62ND ENTRY - _MISS_RIGHT_

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entry no: 62
date submitted:  22/22/16
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_MISS_RIGHT_

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THE ACCUSED FATE



I was lost in the sea of nameless faces
Desperate was I to find a boat
I sought and sought, but found no graces
Instead a storm, and took me away without a note

 

Then one day, I found you
In the same boat as I
Ironic, is it not? That the day went anew
When we heard each other's tireless cries

 

The storm ceased
The rain froze
The waves calmed
And the sea hummed

 

Birds in the sky
The sun at the side
Rising beneath the waves
Nevermore to the heavens a slave

 

Among the crowd you were odd
You, who had a face and a name
Who had a heart and a warm facade
In you do I find no shame

 

But those words I shortly regret
Like fire you burn my being
Even though it's hard to forget
I have to let you go

 

I really thought you were "the one"
The one to save me from this unwanted sea
Turned out you were not the answer
My savior I have yet to see

 

Instantly I was back again
In the lonely sea, under the raging storm
My hatred to the sky I complain
Since I, myself, am sick to conform

 

My fury, my anger
Unto the sea I pour out
To the sky I point my finger
My mind nevermore knows doubt

 

Where would my years go
My youth, its doom awaits
Still I am stuck in the earth below
All because of this damned, accursed fate.



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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^