deal with, and their undying concern for those around them.
You do handle complications well, much to your credit.
And I have to say that I enjoy the occasional cameos of Hyohyuk <3 And i'm hoping for a straight Soowook ending, and that's not only because Ryeowook is clear about what he wants :x I honestly think that both Kyuhyun and Changmin have about as legitimate claims as the other, to put it bluntly, to Seohyun.
houtafifistories #9
good start ;)
houtafifistories #10
good star ;)